10 LINE MIN.....12 MAX
NO D/R
NO CREW
NO HATE
NO BYTIN
DUE IN 30 MIN OR DQED :thefinger
BOUT TO MERK :shoot: REALL
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10 LINE MIN.....12 MAX
NO D/R
NO CREW
NO HATE
NO BYTIN
DUE IN 30 MIN OR DQED :thefinger
BOUT TO MERK :shoot: REALL
chek/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////-
okay.....................................
c'mon now dawg you aint gotta tight flo/
but my punches hit you hard like my name roy jones/
and u you talkin bout ur STREETZ IS GULLIE.../
we dont accept ur shit like counterfit money/
so how you gon beat me/
ill leave ya eye the color purple like ur name ceiley/
im spitt hot shit cause ur flo aint cold/
and like shoes wit no soe imma ripp ur sole/
this guy is nothin i bet he always beats off/
he go to guy doctors so they can grabb his balls and cough/
this my las line so get the name right/
or i'll ripp ur eyes out and give you a REALL insight.
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Gullie... Faggot...im the DUKE of rap:
fuck "Atomik" dawg.....im bout to "Nuke" this cat:
people pumpin up ya head...i could hit ya brain.....wit a no-look:
but the only time... u pushin ryhmes:
is when u carry MY NOTEBOOK:
fuck emergency.....u need to be sent to Raps TRAMA UNIT:
for i murder ya flows.....and pump ya ryhmes wit imbalmin fluid:
but u still couldnt "touch" my ryhmes....if ya "palm" was to it:
fuck Gullie....call me Lucifer...the way i spit in-tense heat:
blow ya thoughts on a "car":
only way u "MOVE" ....wins agianst "streetz"
its OVA!
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uppin this shit......................1....................... .................................................. ...
lets goooooooooooooooooooooooo................1........ .................................................. .....
reall is whack
Streetz took this one easy buh cant vote, theres my 2 cents anyway
hmmm... you both need to elevate... decent verses, but need lots of work....
punches: reall
wordplay: none
flow: tie
multies: streetz
vocabulary: streetz
reall lacked multi syllable rhymes, while streetz kept them simple, but consistent... reall was mostly straighforward vocab but streetz used some advanced words... "imbalmin".. "atomic".... both need to elevate punchlines, but altogether, both did quite ok
vote = streetz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109536
soz forgot to put this link in... its my battle.... drop an honest vote please... thank you
that was a nice battle, reall was pretty good but gullies was ill so he gets my vote.
uppin #1................................................ .................................................. .........
I gotta go wit Streetz on this one. Both emcees need to elevate, but ReaLL you do the most. Streetz got the win because of better punches, wordplay, metas, and flow.
POLL VOTE!!! On this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109392
reall - structure sux........flow fell off.......vocab is basic.......no multis........bad wordplay........i wasnt feelin most of ya punches........no good personals......
street - good structure.......flow is ok.......vocab is weak.........ok multis........wordplay was pretty good.......some of the punches hit hard.........nice personals.......
conclusion - streetz takes this in structure, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote
VOTE - STREETZGULLIE
let get this last vote so i can get the win and KO.................1.............................. ........
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uppin again..................1..................lets get this shit closed...............all i need is one more.........................1..........
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can i get 1 MORE VOTE.................DAMN1........................ ............................................
All I Need Is 111111111111111111111111.......more............... .................come On...........................1
1 god damn more!.........................................plea se....................................1
Street wins this. First off the other kat is banned lol.
Gullie... Faggot...im the DUKE of rap:
fuck "Atomik" dawg.....im bout to "Nuke" this cat:
1st line was whack second decent
people pumpin up ya head...i could hit ya brain.....wit a no-look:
but the only time... u pushin ryhmes:
is when u carry MY NOTEBOOK:
ehh ok
fuck emergency.....u need to be sent to Raps TRAMA UNIT:
for i murder ya flows.....and pump ya ryhmes wit imbalmin fluid:
nice punch
but u still couldnt "touch" my ryhmes....if ya "palm" was to it:
fuck Gullie....call me Lucifer...the way i spit in-tense heat:
blow ya thoughts on a "car":
kinda a weak closer
Other dude might have won if he woulda not been banned, woulda been close. Street, use more complicated lines and more creative punches.
PLease drop an honest vote here. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513