10 lines
you spit first
no hate/crew/dr/etc
Check in when you see this and good luck
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10 lines
you spit first
no hate/crew/dr/etc
Check in when you see this and good luck
checkin in........................................
i hope lyric aint checkin into my hotel...
needs to be checking into an institution cause he's mental...
not mental enough to kick my ass,
but crazy enough to look in the mirror and punch the glass.
he picks up the shattered pieces of the mirror,
cutting at his skull causing a brain tumor.
now he's laying on the ground bleeding out the ears,
as will i when i hear his comback lines that'll take him years...
to type,
don't pick him to win, his shit ain't even ripe.
This kid types his name twice makes me think I'm seein double
Whacknees and crap mixed to make matt_matt's verse rubble
Kid flows weak, I dun even need to throw a punch
Cause he sucks, even my filler makes your face flush
This dude reppin LA tryin ta be the next big MC
Actuall, this kids sick, but its more like fuckin VD
Close this battle fast and save matt_matt the embarassment
Cause not even could figure out what his lyrics meant
Battles over like a heres a line that resembles your spit
uh...you.......um....suck and smell like poo...I mean shit
you see your family is the one seeing double
you seeing the first part, and you mother seeing the other
i aint trying to be the next big MC, or lryicist
im just trying to ad a cist to your name lyric, o wait i just did
the cist infecting you, adding a giant lump within your skin
you need to save yourself the embarassment, and get that shit removed by a surgeon
i cant reccomend you a doctor becuase i've never had one
but if i could i'd tell him your main symptoms are jacked lyrics from the phone
your own mom on the other line, you can hear me bust in your own fucking car
my cum on her chest resembling the dot dot dots in your final bar
both verse's looked like shit, but lyric had the betta punches. Matt ya needa diss ya opponent more not a tell a story bout his ass. vote-lyric and lyric get ready fo a rematch dawg, ya caught me on my first day back on this board and i was rusty. so u got lucky by beatin me---
one
WTF MAN? You can only post one verse dawg. sheeesh
im new to this, geesh, why dont u match my last 10 lines then? dont be affraid.
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Originally Posted by matt_matt
wtf dawg u cant go two times...............thats dumbshit.........yo anyways...........lyric got this shit....but im going to read the shit more closely ok...
both verse's looked like shit, but lyric had the betta punches. Matt ya needa diss ya opponent more not a tell a story bout his ass. vote-lyric and lyric get ready fo a rematch dawg, ya caught me on my first day back on this board and i was rusty. so u got lucky by beatin me---
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109536
uppin this for the second time. Please drop an honest one here. Thanks, its appreciated by both of us
Uppin #3. Leave a link and an honest vote and we'll hit your link up guaranteed
whatever man, if u want a rematch sometime, let me know
Uppin # 4....................Please hit this up...
Mat- You need PUNCHES badly. Go to the wackness emergency center. Your verse was just rhyming. No comlex shit at all
Lyric- You got the right idea. Your punches were still weak tho. Try to be more clever in your shit. Use harsh personals. Shit that would get ya teeth knocked out if you said to sombody. lol
OVERALL- Lyric got this. He had punches in his verse. Elevation needed tho
Thanks for the honest opinions everyone. Last uppin. Drop on here and leave your link
Yo, the previous voters pretty much explained it all, matt_matt, you were telling to much of a story, and that doesnt always work, in fact hardly ever does..focus more on the other factors..
Lyric, your spit looked nice compared to matt_matt, but there's always room for improvement. Enjoyed your stuff though.
Vote - Lryic
pretty one sided battle.....plus the kid dropped twice.....i guess thats why they call him matt matt.....he does everything twice like he got some kind of stutter or something.....anyway punches got to lyric by far nice punches....some were just ok but for the most part i was feeling it...matt matt up your vocab you are too elementary work on wordplay i was feelin this battle was way one sided......peace to the middle east