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i called out he responded
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u spit sometime today
i will drop shortly after
good luck
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10-12 lines
i called out he responded
explained votes only
u spit sometime today
i will drop shortly after
good luck
out..
this is my check in
i am waitin on u
to check in....
out
holla,
lets do this, il spit mine now, then u av 30min max to spit urs.
aight?
no ridin on my verse either.
mr.w.rite, u only wana battle a newbie coz ur lyrics are shite//
u find it hard to hang wiv the heavy weights//
ur only on RB dick ridin coz u aint got no real mates//
CALL A DOCTOR!! mr.rites feelin sick//
its been more than 24hrs since he ate his last dick//
im sick of these fake rappers claimin their from the street//
u mite aswell give up here bitch, and just admit defeat//
take that shit back dawg, its just the same old crap//
stop writin for pop music bitch, coz this is rap//
i pay for everything i brake so how much does ur back cost//
il end this shit now, coz its obvious that you've lost.
rite uve got 30 min from now to cum up with ur shit.
note=read his check in...
these fuckin newbs...not on my level.......so i'll take a new course..
why would i feed...when its obvious my verse is better than yours..
Don’t confuse me with your weak punchlines...flows and wack bars..
I’d say its back to the basics........but I don’t think he made it that far...
And I heard you pack a mean punch.. but I say he’s better and taken hits...
He refuses to toss your salad....without ranch dressing and bacon bits...
Your just a wanna be...swinging hard...but punches seem to miss me...
Heres a reality check ...since your welfare doesn’t post until the fifteenth...
Thats it...the fights over...grab the ice pack and start the healing man..
And the sky’s the limit....
When he finally gets passed those ceiling fans...
votes please...
damn, sum good lines there. best of luck to ya!!!!
omfg......nice battle....damm yoo....kurruptz last line waz a killerrrr....i seriously say it waz a tie tho......
i wuld vote 4 one but i really say itz a tie.....
damm
yo both of yall shuld try out 4
" voice of tha streetz"
....vote: tie
ok battle....
Kurrupt-You had a good structure for ya verse...some ok punches...really no good personals...the flow was good in some spots but not in others...to sum it up ya verse was pretty simple...it was ok
Mr W.Rite-You had a nice structure...better punches but they still weren't that amazing...no personals...a better flow....your verse was better because of the harder punches to me...i was feel ya shit better i feel you put more into it....
vote-Mr W.Rite
please return the favor and vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109012
kurrupt kilt it his metas and personals were much beter
dis is some funny shit "ur only on RB dick ridin coz u aint got no real mates//
CALL A DOCTOR!! mr.rites feelin sick//
its been more than 24hrs since he ate his last dick"
rites verse wasnt good at all hus meta were rubbish and so was his flow but he did have one good line "I’d say its back to the basics........but I don’t think he made it that far..."
vote-kurrupt
vs dizzy hommel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195
vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371
i voted for rite by accident instead of kurrupt could a mod chane it please.
mr.w got it i reckon. Good flows from both of you though
PE@CE
dam i really hate frontlines..
first up i guess...
Pretty straight forward battle..
Punches Write dominated(bacon bits)
... Flow goes to him too.. I liked it
Kurrupt didn't have that much to offer..
You need to work on ya punches and make them effective
so
V/ Write
hit this up please... Its being slept on.. thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=109303&page=2
come on guys lets try to get this shit over wit
2nd up i guess
punches Mr
flo Mr
mutli's Mr
meti4's Mr
personals Mr
structure Mr
overall Mr....
A complete merkin here, Mr w rite killed kurrupt wit a much better style matched wit sum funny and witty personals, kurrupt really didnt do much here, very newbyish, the punches were really really played...elevate kurrupt...
drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=1&pp=15
thanks for the vote guys
need a few more to close this thing out
holla
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite
actually this is my fourth up..
this should have been closed...
Mr. Rite took this battle by far....he had a much more complex verse with better punches and personals....not to mention his structure and flow were much better...korrupt just came too basic...elevate homie, look at some examples of other battles to get the idea of what it takes to win....
thank for the votes
one more to end this shit
drop the links
out
oh damn... Mr W.Rite straight murdered Kurrupt... Examples:
Opener :
"these fuckin newbs...not on my level.......so i'll take a new course..
why would i feed...when its obvious my verse is better than yours.."
^^Ill, killed his whole verse right there
AND
"Don’t confuse me with your weak punchlines...flows and wack bars..
I’d say its back to the basics........but I don’t think he made it that far..."
^^Fuckin Mean 'ill shit LOL
another Killer line:
"Your just a wanna be...swinging hard...but punches seem to miss me...
Heres a reality check ...since your welfare doesn’t post until the fifteenth..."
^^ Sick, sick, sick.
Need I say more?
Kurrupt you had no real punches... elevate
W.Rite - nice job, killed this one
Vote = W.Rite
both yall hit this up when you can with an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109986