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the rules:
10-16 lines
no biting
no feeding
no dickriding/crew/hate votes
both of you must vote on 3 battles. and post the link in the thread.everytime you post a link you will be upping your thread.you will get no 5 uppings because if everyone in this tourney vote on 3 other battles there should be no need.If I see anything suspicious I will not hesitate to contact a mod.
and goodluck to you both.
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Drop as soon as possible a.s.a.p...just because I forgot to put the due date in the rules doesnt mean you have to take 5475478 years to key up a decent verse
Neek...IS.....Checked.....
In
Someone stop me!Neeks the Kind-you-censor,So type-in-your-best-verse, Dazasta wanted 'back in the mix' and found his Spine-inna-blender!!/
I'm Thriving-with-letters,you'd be impressed-with-my-killings, your text-isnt-thrilling,kids know that my 'structures sick' like asbestos-in-buildings!!/*
your Less-than-appealing, beat till your Ribs-and-your-ass-greet, Neek has the 'race locked down' like prisons-with-track-meets!/
Who's feeling-your-whack-speach? your flow's 'hardly there' sorta like the Wins-on-your-stat-sheet!/Oh man...
Im not impressed-with-your-latest-shit, your messing-with-satan-bitch, Im hectic-and-dangerous!/
your record-just-makes-me-sick, better check-what-your-facing-prick, 'little pussy' your used to wearing the dress-in-relationships!/
Neeks always harder-with-speech,and my hotter-degrees,left larger-emcees with their heart-in-there-teeth!/
14 lines.....should be nough...
peaceful
Neek 04...oracles
Dunno how to edit but i forgot to explain....
asbestos is a chemical created by dust and is usually f ound underground in basements or behind walls..it can also kill you
Peaceful
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109567
Theres a link....Waitin on this kid...only tourney battle that i could vote on
ok shut up...in droppin..in like an hour...gotta take a shower...
ok back droppin heat..
these words provoked..destroyin' herbs while i roll and smoke..
ur dope?nope..so ill leave u hanging like a slave on rope..
ur rhymes a joke..ur herbal elevation wont happen..face it..
'chuz usin multies to win battles is just herbish an basic..
edit and erase it...couldnt edit kid?your comp. must suck g'..
chuz even if u were a leprechaun u couldnt lucky..
this sluts free..place beaten herbs high on a mantle..
ur a hoe?...ur mom shouldnt have set so good an example..
could u just ramble?..thats what i read out ur verse..
man ur just worst..couldnt be dope if u sprayed on ur shirt..
it just wont work..take a peek at ur future..its bleek..
chuz even memphis count bring a better Tech to this neek..(technique)
record can speak..dixie's judgement to place me against this kid..overidden..
and the only thing about u i like..is ur stat sheet is hidden..
ok uppin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109557
Uppin for some votes....no feeding? u picked apart my whole verse...that stat sheet line...hmmmm
Upped
open: D
close: D
personals: None
metas: D
punches: D
multis: N
win: D
Welll Neek You Had Alot Of Weak Punches And Your Structure Sucked Pretty Bad You Might Wanna Fix That, Dazasta Nice Verse You Had A Couple Of Weak Punches But Not As Many As Neek
Vote-Dazasta
^^ not good enough..your vote will be removed..
anyway..this was a tough battle to judge..and that's not in a good way..Neek you had stretched lines..but had some creativty and vocab in your punches..Dazasta shit was too simple..using played lines and so on..lephecaun lines..is really old..and Neek showed more effort..
vote~Neek
w/e i coulda sworn i dropped out of this tourney anyway..heres a link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...82#post1125582
Welll Neek You Had weak punches and alot of multis And Your Structure was Bad , Dazasta you had mostly good punches, a few weak, but better verse than neek
dazasta wins cus multis dont win battles so.....
neek- to many mutlis killed you
nice attempt though!
Vote-Dazasta
Its not even that too many multies killed Neek...his punches lines weren't equal to Dazastas. Neek had sum decent punches...like the track meet one but they couldn't compare to dazasta's line like...
"ur rhymes a joke..ur herbal elevation wont happen..face it..
'chuz usin multies to win battles is just herbish an basic.."
Best punchline all battle. Neek obviously takes flow and multies...but do those win battles alone? no. Punches do. Which is why I vote Dazasta.
v/- Dazasta.
My vote goes to Dasasta cause of course he had betta structure and punches were a little bit betta and that's that Dazasta won cause Neek's Structure was fucked up and he needs 2 change it, vote=Dazasta
Hit the battles links in my sigs up wit a honest vote people please VOTE, thanx
I guess this one should go to Dazasta when in reality Neek had concepts that were much better and much less basic/played. But this is where structure matters, i couldn't figure out the flow to Neek's verse at all and in the end it was just a bunch of rhyming disses, not a rap verse at all. If Neek would've cleaned up his structure even a little bit he would have taken this because Dazasta came played as fuck. Good battle though, Dazasta wins.
finish getting those links..or you both will be DQ'd..I mean it..
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i cant vote urs..hes in my crew..i cant vote on reign mans hes in my crew.. i can get about one more fucking link...if you cant accept 2 then dq..i could give a shit less..
dazasta got it, neek sturiucture suckt ass, he had horrible punches n 2 many ~ things, thats jus annoyin sumtimes, dazasta did well, very well he destroyed tha other dude, dazasta was little played, but he still overcame neek alot
vote-dazasta
NEEK
Someone stop me!Neeks the Kind-you-censor,So type-in-your-best-verse, Dazasta wanted 'back in the mix' and found his Spine-inna-blender!!/
7/10 kinda crappy, but nice
I'm Thriving-with-letters,you'd be impressed-with-my-killings, your text-isnt-thrilling,kids know that my 'structures sick' like asbestos-in-buildings!!/*
8/10 nice
your Less-than-appealing, beat till your Ribs-and-your-ass-greet, Neek has the 'race locked down' like prisons-with-track-meets!/
6/10
Who's feeling-your-whack-speach? your flow's 'hardly there' sorta like the Wins-on-your-stat-sheet!/
10/10 VERY NICE!
Im not impressed-with-your-latest-shit, your messing-with-satan-bitch, Im hectic-and-dangerous!/
5/10 ehh...
your record-just-makes-me-sick, better check-what-your-facing-prick, 'little pussy' your used to wearing the dress-in-relationships!/
4/10
Neeks always harder-with-speech,and my hotter-degrees,left larger-emcees with their heart-in-there-teeth!/
7/10 nice
40/70
DAZASTA
these words provoked..destroyin' herbs while i roll and smoke..
ur dope?nope..so ill leave u hanging like a slave on rope..
4/10 wtf?
ur rhymes a joke..ur herbal elevation wont happen..face it..
'chuz usin multies to win battles is just herbish an basic..
5/10 ok
edit and erase it...couldnt edit kid?your comp. must suck g'..
chuz even if u were a leprechaun u couldnt lucky..
3/10 terrible
this sluts free..place beaten herbs high on a mantle..
ur a hoe?...ur mom shouldnt have set so good an example..
5/10
could u just ramble?..thats what i read out ur verse..
man ur just worst..couldnt be dope if u sprayed on ur shirt..
2/10 huh?
it just wont work..take a peek at ur future..its bleek..
chuz even memphis count bring a better Tech to this neek..(technique)
6/10 nice personal
record can speak..dixie's judgement to place me against this kid..overidden..
and the only thing about u i like..is ur stat sheet is hidden..
7/10 nice personal
32/70
well, nice job both, but feelin neeks more...
dazasta murked the kid said and done....
neek i didnt even wanna finish readin your verse,,,
i almost fell asleep shit... and to ad on to that i had no clue where your lines would stop and start but since its a tourny i had to re read it...
dazasta took structure/flow completly all of punches and metas n the multis too so
my vote-dazasta... hit up my battle in sig and battle wit se7en for tourny...
Pz....
_-SyaNidal-_
^Werd.
Several catagories are vital..
& Neek take the ones that dont really matter.
Better overall verse by Daz, but still bad.
vote Disaster