5 - 6 bars
No dr
No crew
No bullshit
30 mins too spit after check in.
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5 - 6 bars
No dr
No crew
No bullshit
30 mins too spit after check in.
check............................................. .......................blind spit so check and get in this...........
yo blind spit check in................................................ .......................im postin mine now so u best not go off any off my rymes...
Ahh, slow it up, bout ta blow it up, ganna get this hoe st8 toed up,
but imma wait after this battle ta get in that stage,
dis fools stucture looks like he already blazed
tryin ta punch at me I aint fased actually amazed
only non nubie who writes rymes that couldn’t kill a bird caged
noticed how I be named/ gyah im down wit pac but not his song changes*,
its sill all good, but in my hood I wont deal well wit dis stanger*
dat is da way it is, when u in my mists, battling dis kid opps look what I jus did,
see sum things u cant prevent, like how I be cutting this cats head off like back in da days of the tyrant/
battling me ganna see how sweet, im nice enough ta tell this faggot not ta get h.i.v.’s
im cooler than a fuckin swing in da breeze, gyeah u getting merked by pictureperfect say cheeze
checkin in........................................
Losing to you is what I'm fuckin in denial-for,
You wont just get 'ripped', Ill fuckin tear out ya spinal-chord,
Im determined this kid doesnt havva chance,
He just came too get slaughtered, and he knew it in advance,
Itd take a "true" artist to paint ya perfect pictures,
Now here I am comparing talent wit ya worthless scriptures,
Ill fuckin murder you, cause lyrically im a pshyco,
Youd be first in ratings if only RapBattles would make a typo,
Know that Im something youll never be 'better-then'
Compared your a retarded kid and Im a fucking VETERAN,
True wins this, he had punches and metas that actually hit. Pictures lines were al;l stretched and that fucked the flow up.
PLease drop an honest vote here please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109353
Vote doesn't count... gone.
-Axe
lets get some votes on this...........uppin.............................. ...................................
Damn....
i know im in VOTS but i really gotta say
true souldjah wins it
his punches actually hit and metas were also great
couldnt of sed it better lyric but
picture did have potiential wit his multis
Whack vote also. Gone.
-Axe
some real votes that count, by sumone who knows sumin...........uppin............................. ...........
uppin..............say all u want, but get us sum votes............................................. ..........
upppin............................................ .................................................. .........
Uppin #1..........................................
Upping #2.........................................
Uppin #2..........................................
upping #4.........................................
Uppin #5..........................................
Please vote.....
Up, leave a link and Ill return an honest vote.....
yo gotta 100 posts now, so im back to poll my vote for true.
Pleas take the time to check thi out. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084
Uppin........................................
Stop sleepin on this please, leave a link and ill vote.
Ahh, slow it up, bout ta blow it up, ganna get this hoe st8 toed up,
but imma wait after this battle ta get in that stage,
^ok multis....not a punch filler.....
dis fools stucture looks like he already blazed
tryin ta punch at me I aint fased actually amazed
^this is not a punch....weak weak....
only non nubie who writes rymes that couldn’t kill a bird caged
noticed how I be named/ gyah im down wit pac but not his song changes*,
^good attempt at wordplay but it stretched your line
its sill all good, but in my hood I wont deal well wit dis stanger*
dat is da way it is, when u in my mists, battling dis kid opps look what I jus did,
^you wrote a line of filler.......
see sum things u cant prevent, like how I be cutting this cats head off like back in da days of the tyrant/
battling me ganna see how sweet, im nice enough ta tell this faggot not ta get h.i.v.’s
im cooler than a fuckin swing in da breeze, gyeah u getting merked by pictureperfect say cheeze
^well then you tried some more multis but this verse really was bad man....elevate the whackness emergency center calls....
Losing to you is what I'm fuckin in denial-for,
You wont just get 'ripped', Ill fuckin tear out ya spinal-chord,
^been done weak opener....
Im determined this kid doesnt havva chance,
He just came too get slaughtered, and he knew it in advance,
^this Ok kinda weak simplistic rhyme but meh it was ok
Itd take a "true" artist to paint ya perfect pictures,
Now here I am comparing talent wit ya worthless scriptures,
^not bad thats enough to win you the battle...two ok punches....
Ill fuckin murder you, cause lyrically im a pshyco,
Youd be first in ratings if only RapBattles would make a typo,
^hehe i like it.....
Know that Im something youll never be 'better-then'
Compared your a retarded kid and Im a fucking VETERAN,
^well thats true and its hard....
soljia wins.....
True Soldjah wins this easily....He had the basics down..Good strucure good vocab a few played punches but still effective against the picture perfect...
Picture perfect...your structure wasn't dreadful but it needs work...I like the attitude but you got to direct those punhes right at your opponent..You seem to get off topc very easily..you jumped from scenario to scenario....I think in time you'll be pretty cool if you just learn how to add a lil bit of humor to your drops while still keeping it gully.Keep elevating....Vote..True Soldjah.
Uppin.............................................
This battle was good, but...
Picture Perfect: Ur verse was aight. U tried, but I wasn't really feelin' ur verse. I guess it was cause of ur punches or ur personals, but it didn't really get at True Souldja enough. Keep elevatin'.
True Souldja: Ur verse was good. I liked ur metas, ur punches, and ur creativity. Work on ur flow a little more. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: True Souldja
True-Souldja is DQ'ed for excessive upping.