ha ha brian.......ur gay.......BIZATCH!!!!!!!!!
10 lines
house rules
verses due tonight at 12 est
blind spits
ha ha.......ur fuckin done foo.......
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ha ha brian.......ur gay.......BIZATCH!!!!!!!!!
10 lines
house rules
verses due tonight at 12 est
blind spits
ha ha.......ur fuckin done foo.......
CHECKIN IN...........
ill start keyin afta u check in...........
ur fuckin done brian........
lets go son.........
Checkin In.....................
Reppin The Mondo Thugs...
iight sons of NEW YORK.. REP.. MONDO...
peep peep.. CHECK CHECK
Add A Teaspon Of Milk, Add A Cup Of Flower
And Cook For Half an Hour, Now We Baked Austin's Skills/
You Couldn't Cum Clean From Jackin Off In The Shower
Like A Whack Trilogy I Got Austin Powered/
Wow, Your A Coward...Afraid Of Text Match
I Wouldn't Count This Chicken Even If The Eggs Hatched/
But I Style Got You Wired, It What Got You Inspired
Plus I Keep Em Cummin Like I Was Nikki Tyler/
You Could Call Me A Buyer, I Got Your Verse Consumed
And Dead On Arrival Is What The Nurse Assumed/
But Dawg You lost this...But it wasn't Your Fault
Cuz You Mistook This Battle For A Poetry Contest/
DONE MY SONS... hey yowhatup said i could have 12 so yeah i have 12
^^^LMFAO........y would u even talk shit and come wit shit like that.........whateva.......REPPIN DA MONDO THUGS.........check it.......yo, yo.......
just by droppin uve beatin-urself, kid ur wack, gay ass bitch do urself a favor and retreat-for-help/
ill delete-ya-help, its quite sad when peeps wont listen to ya on the first time so u forced to "repeat-urself"/
this bitch is crossed, gay ass fag dressed in gloss, and its no wonder y this bitch is so hooked on "sauce"/
after this battle im left-as-the-boss and thats fucked up u gotta use the largest size just to get ya "message-across"/
even though i never said u could go 12 just go-ahead, cause u fit as many lines in as u can cause u know-ur-dead/
im just like that beast below-ya-bed, ur pissin me off, then u start to wonder y ya body is left "so-red"/
dawg its sad u startin to look like ya-avy, but its even sadder that to get ya weight, ud have to "have-three"/
u can-disagree, but damn ur fat and mexican the perfect qualities of someone i need to continue my killing-sprees/
i cant believe u didnt plan-before, cause i was expectin a challenge but u came out just a bland-bore/
dawg honestly u just a land-whore, u say u reppin the nyc, but really u cant even figure out what that "stands-for"/
EXPLANATIONS -
1st bar - in his sig he has "reppin da mondo thugs" twice......one right below the other one
2nd bar - in his sig he had to write "i be illin" in huge ass letters cause everyone knows hes wack
3rd bar - self explanatory
4th bar - he goes to my school and hes fat.....carmen is also fat, but ud have to have 3 carmens to make him
5th bar - in his post he said he was from new york, but really hes from arizona like me.......
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should be enough, but whateva........
UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!!!!!!!
Add A Teaspon Of Milk, Add A Cup Of Flower
And Cook For Half an Hour, Now We Baked Austin's Skills/
You Couldn't Cum Clean From Jackin Off In The Shower
Like A Whack Trilogy I Got Austin Powered/
Wow, Your A Coward...Afraid Of Text Match
I Wouldn't Count This Chicken Even If The Eggs Hatched/
But I Style Got You Wired, It What Got You Inspired
Plus I Keep Em Cummin Like I Was Nikki Tyler/
You Could Call Me A Buyer, I Got Your Verse Consumed
And Dead On Arrival Is What The Nurse Assumed/
But Dawg You lost this...But it wasn't Your Fault
Cuz You Mistook This Battle For A Poetry Contest/
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k overall 6/10 keep it up and come harder wit witty punches
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just by droppin uve beatin-urself, kid ur wack, gay ass bitch do urself a favor and retreat-for-help/
ill delete-ya-help, its quite sad when peeps wont listen to ya on the first time so u forced to "repeat-urself"/
this bitch is crossed, gay ass fag dressed in gloss, and its no wonder y this bitch is so hooked on "sauce"/
after this battle im left-as-the-boss and thats fucked up u gotta use the largest size just to get ya "message-across"/
even though i never said u could go 12 just go-ahead, cause u fit as many lines in as u can cause u know-ur-dead/
im just like that beast below-ya-bed, ur pissin me off, then u start to wonder y ya body is left "so-red"/
dawg its sad u startin to look like ya-avy, but its even sadder that to get ya weight, ud have to "have-three"/
u can-disagree, but damn ur fat and mexican the perfect qualities of someone i need to continue my killing-sprees/
i cant believe u didnt plan-before, cause i was expectin a challenge but u came out just a bland-bore/
dawg honestly u just a land-whore, u say u reppin the nyc, but really u cant even figure out what that "stands-for"/
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man yer struc is horrible fix that shit,overall 7/10
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vote/yo...
^^^thanx for the vote..........
UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!
Uppin #2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cmon Dont Sleep On Dis Bitchs.........
Lets Get Some Fuckin Votes!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought YO wutup took this better punches an wut not
didnt feel other guys structue ya AB ab Rhyme scheme didnt feel it
u had a bunch of good punhces an if u structured it rite i think u wud of taken the battle but u didnt...
Vote-WUTUp
Hit the link up dawg..Cuz i voted on ya shit an poll ya vote..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487
Punches:Yo
Multies:Yo
Vocab: Yo
Wordplay:NoSam...like the play on his name
Metaphores: NoSam
Stucture:Yo
Vote: Yo What Up..good shit 1
left my honest vote.....now hit this up for me....1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109545
Yo What Up, what da fuck? We was supposed to battle today but you openin' up battles like a muthafucka. Don't tell me ur duckin', not after all that shit u was talkin?
U could PM me ur excuse.
Anyway, as for the battle:
This battle was decent. Ur not really supposed to reveal info like names, but both of u don't seem to have any problem with it, so:
nosam: Your verse was just okay. Pretty basic and all. However, u did have some good potential. Okay wordplay, good structure, kinda weak punches, more on the creativity side. Keep elevatin'.
Yo What Up: Your verse was okay too. Pretty basic, but with some nice wordplay, metas, and creativity. Punches were good but I've seen better from ya. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Yo What Up
^^^thanx for the feedbacks.............
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!
DONT SLEEP ON DIS HOES!!!!!!!!
Uppin # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cmon Foos........lets Go Sons!!!!!!!!!!
yo took this battle his verse was dope,much better pesonals and structure
vote-yo
peep my battles
vs dizzy hommel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195
vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371
Punches:Yo
Vocab: Yo
Wordplay:NoSam
Multies:Yo
Personals: Neither
Metas: NoSam
Poll vote Please=\/
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109392
Nosam bit that line
"Cum clean jacking off in the shower" from Eminem
http://www.lyrics-site.com/313_Lyrics.html
Second verse, nosam just varied it a bit.
YoWhatUp took this battle.. nosam wasn't really all that bad but Yo took you in the majority of all the catagories... punches, creativity, personals.. ect
vote- YWU
Return the favor, honest vote hit up this for me.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109424
^^^thanx for the votes.......
UPPIN FOR THE LAST TIME........
ONE MORE MOTHAFUCKAS!!!!!!!
uhh... yeah uppin for the fitsrt time UPPIN
VOTE FOR ME uhh... yeah YEAH VOTE FOR ME
Yo Yo Uppin #2
I Be Uppin For Som Votes... Vote Now
Dang What Is Taking So Long
This Was A 1sided Battle Yo took this Easily His Punches Hit Harder,Disses/Personals Were More On Point, Decent WordplayGoiod Multi Use....
VOTE=YO WHAT UP
Return Da Favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109032
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109612