10 lines u spit first........reg. rules
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10 lines u spit first........reg. rules
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You dont want-it-with-me-kid,im stronger-with-speaches,and i'll hollow-your-knees-bitch!...I heard ya voice dawg, the probable-thesis is that you SWallowed-a-penis!/
I've been gone-as-of-recent but im here launching-at-crews, To-conquer-a-few cuz im 'back in the cut' and throwing Salt-in-the-wound/
It's awfully-crude, with vicious-quotes rippin till fists-elope, and listen-yo...Neek 'brings the drama' like i deliver Scripts-for-soaps!/
The truth is that i'll stop-your-health,each of my dawgs-are-felt, too 'sick and hot' like getting a shot-in-hell!!/
A thrilling conclusion to your murder...
We grab-the-heat-and-blaze-yall, u cant-compete-with-praised-gods, who'll slap-ya-teeth-through-your-face-dawg!!/A savage-beast-who'll-scrape-claws, snap-an-cleave-your-face-off, so you cant 'Step to the plate' like amputees-in-baseball!!!!!/
Thanks...
neek 04
Mighta went over the limit by a bar or so...but idk
Nice pre-write…try again later…lol…
….:: sitting u down::…
With ease… I’ll set ya-to-rest, while holdin-my-breath,
NEEK sticks out… but only from the breast-on-his-chest..
Its like ur lyrically~disabled an now ur capabilities-gone,
spitten-it-strong, u wanna be “dope MC” but ur doing-it-wrong“!!
….Then the doom-had-came, who should we pull an blame-for-this-lame,
NICE VERSE… but not one bar INCLUDED-MY-NAME
Vicious murdered, fallin fast NEEK you’ll get-merked,
You can claim your hard, but u only see hoods Insides of a sweat~shirts…
Call-the-doctors, cuz NEEK’s knocked out like getting boxed’-from-boxers…..
I’m puttin this battle away……like literally….. locked in lockers..
~sonned
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UPPIN........... 4 votes..........................
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Virtuoso toom this. Good personals that alsop hit as punches. Good metas and a few multis too. Neek came with played lines and no hard punches or personals. Win goes to Virtuoso. Please drop an honest vote here guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&page=2&pp=15
virtuso, got this one
he had harder hitting punches, better personals, an easier structure an format to read!!!
an a better overall verse!!!
nice drops of both, y'all have some potential
peace
Virt...came a lot harder then neek, more complex punches and indepth personals a lot easier to read and more creative. an over all better verse.
Neek...try and stop using so many multies and use personals..they help your verse become alot more creative and harder hitting
Vote:Virt
I gotta go wit V on this one, both emcees put up strong verses but his wordplay, metas, and punchlines were better. Nice try though Neek.
POLL VOTE!! on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109392
agiht uppin for votes........................
make shore to leave your link if u want teh favor return....................
Neek had nice multis, but only 2 hard punches...
No personals though...
V had more hard punches, but less multis...
V also had personals and a better structure...
Vote: V for more hard punches, structure and personals...
Please return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=109578&page=1
uppin............................................. .
remeber to drop the link after u vote.................
............so i can return the honest favor.......
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iight...
Virt had more punches... they hit harder... Neek, you have too many multi's, not many punches tho... and not a personal in sight...
Virt took this wiv a harder hittin all-round verse
Vote - Virt
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Virt, you have 100 votes and you forgot to poll your vote in my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...87#post1125387
I meant to say 'posts'...not 'votes'
-W1
agiht i poll'ed............. now lets close this battle...................................
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Virt got this…neek your structure was shiity..no offense…
And you need to work on tryin to flow better….yo punches
was soft..and u need to quit forcin multies…Virt your flow
Was decent…and your punches hit medium but that’s ight
You still got this cause you took ¾ of the subjects.
Vote: Virt