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Due in 45 min (1:45)
Good Luck
In-Stant............................................. ......
Auto Murk-Herbs....The Only Time Breth "Come(cum) Up With Smart Shit" Is When He "Jerk-Nerds"{think}
I Hurt-Nerves....Everybody ForGets Ya Lines While They "Remember Mines" Like Babies "First-Words"
Saw Ya Past Battles Pure Wack-Shit....U ILL?? Pff You Could Be In "Class Wit That Flu" & Ya Spits Still Wouldnt Be Considered A "Classick"{class sick}
You Aint Hard Why You Act-It??....In This Battle You Get "Burned" More Then "Chaped Lips"
Berth Wouldnt Be Sick If He Coughed N Sneezed...Fam You "Aint Built For This" Similar To "Dicksuckers" Wit "Soft Knees"
Dont Floss Please....Plus Like "Garbage Comedians Wit Broke Piano's" Berth Ya "Punchlines Is Off Key"
Im Murderin U Dont Look....And I'm "Killin Ya Lines" Like I Wuz "Stabbin Ya Notebook"
You So Shook....Plus Ya Barz Is "Plain" Like An "R&B Song Wit No Hook"
Ya Death Certificate Go head Sign It....Got Tha "Beam On Tha Glock" And "You Wonder Why You Still Blinded"
You Got A Sickness??Find It....Im Sicker Then U, But Even If We "Switched Brains" You Still Wouldnt Be "Ill Minded"
10 lines=5barz
I control this battle, this bitch is mine, like this was 1932,
I'll murder you so fast, you'll be dead, but still be vertical,
Dropping bombs on this faggot worse than fucking "Jihad, Jihad"
Capeesh, drink your 'Capri Sun' then try a punch, more like 'kicking his Fila's',
This 'ghost re-claims' his place, wasting his time more than Tom Clancy's fiancee,
Rearrange this peon's ions, nothing he can say is funny, 'like jokes about Autopsy',
While you hard like WonderBread, I got 10 personalities asking why you mad at us,
I'll disect your verse, leave you all mixed up, like a fucking platypus,
'Air-lock' this battle, like I 'dis-gusted' you, Leave you up in two pieces,
Now you a John Doe, crucified, and your only luck is through Jesus.
Damn writers-block
Read the verse, there shouldn't be any filler.
Uppin 4 Votes............................................. ...........
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brethen took this no doubt......autopsy- som of ya shyt waz confusin' dawg.....
punches: b
flow: b
vocab: b
humour:.....brethen
vote: brethen
hit dis battle up wit honest vote...........peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108746
Punches:A
Wordplay:A
Metas:B
Personals:Neither
Creativity:A
Vote:Autopsy
This was a pretty good battle, both emcees came with nice verses but i felt that Autopsy got the best of brethren.
Pleez Poll Vote on my battle, fuck Ness
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109392
1-0 Poll Vote Me Uppin..........................................
Still Upping............................................ ......
can't believe that kid voted for brethren.... Autopsy took this hands down. Better rhymes(nice multis) better punches, better wordplay. Autopsy, you got nice shit, but I hate how your bars are all stretched, reminds me of HF. . . but you came nice good job
vote: autopsy
i juss said mah honest vote........it waznt a hate or d.r..i aint gonna change mah vote cuz of yall.....i said hoo i thought won....
return da favor....i dun have da link rite now....ill pm it 2 u.....
srry 4 freepost
This was a pretty good battle, but Autopsy took this. He had fuckin dope wordplay and nice metas and punches. I liked the flow of Brethrens better, but he jus didn't come creative or hard enought. Dope shit tho guys. Please drop an honest vote here. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109881
Autopsy- Nice Verse, Nice Punches They Hit him Pretty Hard, But You Could Improve On Structure And Flow~! Ok Wordplay Ok Flow, Bad Structure, Ok Vocab, Weak Verse, Try To Use More Vocab And Fix Your Structure
Brethren- Nope, Ok Punches, They Hit Like Weak, YOu Can Elevate, Juss COme Harder And Put Some Creativity In There, Nice Wordplay Bad Structure, Ok Flow, Bad Vocab, Weak Verse, Weak Battle
PUnches- A
Flow- A
Structure- B
Wordplay- TIe
Vocab- Tie
Creativity- A
Vote Autopsy, Hit My Battle In My Sig Please
Quote:
Originally Posted by KiLlEr EmCeE
YEA YEA JUST DONT FREEPOST IN HERE AGAIN........................
3-1 ME UPPING............................................ ...
Hey yo I got 100 posts now so I'm polling my vote for Autopsy. Peace
And hit this up if you have time. PLease do http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109881
Autopsy killed it here, came with the better verse and with hotter punches, good wrdplay. Breth u said u had writers block and it showed...ya verse didn't have much of any good punches and the flow was choppy no hate just get off that block smoke an L or summin that helps me out,,lol vote-autopsy