ite man,
10 lines,
both spit in 30 mins,
no dr,
no crew,
no hate,
no feeding,
no freeposting.
............good luck.........pz
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ite man,
10 lines,
both spit in 30 mins,
no dr,
no crew,
no hate,
no feeding,
no freeposting.
............good luck.........pz
Checking in man.......................................good luck blah.........................................pz
Check.............................
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dishing him the loss,
Fuck this bitch no thriller...spits with most of his shit as filler,
even if you were Cam'ron...you still coudn't be a Killah,
fuck a rematch..merk wise with one battle no need for the sequal,
cause i'd be in all sorts of Kaos if i got beat by two people,
this bitches looses will start dropping..harder than prices in clearence,
K's quite the magicion..see his wins get nicked like disapearence,
take the advice of your sig..your dope but nuttin here mite aswel comit suicide,
^....that line was all filler...and sorry^i had to slip in a lie,
the opposite to left is the only way you can ever w*rite*,
face it sparking up l's...was your closest to being el*lite*.
........................pz
Olie Don't lie.. u hanging out next to K.. man u hooked on tha L's
Witch name do u wanta go by?
..Couldn't win.. If u cooked up some spells
Introduce u to yourself..wack..fuck it..ya face is already against it
And You better not blink..
..Cuz this fag'll be kOed in an instant
I'll humilliate .:K:. so bad.. I bet tha bitch will get a different user
U can't mess with time..
Merking you in tha past, present and future
I think u hold tha record..of most herbs battled..it would be 40 times
If life was based on quality..
..Shit..U'd be dead.. according to rhymes
Kid ya mute..don't even respond..cuz I know u got nothing good to say
He'll be tha LAST to admit it..
But its obvious you spell wacK with a K
His name use to be olie dogg
Check his custom title, sig, and name for full efect of punches
You can't change that shit till this is finished...
G/Luck... and no herb votes..
explanations...........................line 4...his alais is kaos theory,
.....................good luck.............................................. ..pz
well i can but wint.....................lol...................... ..dnt woz....................by tha way i was OLI_DOGG...........but w/eva nice................pz
word alright this was a mad close battles.....i was actually feelin K on this one a bit more...i'll go through it.....wise ways nice verse lost flow at some points i felt and the structure was prolly the reason for this....As far as personals go very nice you took tha category but the punch es i felt were a little lackin compared to what they have been in the past...shit happens no hate....K nice verse good punches i think you can very hard good luck with the rest of the poll votes.......check it though you need to dig deeper on the personals....both y'all hit this up no hate 1.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109886
aight here it is:
K
Fuck this bitch no thriller...spits with most of his shit as filler,
even if you were Cam'ron...you still coudn't be a Killah,
^^ok opener, not hard hitter but not too bad
fuck a rematch..merk wise with one battle no need for the sequal,
cause i'd be in all sorts of Kaos if i got beat by two people,
^^like this, funny, not really a punch but good
this bitches looses will start dropping..harder than prices in clearence,
K's quite the magicion..see his wins get nicked like disapearence,
^^HA second line was good
take the advice of your sig..your dope but nuttin here mite aswel comit suicide,
^....that line was all filler...and sorry^i had to slip in a lie,
^^plain mean LOL
the opposite to left is the only way you can ever w*rite*,
face it sparking up l's...was your closest to being el*lite*.
^nice closer
and Wise
Olie Don't lie.. u hanging out next to K.. man u hooked on tha L's
Witch name do u wanta go by?
^nice opener, good rhyme scheme, experience shows here
..Couldn't win.. If u cooked up some spells
Introduce u to yourself..wack..fuck it..ya face is already against it
And You better not blink..
..Cuz this fag'll be kOed in an instant
^^ok , rhyme structure is good but prolly difficult for most to follow
I'll humilliate .:K:. so bad.. I bet tha bitch will get a different user
U can't mess with time..
Merking you in tha past, present and future
^^again, nice rhymin/structure. I hope most peeps recognize cuz they might not
I think u hold tha record..of most herbs battled..it would be 40 times
If life was based on quality..
..Shit..U'd be dead.. according to rhymes
^ok but not great
Kid ya mute..don't even respond..cuz I know u got nothing good to say
He'll be tha LAST to admit it..
But its obvious you spell wacK with a K
^^WEAK closer
this was close, because there were weak points in both and few strong punches. I have to go with Wise on this because the rhyme structure was good/different and the battle was pretty much even aside from that. Good drop by both, elevate, keep it up yall pz
ite coo............................................... .................................................. .....................................uppin(1)..... ........pz
whoaaaaa ^^ wa he said....niceee battle....but k getz it 4 wises structure....
i noe itz not supposed 2 really matter...but yall waz tied in everytin but dat....so vote goez 2 k becuz of wayz lak of structure.....
vote: .:K:.....nice battle.....really got notin more 2 day....
Uhh... look in elite frontlines...
Look at how they structure...
Mine would be even if did structure like his..
That shouldn't matter ne ways
#1..
it shud if it seperates the win...................but w/eva........................................nice battle wise...................uppin(2)....thx 4 the votes remember to leave links need credits............pz
My structure was actually better than yours...
Tha people that said i had bad structure didn't know
What they were talking about...
Tha only vet that voted said that my structure was better...
Your structure was all over tha place and stretched in places
no hate... just telling it like it is...
#2
w/eva man like i sed let pll vote man....i aint the tipe to break your shit down so dnt break mine down............................................js t let pll vote.,..............pz
K got the flow, easier to read and follow. I give Wise the personals. Both had some but Wises hit harder. K got the punches, some were nice. Both had some played lines but ehh shit happens. Overall I giove the win to K. Nice drops from both
Can both of you please drop an honest vote here. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109881
Yeah this should of been put in frontlines...
Most of these people don't know what they talking about
Please don't vote if you a herb
#3
lmfa.............you were the one who sed to put it here man.........................................ha.... ..uppin(id say bout 4)................thx to every1 who voted and feedback...................pz
kk..................this was close
but wise wayz....i dnt like ya flow............it strays at times and goes reall bad....................punches was straight...........structure was aight
.:K:. .......flow was nice and punches hit harder......descent vocab.......structure was coo
descent battle fellas but .:K:. took it...
vote= .:K:.
peace
This was a very nice battle.
WordPlay: K
personals: Wise
punches: Wise
multis: K
Flow: K
Final Vote: K
I think K took this battle I Liked his Multis:
"Fuck this bitch no thriller...spits with most of his shit as filler,
even if you were Cam'ron...you still coudn't be a Killah,"
peace.
ok really close battle.....but the break down.....
WordPlay: K
personals: Wise ways
punches: Wise ways
multis: K
Flow: mmmmmmmmmmm i would have to say both....
structuer:wise ways
my vote-WISE WAYS
k upped 6 times. closed.
Word.
-Axe