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Rules - Infinite Lines.....
Verse due at 1:00pm or face Disqualification....
No biting or verse Flipping....
Check N asap...
Checking N.... This time is Eastern Standard TIme... For example, it is 10:40am now, so the verse are due in 3 hours and 30 minutes......
Because he is in school....
Quit-hidding...Your who crew is accussed of dick-riding+
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109746
Better quit-writing...Ur 'seen as pussy' like clit-spying+
'Jerkin dicks in prison' is da only way a 'beatin-a-guy'+
U'll probably back out this battle...Retreating-is-wise+
Ur conceeded-with-lies, think U can handle someone-of-my-stature?+
I'll continue to pierce your chest until lungs-are-raptured+
Want me to Ghost write for ya? U'll probably post-the-verse-backwards+
Im Killin ya crews foundation, like a leg that's completely factured+
Dynasty soldiers suck 'erect dicks' to make them 'stand at attention'+
Merke Me? Ur plan is suspended, Ur wak never to have a hand in decisions+
Upping for your verse.....
Ur verse was due an hour ago... Where U at................................................ .................................................. ..........................
yo i just got here and its only 12;40 out here. Calm the fuck down and give me thirty.
I know ya been anxious for this slaughter to commence,
but id put five on ya verse and it still wouldn't make sense,
look at ya crew dog, ill B2K and merk ya whole entire squad,
sweep the streetz and put you prostitutes out of a fuckin job,
count ya teeth now so you can find em all when im through,
cause im takin ya whole grill out like niggas at barbeque's,
i could let you key infinite lines and blaze ya wit one,
cause ya chances of winnin' are less than second to none,
now the streetz ain't sayin to much of shit no more,
cause dicks in they mouth's stoppin em from settlin the score,
Ill spit my shit on ya face so ya can see my words clearly,
and have you cower down, provin now that ya fear me.
Haha.. this is good.. I don't know what to think here. DaKilla, I've read ur verse before and nothing was ever near being that good. I almost wonder if someone else wrote that for you and u just posted. But I'll assume it's yours... even with that.. I say antonio had you. no hate<. antonio just had much harder punches, but urs were still good. creativity is about a tie, originality same. flow both good. Yea.. harder punches by Ant won it cause everything else was close.
vote-ant
My bad man.. I was thinking u were someone else^^ Da killa. Dont know why. Ant still had you, but I just wanted to say that little piece.
Uppin For Votes.don't Sleep On This Yall Get Em In.
aight imma have to go with da lilla kid on this one
reasons:
da killa kid had a constant flow that sounded good all the way through, unlike antonia banderas, u just lost me man
but da killa kid did not have a better closer than antonio
none had a reallu hard hitting puch
so the reason i chose da killa kid, is that a verse that sounds good all the way through beats a verse that looses u but then has a good closer
fuck it, my fault man i forgot i was suppose to have 100 posts, a mod can take this post off if the feel the need to
ANT got this, he came with a better battle oriented verse punch wise. da killa i felt ya flow a little and ya had a couple aight disses but nuthin stood out or was witty enuff to get my vote.this actually made me chuckle!...lol....vote-antQuote:
I'll continue to pierce your chest until lungs-are-raptured+
Want me to Ghost write for ya? U'll probably post-the-verse-backwards+
peep my battle with desert thanks.
Uppin This Shit Yo Get The Votes In!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
The reason that Da Killa Kid gets my vote is because his punches were a lil better and the structure n flow was as well... they were both pretty basic but i thought Antonias verse was very basic and the wordplay was kinda played... i jus wasnt feelin Antonias verse AT ALL....
so my vote is
DAKILLAKID
But i cant poll vote,so...
Uppin Lets Do This Shit. Wake The Fuck Up And Do What Ya Gotta Do.
Uppin # 2... Im up (2-0) Upping for more honest votes.... We will also vote on your battles.... Drop a link and vote......
Vote - For whoever Antonio Banderas battled. Don't drop your links in EI ever again.
This battle was close, but...
Antonio: Ur verse was good, but u need to work on da flow. Okay punches, a couple of times u really stung em, but it wasn't consistent. Nice wordplay, okay metas. Keep elevatin'.
Da Killa Kid: Ur verse was good too. Pretty good flow and all. Good punches, some of his were stronger but ur's were more consistent. Nice wordplay, better metas. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Da_Killa_Kid
Uppin # 3 for some explained votes..... No more one line votes please!!!!
Also, drop your links and we will vote on your battles honestly
Quit-hidding...Your who crew is accussed of dick-riding+
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109746
Better quit-writing...Ur 'seen as pussy' like clit-spying+
I thought that was Dynasty Soldiers, oh well, kinda played
'Jerkin dicks in prison' is da only way a 'beatin-a-guy'+
U'll probably back out this battle...Retreating-is-wise+
fo real, get rid of the +s, second line is nice, first is played
Ur conceeded-with-lies, think U can handle someone-of-my-stature?+
I'll continue to pierce your chest until lungs-are-raptured+
nice, multi too
Want me to Ghost write for ya? U'll probably post-the-verse-backwards+
Im Killin ya crews foundation, like a leg that's completely factured+
ehhh... kinda weak
Dynasty soldiers suck 'erect dicks' to make them 'stand at attention'+
Merke Me? Ur plan is suspended, Ur wak never to have a hand in decisions+
ok, not great, but decent
Antonio wins this, he had a more original verse with nicer punches and personals. Nota a badd battle, but theres always room for improvement.
Please drop an honest vote here guys, I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110310
I know ya been anxious for this slaughter to commence,
but id put five on ya verse and it still wouldn't make sense,
doesnt rhyme, weak...
look at ya crew dog, ill B2K and merk ya whole entire squad,
sweep the streetz and put you prostitutes out of a fuckin job,
played sex shit again
count ya teeth now so you can find em all when im through,
cause im takin ya whole grill out like niggas at barbeque's,
heard that one sumwhere befo, ok
i could let you key infinite lines and blaze ya wit one,
cause ya chances of winnin' are less than second to none,
very played
now the streetz ain't sayin to much of shit no more,
cause dicks in they mouth's stoppin em from settlin the score,
yawn...played
Ill spit my shit on ya face so ya can see my words clearly,
and have you cower down, provin now that ya fear me.
weak attempt
Uppin People Make It Happen
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Uppin # 4 for some explained and fair votes......................
Drop a link and we will both vote on your battles fairly :)
Originality - Banderas.. cos it was personal.. v.few played concepts
Punches - Banderas.. consistant.. all hard punches start to finish
Personals - Banderas.. obviously wrote for his opponent.. Kid was kinda general
Flow - Both
VoTe = Banderas
Nice battle.. felt Banderas was alot more personal tho.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
Uppin for more votes...
Please drop honest votes here...
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584
Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803
Come on people stop sleeping and get the votes in.
Uppin
Quit-hidding...Your who crew is accussed of dick-riding+
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109746
Better quit-writing...Ur 'seen as pussy' like clit-spying+
descent opener wit cool punch
'Jerkin dicks in prison' is da only way a 'beatin-a-guy'+
U'll probably back out this battle...Retreating-is-wise+
first line sucked...Second line is cool
Ur conceeded-with-lies, think U can handle someone-of-my-stature?+
I'll continue to pierce your chest until lungs-are-raptured+
Want me to Ghost write for ya? U'll probably post-the-verse-backwards+
Im Killin ya crews foundation, like a leg that's completely factured+
solid lines....Good work on these
Dynasty soldiers suck 'erect dicks' to make them 'stand at attention'+
Merke Me? Ur plan is suspended, Ur wak never to have a hand in decisions+
okay finish...Could have been better
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I know ya been anxious for this slaughter to commence,
but id put five on ya verse and it still wouldn't make sense,
First line is nice.... But the second line is played...Great opener
look at ya crew dog, ill B2K and merk ya whole entire squad,
sweep the streetz and put you prostitutes out of a fuckin job,
count ya teeth now so you can find em all when im through,
cause im takin ya whole grill out like niggas at barbeque's,
nice 2 verse... not really a hard hittin punch
i could let you key infinite lines and blaze ya wit one,
cause ya chances of winnin' are less than second to none,
good verse
now the streetz ain't sayin to much of shit no more,
cause dicks in they mouth's stoppin em from settlin the score,
Ill spit my shit on ya face so ya can see my words clearly,
and have you cower down, provin now that ya fear me.
solid closing lines
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Punches - I think Antonio Banderas had the better punches in this battle
Worplay - The WORDPLAY is tied....(I think it is tied because both verses came hard with wordplay
Flow - Da_Killa_Kid one in the flow department because antonio's used multies that took away from some of the flow
Multi - Antonio Banderas clearly had better multies
Structure - Structure is tied (Both people laid down good structure)
Creativity - Creavity was hard to determine...I thought that this was a TIE also
I vote Antonio Banderas in this battle. Both MCs came pretty nice though
nice. both did good. overall though, Ant got this one, KID came basic with no personals except for the crew line and it was only decent. Ant just showed up with more and matched each punch with better connections. nice flow from both, that goes for structure to. but to be honest, Ant just overall hit harder, he came pretty nice actually, keep at it.
vote- Ant
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vote/Banderas
Punches: Banderas came more consistently, and used less played shit
Multis: Banderas had more multis for sure
Wordplay: About even, maybe a little to Da_Killa_Kid
Flow: Da_Killa_Kid
Personals: Banderas for sure, said above, Banderas came to battle Killa_Kid, while Kid's was more general