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the rules:
10-16 lines
no biting
no feeding
no dickriding/crew/hate votes
both of you must vote on 3 battles. and post the link in the thread.everytime you post a link you will be upping your thread.you will get no 5 uppings because if everyone in this tourney vote on 3 other battles there should be no need.If I see anything suspicious I will not hesitate to contact a mod.
and goodluck to you both.
Drop as soon as possible a.s.a.p...just because I forgot to put the due date in the rules doesnt mean you have to take 5475478 years to key up a decent verse
Alright this is my check in...
Code-187, your verse is getting killed sorry if you cant cop it
Follow through with a quick set-up laughin as police watch it//
His talents feeble not seein progress as if it was invisable
Lacken skill, he's biten everything like hell-never-be-full//
Stuck with multiple personalitys, chances are im not facen you
Code jacks off to pictures of himself screamin watch-what-we-do//
Enrolled in this tourney then i expelled punchs from my tongue
Enough teachin with first grade lessons, what-are-you 6-son//
Usen this to have code picked on, hes off to be the loser
This match up predicts his verse being down for his own shooter//
Your avatar is sayin you stray from audio, only text seen
Its like the only Mic you touch are ona front case for halloween//
Ive seen your recent battles see and heres another delivery
this time lose without a mod, unlike you and the battle with dizzy//
Wack is somthing you got on lock, but this is the wrong key
Codes wackness is what im ending, did you guy just hear me//
code 187..you got until wednesday to post your verse..if you do no..then you will be dq'd
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checkin in
fuck ur graph paper, ill bitchslap u wit my punchlines
talk da talk but wen it comes to da crunch u cant ryme
and whats dat about biting, the only thing i bites
ur beenies tits, wen things start to get exciting
u write like a left handed invalid, wit no fingers
or are u one of those, country and western fag singers
the only time u find da beat, is when u beat ur meat
so get da fuck off this site, or admit defeat
kiss my feat, ....and hail to da king
im not big headed, but i know winning dis battle, is a sure thing
but anyway we will see, ill end this now
just saw a picture of ur mum on a site called fat-horny-cow
yo dixie pm me a link for my next tourney bout
peace,drop some votes im out.
both whack... im goin with outcome better punchlines and metafors...
he also had a little wordplay but weak shit form both... this is a tourny cmon'...
code your verse wus straight whack but i give u flow cauz u had all your last werds
rhymin unlike outcome...
My VOte-Outcome...
187 if seen alot better from you
in this 187 took the structure, your punches were off
out come you need to work alot n your structure
but over that your puches where ok, you tried use of some vocab that wa ok and thats it,
vote outcme
uppin this to get it done,
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OutCome takes this with structure and punches that were more effective, not a good battle. Metas, personals, and punches were all in one corner though, no matter how weak they were, and that corner was OutCome's. Good battle, but OutCome clearly takes this.
Vote-OutCome
outcome definately took this....idk wahts code 187 thought he was doin when he dropped...maybe he was rushed or something but this was not a good battle..i think out come took this in eerything..just wasnt feelin 187's verse
v- outcome
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
yeah code 187 could do lotz bettah... his flow was ok and some of his punchlinez 2 but they weren't THAT hard... outcome took it with better punchlinez although his shit wasn't THAT good neither...
vote - outcome
Dis was an alright battle I enjoyed and was good I can say and I'm voting for Outcome on dis one.
Outcome was kiling him with harsh punchlines, metaphors, and jus straight ripping him no doubt.Keep on elevating your rhymes man.
favorite verse from Outcome:
Code-187, your verse is getting killed sorry if you cant cop it
Follow through with a quick set-up laughin as police watch it//
Code 187 wasn't jus strong enough for dis battle but anyways he was decent with punches, no metaphors really, and a quick flow unlike Outcome. Work on structure too.
favorite verse from Code 187:
fuck ur graph paper, ill bitchslap u wit my punchlines
talk da talk but wen it comes to da crunch u cant ryme
vote=Outcome
place an honest vote here guys
AK-Mixa vs. Cashvillin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
ow yeah I could use votez on thiz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110377
one-sided battle... breakdown:
punches - out: 187, ur hit like pillows, easily said...
multis - none: 187, ur sucked, so u dont win...
flow - out: 187 was all messed up...
opener / closer - out: 187's 1-line closer was tight, but out's opener beat it...
nice drop guys...
vote - outcome