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no biting
no feeding
no dickriding/crew/hate votes
both of you must vote on 3 battles. and post the link in the thread.everytime you post a link you will be upping your thread.you will get no 5 uppings because if everyone in this tourney vote on 3 other battles there should be no need.If I see anything suspicious I will not hesitate to contact a mod.
and goodluck to you both.
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.........ite dno wat going on but........im down.............................................. ...check check...................................pz
Drop as soon as possible a.s.a.p...just because I forgot to put the due date in the rules doesnt mean you have to take 5475478 years to key up a decent verse
yo ill drop when i see his check............................................. ...........................pz
You both have until Wednesday to post your verse..if yall dont post it..then both of you are eliminated from the tourney..
calm down dixie boy, im checkin in niggaz, i'ma bout to spit now
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
YO WTF, spit niggah, damn....
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shit........forgot bout this..............aint got time 2nite going out.soz...........ill drop 2moz................pz
ite soz rly didnt see this keying up na......................
Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................
..................pz
Breakdown
Bombz' Verse,
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
Nice Opener
Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
DIdn't Get It
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
Ya flow got off on this but ya last line was decent
But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
Nice wordplay
Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
Too stretched, but ok overall
Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
Pretty nice Closer
K's Verse,
Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
Damn, that was a dope opener
bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
That was pretty nice
already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
Pretty Decent
i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
That was wack
6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................
Pretty Dope closer.
Punches: K
Wordplay: Bombz
Meta’s: K
Creativity: Tie
Personals: Neither
Flow: Tie
Multi’s: Bombz
Vote: K
This battle was evenly matched. Both emcees came wit nice verses but I felt K got this one wit his constant punchlines. Bombz, your verse had some nice wordplay and punches but K edged you by a little.
POLL VOTES NEEDED
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108481
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111064
That was a tight battle........BombZ had good wordplay and did good with the closer and openeralso good at the wordplay and K had good personals and nice wordplay too. Both had good flow.
Break down
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Punches: K
Wordplay: Tie
Metes: K
Multi`s: BombZ
Flow: BombZ
Vocab: K
Vote-K
Vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105968
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
eh, not feeling your opening here.. The flow is decent, but basic. Metaphor could be better. pounch is alright
Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
your metaphor is here alright, wordplay is decent, but your not directing your punch well enough
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
eh, flow came off a little... meta isnt the best and i thought your follow through needed some help
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
nice concept on your setup, but your follow through needed some help. better punch would have worked it more
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
follow through seemed more of a filler type ish
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
filler, not much of a punch here
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
ending meta isnt bad.. punch is good, not that bad of an ending
Over all i thought you had an alright verse. Your punchs were alright metaphors could have been a little bit better but decent for the most part. Now your personals i thought could have been in there more.
Punchs-3
personals-1
metaphors-4
rhyme shceme-3
multis-4
15/25
ite soz rly didnt see this keying up na......................
Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
decent opening.. nice metaphor, good play off his name... follow through was a good punch
bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
heh, good metaphor.. punch is straight
already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
nice punch.. follow through is good,metaphor was on
i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
alright bar i guess
6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................
kind of a weak ending but decent concept
Over all your verse was good, nice concepts in there and it flowed pretty well.. The mutlis i thought were lacking but your metaphors made up for that i thought.
Could have used a few personals thought ( few more)
Punchs-4
metaphors-4
multis-1
rhymescheme-3
personals-3.5
15.5/25
Drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108409
Vote- K
He took it with more consistant hard punchs along with good metaphors..
thx...............uppin(1)........................ ................................................pz
yey yey.............uppin(2).......................... .................................................. ...................pz
uppin(3).............................thx.......... .................................................. ................pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111089
ay can call help a brotha out and vote for his battle....peace!
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^na man you cant post links with out a vote.............................................. .........................pz
ok battle...
k- this was almost even, k you had some ok personals and yea punches was on key
basicly why i think i like d your verse was because i didn't half to read it more then once like some, your vocab was nice to.
bombz- your verse was nice, you had a better rhyme structure and the wordplay was aight but you lacked on the delivery in punches and had few personals. good verse though.
vote-k
sweet.................................thx alot........shud be 5-0 but no1's poll voteing.........uppin(4).......................... ....pz
.:K:. simply reason beta all round.keep tryin
Vote:.:K:.
wak....vote.........but thx.................pll poll vote...............uppin(5)..................pz
v/ - K
Why? Harder hitting punches, more witty, enjoyed it more.
Bombz verse wasn't too witty and wasn't the greatest read...some of your punches also just weren't witty. K wasn't the greatest either...but he did have some good punches...such as the red carpet one. Also, K did have more...and betetr hitting personals.
Return the favoru and drop an honest vote on the battles in my signature please. Thank you.
Breakdown
Bombz
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
mmmm... okay......
Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
explain this to me, makes no sense
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
a little hmmm but last line was dope
But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
wordplay's good, last line nice didnt understand frozen mind thing though.....
Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
stretched, first line had nice muliti, last line didnt rhyme wid 1st
Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
good closer, original
.:K:.
Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
nice opener, fire
bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting floored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
okay, but sounds a lil stretched, bad structure
already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
nice punch.....keep em comin
i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
umm, i think this was filler, nothin nice!
6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................
not bad......
Wordplay: Bombz
Punches: .:K:.
Meta’s: .:K:.
Creativity: Tie
Personals: .:K:.
Flow: .:K:.
Multi’s: Bombz
Strucutre: Bombz
Vote: .:K:.
plees return the favor, my battles r super slept on!!
links r in my sig............
bombz
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,
could of been worded better
Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,
first line-nice, second line wasn't too good
Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,
wasn't really feelin this
But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,
not direct
Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,
nice multies, not too bad
Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
second line was nice, first was ok
you came real weak, i seen you come harder than this, your punches hardly git.
.:K:.
Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,
not too bad, flow was off a lil bit.
bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting flored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,
nice, second line a lil stretched
already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,
nice punch
i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,
second line was filler, pretty weak
6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................
lol, im english, i think most english peeps have used the fish/battered line
your punches hit, no real killers, but some nice wordplay!!
vote- .:k:.
harder hitting punches, an better wordplay!!