GameTime vs. B.I.Detained

yup yup

10-12 lines i guess
due tomorrow or whenever we can..i wont no show so dont worry..
uhh..no hate, d/r, crew votes

no feeding...

yeah..basically...fat rematch will take place...lets do the damn thing...

In 4 the Win---
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yup...

I'll spit tomorrow.......................

Transfrom from Brix to BI..still havent turned to much
a fresh new start...
.......its still hard to get the old Brix off Emerge's nuts
yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5
Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry
skeptics in ya alias..cant define ya sense of words
so try a new one and convey my verse into yours
trouble lurkes..you've walked into an inaudible section
good to provide an explanation..

Quote:

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Originally Posted by B.I.Detained

In..
Expects Rejection<<

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..Ok..

Brix completed this Game before..I no-showed to win the Fight
yea its True I won last time..but I got ma Sis' to Ghost Write
thats Right..feminine Traits were Used to Rewind Game's Time..
b/coz if Regret came in Years..he'd be Sentenced Line for Line
my oh My!!..Rocks Nas as his Avater..thinkin he'd Rise like Yeast
but ya cunt be Down any Further..so ya mite as well Rock Kelis
Fleece dis Obese Piece..but wen I say Fat..I mean he cant Move
..Games rhymes remain Static..so I guess he'll Stay put & Lose
Pre-writing Fool..probably been Digging up Personals Since 2003
Games whole Purpose in Life..is to say he came Close to Beating Me

game got this shit, i felt his flow and punches allot more. Bi your shit was aight u had sumwut of a flow, i just didn't see any good personals or hard punches. anyways both verses need work but my vote-game

oh wellllllllllllllllllllll i can't vote but i voted anyway...LOL

blah..uppin #1................................................ .

Aight heres the breakdown

GAMETIME

Transfrom from Brix to BI..still havent turned to much
a fresh new start...
.......its still hard to get the old Brix off Emerge's nuts
nice opener good punch
8/10

yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5
i like this alot
good punch 8/10

Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry
didnt like as much
6/10

skeptics in ya alias..cant define ya sense of words
so try a new one and convey my verse into yours
didnt like also
6/10

trouble lurkes..you've walked into an inaudible section
good to provide an explanation..
Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
In..
Expects Rejection<<
like it like it good closer
7/10

BI DETAINED

Brix completed this Game before..I no-showed to win the Fight
yea its True I won last time..but I got ma Sis' to Ghost Write
gave me a chuckle good opener
8/10

thats Right..feminine Traits were Used to Rewind Game's Time..
b/coz if Regret came in Years..he'd be Sentenced Line for Line
didnt like as much ok i guess
6/10

my oh My!!..Rocks Nas as his Avater..thinkin he'd Rise like Yeast
but ya cunt be Down any Further..so ya mite as well Rock Kelis
liked it alot
good punch 8/10

Fleece dis Obese Piece..but wen I say Fat..I mean he cant Move
..Games rhymes remain Static..so I guess he'll Stay put & Lose
ehhhh not sure about this kinda liked it and kinda didnt
7/10

Pre-writing Fool..probably been Digging up Personals Since 2003
Games whole Purpose in Life..is to say he came Close to Beating Me
lol best line of the battle greta punch great closer
10/10

Gametime-35/50
Bi Detained-39/50

good battle but Bi DeTained gets it in my opinion

hit up the battle in my sig both of you cuz this is not a hate vote
return the favor

1st uppin
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Well GameTime did Im me to vote.
So Idk if this should count.

But truthfully (and I wouldnt lie), I reallly did think Game won.

B. I.-You came sort of weak for what I usually see from you. I liked a few of the punches, but to be honest, your setups were horrible.

This-Games whole Purpose in Life..is to say he came Close to Beating Me, could have been part of a real great bar if the set up wasnt so wack. I mean, come on Brix, thats pretty elementary saying probably been Digging up Personals Since 2003. I was feeling some of your personals as well, but your verse just came off dissappointing due to the lack of good set ups.

Game-I didn't think your verse was "great' either, but I thought bars like yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5

and your last bar with the quoted In... Expects rejection were good personals as well as hard punches, and these were what got it for you. I can't say you were consistent though, cause bars like Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry aren't what I call "hard-hitting".

So overall, I dont know if this will even be counted since I admit Game asked me to vote, but like I said, truthfully, I felt that GameTime took this one.

:)

well uppin #2..........if u dont count i dont care..but i asked dude to vote honestly..peace....

IM'ing peeps to vote mayne??
fuck me!! pretty low..I know ya dint point out ya wanted personal votes
but targeting certain peeps for votes is total bullshit, if thats how ya
wanna win that go str8 ahead..but faithfully I trust young I think
so I'll accept his vote..jus dont be pullin no shit like askin for 'Honest'
votes
pz

Blah... this battle was horrible. Both of you had punches that seemed like you wrote them just because of the fact that they rhymed. But someone has to win, and GameTime JUST edged out this battle... if you can call it that.

yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5
^That personal took it. It was funny when it happened, it's still funny to this day. B.I. Detained was talking garbage about his sister ghostwriting for him... blah, so?

Vote = GameTime for a less shittier verse.

Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919

ok..take young's vote off...i barely started
talkin to him after he accepted my callout
like 3 days ago...so i said..yeah..i battled brix..u might as well vote
dont accept ..i dont care....but its honest vote i guess...
whatever..peace

uppin #4...............vote u foo's..............chea

uppin
yawn...
*how gay is this*
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You guys fuckin suck...my last uppin...please vote now u foo's

Ok, here's the breakdown:

This one was close... because both of you had weak points. Game, you seemed to be just looking to rhyme, didn't really see the point of the whole branch/heavily - peasantry 'punch'. For me it was the opener that did it... didn't really feel the verse at all to be honest

and B.I. - I know this will probably send you crying to the mods since you seem to think I am out to get you for some reason... but WTF was that verse?! I kind of understand the whole idea behind the sis/ghostwrite 'punch', but instead of a direct diss it was leaning on ya sis to hurt him.. weak. For all I know ya Sis is better than you. "Fleece dis Obese Piece' LMFAO yea sure buddy

very disappointing... again. Both of you are way better than this, and now maybe you'll go a little easier on me sometimes since you both OBVIOUSLY know the feeling when you can't come with ANYTHING dope... it happens to the best of us. word

vote - Game for making more sense and not trying to 'multi' his way to a win.

pz

go fuck yourself you bitter boy
sad sad sad sad sad boy
dont evr vote on my battles again
k!!????!!

^^LMFAO sure man whatever you want, their your shitty battles.

Transfrom from Brix to BI..still havent turned to much
a fresh new start...
.......its still hard to get the old Brix off Emerge's nuts
ok personal
yet you stay clinging..and englishman with no pride
you were an ill tag partner...
............................till u were dropped for Aisle 5
ouch....low....blow
Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry
ehh jus ok
skeptics in ya alias..cant define ya sense of words
so try a new one and convey my verse into yours
decent
trouble lurkes..you've walked into an inaudible section
good to provide an explanation..
Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
In..
Expects Rejection
dope personal and closer


Brix completed this Game before..I no-showed to win the Fight
yea its True I won last time..but I got ma Sis' to Ghost Write
punches ok, but back fires....why you gonna admit you ghostwrite? I understand your sayin Gametime got beat by ya sis too. Maybe your sis is dope?
thats Right..feminine Traits were Used to Rewind Game's Time..
b/coz if Regret came in Years..he'd be Sentenced Line for Line
dope line
my oh My!!..Rocks Nas as his Avater..thinkin he'd Rise like Yeast
but ya cunt be Down any Further..so ya mite as well Rock Kelis
ehh ok
Fleece dis Obese Piece..but wen I say Fat..I mean he cant Move
..Games rhymes remain Static..so I guess he'll Stay put & Lose
played, but ok
Pre-writing Fool..probably been Digging up Personals Since 2003
Games whole Purpose in Life..is to say he came Close to Beating Me
kinda a weak closer

Gametime takes this battle. He came with some witty personals and punches. B.I. jus didn't have his normal Creativity. Both had some whack/played lines, I'm not gonna say that yall should work on sumthin like yall are newbs or nuthincause I know both yall can come harder. Vote-GameTime

Drop an honest vote here guys. Me v. lilbreeze. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337

Breakdown:
Punches: Tie
Metas: Game
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: Tie
Disses: Game

Overall-This Battle Was Nice.Both Emcees Displayed Some Strength & Complexity In This One.Im Goin With Game Time On This One.This Battle Was Evenly Matched But His One Bar Did It For Me...

"Elite status fine?..nope..the branch weighs heavily
so regress a few steps and fall back into peasantry"

Vote-Game Time