Ok Instant Vs Voice of tha streetz
10 lines,
both spit within 1 hour of checking in,
No d/r,
No crew,
No hate,
No feeding
No freepsoting,
………………..good luck to all……..pz
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Ok Instant Vs Voice of tha streetz
10 lines,
both spit within 1 hour of checking in,
No d/r,
No crew,
No hate,
No feeding
No freepsoting,
………………..good luck to all……..pz
Quelude is in....................
Check in.
Thought the rule was drop an hour after U check in, but whatever.....
My verse will be done within the hour....
Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+
------------Finisher----------------------------------
U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex), ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+
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Explainations
Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+ (they both like lickin balls)
U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+(reputation = Record)
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex),
(put down text) ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+[/b][/i]
Uppin for your verse....
Yo man, what ever happened to these rules, are U posting or what.... :cussing:Quote:
Originally Posted by .:K:.
no dawg i meen after you both checkin so wait till he gets online sees your check then hes got 1 hour...........................pz
No offense, but those are some bullshit rules....... Anyone can beat someone who dropped hours before.....
Antonio...I haven't been on line...I'll key right now.
Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
Meh..... not that great of battle...
I seen better from Que...he got that flow
Ant got tha punches.. cuz his weren't as played..
He also got personals....
Got multies too... but those ain't important
so
v/ Ant..
hit this up with an honest vote... I took tha time...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109338
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
I left off two bars.. sorry......There they go up there^^^^
Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
The whole thing..........
My vote still stands...
You rhymed with emcee like 3 times
But anyways..
I voted on this honestly... can you do tha same
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109338
I rhymed the same syllable the whole rhyme........
Uppin# 2 for votes......................................... Im up (1-0), I will vote on anyones battle honestly , NO MATTER WHO THEY VOTE FOR...
Vote - For whoever Antonio Banderas battled. Don't drop your links in EI ever again.
Uppin for a PROPER breakdown please
structure
meta's
punches
wordplay
multi's
flow
sustainment
enoyment
overall
Please include a good line or so explaining why you picked who you picked...I personally will vote in the same manner on whoever votes from here on...
word to end.
but v/ antonio . .
but, if you ever drop links in wrong place again you may be banned. :)
oh, v/ ant because his punches were pretty original.. and the other kid fed, plus the other kid didnt have that many punches to begin with.. and none of the ones he had made me recognize them... a few of antonios were good like the mars satellite thing... current events are sometimes good to use in ur verse. nice job...
v/ antonio, vote here, both of you;
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108165
TY for voting.... Sorry about post my battle links in the wrong forum. I mistook the text description. I thought the lounge was a free place to post anything.... Sorry again guys..... Upping for more votes.....Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
To feeble....i doubt you really read my verse all the way through...I fed? show me one line in ly verse where I fed off that terribly structured verse.
Antonio took this only cuz Que was pretty tame.
Not really any direct disses in that.
All roundabout shit and it wasn't roundabout due to wordplay.
Pretty much cuz he was stuck on multi's.
Seen it happen so many times.
Fucka multi, a few are cool, but you can't direct hard disses when ya trying ta fit them inta multi form.
Despite the way herbish format complete with ridiculous explanations and stupid exclamation marks...
Antonio is still the one who threw metas, wordplay, and the harder shots.
Check it again if you don't believe me.
Peace
Uppin # 4 for some explain votes..... Please vote on this battle as well, so we all call be able to battle different individuals.... I will vote honestly as links are dropped.....
Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803
This battle was good, but...
Antonio Banderas: Ur verse is good. I liked ur punches and personals. Nice wordplay and creativity. Keep elevatin'.
Quelude: Your verse was good too, but it was more of a self-glorification verse. Nice wordplay. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Antonio Banderas
This battle was good, but...
Antonio Banderas: Ur verse is good. I liked ur punches and personals. Nice wordplay and creativity. Keep elevatin'.
Quelude: Your verse was good too, but it was more of a self-glorification verse. Nice wordplay. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Antonio Banderas
Oh snap, this is in elevated.... My vote don't count.
wordplay - antonio
metaphors - antonio
personals - none
structure - quelude (antonio's linez were kinda stretched)
finisher - antonio (although it was stretched as fuck)
overall - antonio
vote - antonio
votez on thiz plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post1137735
Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
cool
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
blah
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
eeeh
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+
ok
------------Finisher----------------------------------
U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex), ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+
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the lay-text has been played for a long time
I dont like the attempted wordplays like the "loss", "chicklets", and "battery" and the other lines like that. Also the dashes in your verse emply that the reader doesn't know a multi when he sees one. Your readers arn't that stupid. Besides that, the verse could have been better, but it was ok
Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
nope...rhyme better
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
note
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
not a punche, and the rhymes are blah
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
nope, and the soul of the shoe is played
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
nope
Your verse just lacked hard enough punches and wittiness
V/ Antonio for connecting a couple punches, better multis and more creativity.
Please return the favor on my battle with GaZeebo
-W1
Uppin for more Votes.....
Please drop honest votes here...
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584
Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803
Drop a link and we will vote HONESTLY on your battles no matter who you vote for.... :)
Ya Breath stinks...U remain Chick-less (Chicklets)...I rip-spits the sick-est+
U could spit-ur-quickest but Instant still lost(loss) like Mars satellites-visits+
1st line is no good, useless multis and no punch...second lime is nice..good meta
U checked into a mated-quest..This rook caves-chest(chess) & Leave ya brain-stressed+
Til ur confused & laid stretched like pedifiles reachin for gay actovists breast+
played
Stupid Nigga.............Takin photos of RUBIX CUBE dont mean U pose-a-challenge+
Ur known-to-coward..U Havent posted ur verse cuz I shut U down like 2003-power-outtage+
dun rhyme..but ok punches
Slugfest? Assault & Batter(Battery) U with stich-es, :K:. could pitch-hit+
still both bitches go down swinging at balls like 50 Cents bitches+
kinda played but ok
------------Finisher----------------------------------
U Never tear pussy....ur limp dick cant rip-sex, U prewriting to save-Rep+
Strappin on condoms only way ya Lay-text(latex), ur dayz-hexed like unlucky gamblin with Vodoo taboos in Las Vegas+
(put down text)
dope
Your words wouldn't be deep...in a bottle beneath the sea
Quelude is pure emcee...Ant's mediocre textcee
1st line is good...second is filler
Who even as a father..wouldn't possess the word's to bless me
Ya chest can't hold enuff breath to utter a threat against me
1st line is filler, second is ok
I'm real emcee..if needed I'll truck your entire infantry
Defeat you in battles mentally..and beat you unconcious physically
again 1st is filler..second is played
Your beneath me like the soles of my feet..you always will be..
You must don't have no sensory pads on your hands if you don't feel me.
whack
V.O.D's ain't no roughnecks...half ya'll aint even emcee's
A squad a herbs that's suspect as Micheal Jackson at Chuckie Cheese.
decent but played
Overall Que came too weak and with too much filler in his verse. Antonio...you had a alright verse...some drop punches in there. Try and avoid multis unless they are punches/personals too..otherwise they are worthless. Vote=Antonio
PLease drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513