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aight..
rules:
no bitin
no feedin
no recyclin
no hate votes/favour votes/crew votes
no d/r votes
10-20 lines max
5 votes to win
3-0 for KO
no swayyin
due in half an hour (3:15)
no "u spit first rule" juss have verse up by due date
GL and bring heat..
sounds good this is my checkin and i always bring the heat =)
nice...check in.......................................
this "lyricist" we watchin fall is an example of how to choke//
the "insane" became the weak and now hes a fuckin livin "joke"//(talkin bout his name in his sig)
round and round yah head spinnin leavin a gleemly frown//
u think I hate u? its best yah move away from mc town//
hey dawg I heard yah mans talkin sweet they stated//
"hes really good from the back" yeh tru ur *UnderRated*//
u say they still dont know but they bout to find out//
how the weakest can get weaker and what this games all about//
its juss a lesson from the vetran in this time ur diminished//
and b4 u even started in this game u litteraly finished//
could only do 10 cu i gotta jet
since ur late I think its only fair u cut ur verse down to 10 too either that or when I get back give me more time to add more to ma verse which one u wanna do?
harder to throw punches cause your avy's hand in his pockets all meek..
that bullshit saying in your sig is no excuse for your losing streak...
you used to prostitue your game ILLicitly hit this bitch with the knuckle..
X'd his game got him the name and now when he spits profain makes me chuckle..
parental and mental advisory suggested cause the kid spits straight whack...
couldn't drop ill if tried to keep my pace and had a heart attack...
You lost 5-1 to se7en claimed you didn't drop your best shit..just more excuses..
Kids 16 can't even see rated R movies yet he claims he's dope and produces..(check profile)
THis kids falling as if i cut the back of his achilles tendon can't stand on his own..
went to scarbourough fair to find this bitch..suprise he no showed....
you gave me 30 i took 24.....thats seems right to me son......
uppin xx2 for votes good luck son nice battle...i was on time so just keep your ten word.....
aight coo nice verse lets get votes goin..........
Xplicit you came mad whack. Ya rhymes were played, and shit. Anything bout clowns and jokers is mad played agains anyone from IJL.
Under you came ok, not ya best but you took this. You had some dop metas and punches. Personals were lacxkin. Not bad tho
Win-Under
wether clowns n jokes are played or not if u didnt notice it was from his name so wether its played or not its a punch..live wit it...1-0 under...uppin
k both had wak structures both abit streched,
punches goes to t-u-r just hit harder,
he also took complexctiy....and flow,
nice spit frm both really but x you gota work on structure and punches man.
.........................not a bad battle overall-underated..............pz
Whack vote... gone.
-Axe
aight nice battle didnt feel both openers i liked xplicits finisher.....xplicit had the better structure but overall i tink underated took this 1.......his punches hit harder he had better flow and wordplay.....xplicit improve on these and u cud of won this battle keep elevatin but ma vote goes 2 under as he had the better flow and punches
i cud crush u to death using my body and my mind, ur like a re-recoarding video sum1 hit him with the rewind. sick of chumps cumming on these sittes thinking they can battle, give this nigger a dummy and a rattle, let him loose and feed him to the cattle. sup u can't take wot i gotta give, like tupac ses were all jus dying to live. if i take u out and no one see's it'l be like murder she wrote, im nasty sick in the head sum1 needs to give me the antidote. i will bury u in the dirt cus i don't like ur style, ur shit make no sense y dont u chill it for a while
to battle me chump i'll freestlye ur balls of u nigger bitch
spray me with cotton candy, im sliding my hand up her skirt, she gettin horny and she's randy. none of u white or black bitches can handle me cus im an outlaw and a rebel! while my beats on the beatbox i see u all raising the trebel. so ugly and hairy he's drowning in stubble, i'll bury his head 6ft under rubble, im trapped inside my unburstable bubble! ahhhhh eat me alive u dead beats! i can whip u silly from ur head to your feet. they call me gangster number 3, cus the pac, then biggie and in cums me! to incredible to mc, my shit drives u mental, it's ok soon it's goin continental. u americans dig sum1 wiv grey hair, u call us english unfair, all u do is see r sexy body's and stare, till i beat anuva man down with the angle grinder i stole of a chair! freeeeeeeeze!!!!!!!!! did i hear a nigger caugh, sum 1 take a hold of my shit and send it off BANG!!!!!
UR WHACK IF I NEW HOW TO BATTLE I'D BEAT U :shoot:
word to the freeposter.........^^^^figure it out and we'll freestyle topical i wil fuckin rip you have a nice day uppin xxxx3333333333
no more uppid dawg u took it 3-0 KO its in the rules so this is closed underrated took it
good battle
EzZ