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Me And YOMAMA's MAMA
well 5 bars kid (that means 10 lines)
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Me And YOMAMA's MAMA
well 5 bars kid (that means 10 lines)
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checkin in........................................
Were you serious when you challenged me...? HaHa
I'm Coming Out Swinging...Not Taking It Easy On You,
Sorry I'm Putting Scraches On Something So New!
My Punches Are Lethal...You Can't Even Dodge Me,
Like Muhammad Ali I Float Like A Butterfly And Sting Like A Bee!
This Is Your First Post...And I'm Leaving It Burnt Like Toast,
In This Battle I Got The Most...Your Cooked Like A Roast!
Like You Say...Your Fresh...Newer Than Picked Fruit,
Your Bruise Easy...Your Bound To Be A Lyrical Soldiers Recruit!
Your New So It's Sad For Me To Hurt And Pain-You,
But Like Your Favorite Band...I'll Leave You Like Brainstew!
(This Kid Listens To Girly Bands Like Green Day And Shit Like That)
Those Were Weak Words But This Newbie Won't Touch Em'
how do you attach an image i gotta a picture for this "momma"
Yo, Yo, blend, dis da way it goes
u be jackin in yo bed I'll be chillin wit my ho's
my raps are fresh, an u dont got a chance foo
your raps are nothin but shit, just like you!
blend, what the hell kind of name is that?
yo rhymes are pathetic, an mine are phat
you just dont have what it takes, cant you see?
this is kinda fun, an easy win for me
u just got smoked bro, im a major hit
well now youve learnd not to even try wit my shit!
at least im not obsessed with "Girls and boys" by Good Charlotte you fuckin fag
shut up ho........................................I hate that shit
yeah......................bullshit and you know it
vote..............................................
votes?.......................Don't skip out cuz you don't know who YOMAMA is he's good for being so new
come on already and vote this is already my 3rd uppin and not a single vote
cmon guys just vote...............................
Blend:
I'm Coming Out Swinging...Not Taking It Easy On You,
Sorry I'm Putting Scraches On Something So New
good flow, but who minds hes new or not? 4/10
My Punches Are Lethal...You Can't Even Dodge Me,
Like Muhammad Ali I Float Like A Butterfly And Sting Like A Bee
this one is pretty good! 8/10
This Is Your First Post...And I'm Leaving It Burnt Like Toast,
In This Battle I Got The Most...Your Cooked Like A Roast
good wordplay, but again telling he´s a newby... 6/10
Like You Say...Your Fresh...Newer Than Picked Fruit,
Your Bruise Easy...Your Bound To Be A Lyrical Soldiers Recruit
i dont get this one, only lyrical soldiers haters would like it 3/10
Your New So It's Sad For Me To Hurt And Pain-You,
But Like Your Favorite Band...I'll Leave You Like Brainstew
ok, its not tight but its not so bad 5/10
yomama:
Yo, Yo, blend, dis da way it goes
u be jackin in yo bed I'll be chillin wit my ho's
good opening 7/10
my raps are fresh, an u dont got a chance foo
your raps are nothin but shit, just like you!
na, this is wack 2/10
blend, what the hell kind of name is that?
yo rhymes are pathetic, an mine are phat
ok, weak personal, but at least a personal 5/10
you just dont have what it takes, cant you see?
this is kinda fun, an easy win for me
good flow, but you didnt put good punches 6/10
u just got smoked bro, im a major hit
well now youve learnd not to even try wit my shit!
elevate, his closing was better 4/10
vote: blend
this is already my 4th one come on and vote before i use em all
Don't dare vote with your alias. Just letting you know. -Token
Punches: Blend
Wordplay: Blend
Meta's: Blend
Overall Enjoyment: Blend
Personal's: None
Vote: Blend
THis Battle doesn't really need a breakdown. YoMAMA posted one of the wackest verses I've heard in my life. Blend kilt him in every category.
*Is it me or does this look kinda suspicious though
Could be the Same Person- Just sayin'*
Meh.. not much of a battle
Blend came correct
He had punches/personals that tore through Yo's verse
Yomaha's lines were too short to flow I thought
Blend had some pretty ill wordplay too
so
V/ Blend
hit this up with a vote.. majorly slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=108823&page=1
this is my 5th and last one.......................
Hit my shit up.... I took tha time to read ya verse And Vote
Now please Return tha favor... Like I said.. Majorly Slept on
Yo, I'm a man of my word... after checkin out these 2 verse.. my honest vote has to go to blend. yomama ur verse was just ok, u need alot more personals, and punches, more creativity and wordplay. that's what wins battles. you really didn't throw much at him. but just elevate, u can rhyme. blend, seen u do better. love the dynasty soldiers line, haha. more personals and punches.
vote- blend
Punches:Yo
Multies:Blend
Vocab: Blend
Wordplay:Blend
Metaphors:Blend
Stucture:Blend
Vote: Blend
left my honest vote.....now hit this up for me....1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109545
uppin.............................................
Ok blend took this
Punches- Blend hit way harder, yomama's shit was weak and didn't hit hard at all his punches were basic
wordplay-once again yomama's ish was weak and was basic giving blend the upperhand
structure- blends was better, yomama work on that
flow- both flowed but blend put way more creativy into his shit
a pretty one sided battle
no beef keep elevatin
honest votes would be much appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109953