rules are normal and around sixteen lines
you spit first and i go when I see you've gone :thumbup:
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rules are normal and around sixteen lines
you spit first and i go when I see you've gone :thumbup:
dang, look at that title, I don't really know how I did tha one, I don't know the tired's startin' to hit me another hour or so I'd be pullin' twentyfour hours and I havn't done that in a while, sorry for the whacked out title, I think it's cuz i was checkin out Amp's sig, or somethin' anyway D. check in I'll tell you this is the one in BS
A *dope name* iz what u claim when u dun spit *dope game*
I c more original namez on the streetz every single day/
dun claim that u r "dope" although I dun care what u are
your shit so wack I could kill your ass in one bar/
the only "bar" u ever heard 'bout served beer
stick by your sodaz cuz u like what? fourteen?/
I'll make u CHOKE, make ya DOPE name freeze u bastard
u a fuckin' JOKE, the POPE SMOKEZ more green than u can handle/
u aint NUTTIN', a fuckin fake ass wanna be mc
Battled me and got ya ass send straight 2 W E C/
my shit so fuckin' HAZARDOUS yourz iz straigt WACKYNEZZ
big boyz throwin' wordz like frizbeez u can't get WITH THIZ/
I'll leave ya ass missin' call yaself 'nemo' so they can 'find' u
u thought u was the shit but u let 'rapperz' like 50cent blind u/
u a fuckin' nobody round here shit iz kinda obvious
my flowz show I'm *the one* my dadz should b morpheus/
itz all over now, time to start RIPPIN' thiz fagz dope name
'D'umb 'O'ld 'P'athetic 'E'goTRIPPIN', thatz yo' game/
yeah it dun matter juzt drop your shit n good luck.........................PZ................... .....
A'ight D.Liver.E I got somethin' "special" in store for you
I'll show you that I S.A.T on your hopes and your screwed
The Perfect Score is out of reach and I'm here to show it
Keep your fantasies in your head and off your avi on the net
Do the surgery and take out the liver you'll see who's left
Dope Name is and I'm gunna make shove it to give you strep
Let your remains sit around until I bring them to a heap
I'm tired, you suck, I'm literally beating you in my sleep
Alchohol's caused you to sergically remove your main part
Seein' how it's goin' it's okay to have a change of heart
Forget what I'm doin' man you're a ghost w/o information
Scared people'll use it, I dont need it here' a demonstration
Tell me to drop, chill out I got it, don't worry,whats the hurry
Like a snow flurry, I'll block your chances of your goal, victory
You must of picked up I'm mixed then whoopidy dohooohoo
Tell me somethin your the expert, What can brown do fo you?
I'm out lets vote on this
uppin'............................................ ..................................................
D. get this. Better punches, personals, multis and metas. Dope had some ok stuff, but some lines were played and nothin really stood out. GJ tho. Please checxk this out and drop an honest vote guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109347
thxz 4 vote and I agree, Dope Name your shit waz gd................................................ ..
That was a pretty well matched battle i think. d had ood punchlines i reckon, specially that nemo one. that was pretty good. but Dope Name was just that bit better. his stuff flowed a little better too, with a confident ryhme pattern. so, although quite close, i'm gonna vote for dope name.
aight... uppin......................................
hey. vote on my battle plz. id vote on this one here if i could.
thanx. much appreciation.............
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dope name won this with better punches and vocab and creativity..close battle..styles are the same...so it was hard tp judge..D.Liver was a little short because his verse was too simple and he didnt have any really hard hitting punches..but dope name was just blazing..I liked the take out your liver /d and [b]e[/i] line..that was tight..and I liked the I'm tired and you suck so I'm beating you in my sleep line..theres nothing really to quote from D.Liver's verse..peace..
uppin............................................. ...
punches: dope name...Do the surgery and take out the liver you'll see who's left
Dope Name is and I'm gunna make shove it to give you strep
metas dope: Like a snow flurry, I'll block your chances of your goal, victory
wordplay kinda: I'm tired, you suck, I'm literally beating you in my sleep
personals dope: I'll show you that I S.A.T on your hopes and your screwed
The Perfect Score is out of reach and I'm here to show it...wordplay also
overall i gotta go with dope name
uppin.............................................
This is your last up. -Token
Uppin'(1)
thanks for uppin' D
I'll use mine now
Why's my name in the title?
well as long as i ain't battlin' i guess I won't get dq'd from this
:: still confused ::
Uppin (2)...
Good battle i thought Dope name took is sum hard shit feelin ya verse alot man ...i told u an me wud have a good battle if u was down..
Vote- Dope name..he had better punches an personals feelin it alot..
Peep the link an vote..Plz..see if im better then u or no..Vote tho HOnestly plz.shits been slepted on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487
^ no problem, I responded to your call out, and of course I'll vote fairly, it would be stupid not to...
Uppin' (3)...
Not bad bye the both of ya! will be a tought battle. sum gud punch lines thrown in. well done. Peace out
..Dope Name..his punches were hitting harder..although D.Liver you held your own..your strated out kind of weak(and corny)and Dope's line about Victory(it was a little crony)but Ikinda liked it..good verse from both of ya..flow was the same and meta was about the same..but..Dope got this with harder punches..Vote-Dope name..
Uppin' (4)...
Dope name got this his shit hadstrong punches and he had
abetter flow and use of wordplay....D.Liver you ight man juss
quit tryin to force punches and try to flow a lil better.
vote:Amp