cutastraphe vs lyric

10 lines
no crew hate or dr...
no bs votes
i'm typin this a second time
due in 2 hours..
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checkin in, good luck, and no feeding^ too. I;ll post soon

damn i'm postin first...so i'm checkin in now....let it be known!!

Lyric u ready, my tens bout to start...
simply dround this fart, only lyric u got-the sound is soft/
i think this clown is lost, lyric not really RB...
he's just a new cat with no crew and no rap
his flow are wack, sucks so much and even blows his stack/
this hoe is crap, lyrics are waste as manuer...
face it son, your so dirty i had to-chase u out the sewer/
no doubt i'm almost near the end, son u betta fear this friend...
i'll have ya tearin to the end, as i'm simply clearin my breath/
L must be adherin death, so shook up he's appearin as stressed/....

ten
one

k postin ina sec. Not a bad verse. Best of luck, 50 fuckin characters....better than 100 tho

I de-feet you easy, like amputatin ya ankles wit a chainsaw
My shits all well-done, but your still a lil bloody and raw.....
My rhymes are like sweat cause they flow out me naturally.....
Sting ya eyes if ya get too close and cause a real Cutastraphe
Actually this bitch is steppin, but his game aint goin nowhere..
Like a tread mill, you be testin but ya failin bad like ya ca-reer
You say ya from in my chest, caus you seem ta think ya ill
I could tear you up with my rhymes, or with a couple Advil!
Dawg you flow like you come weak slow and your real short
Of a victory cause lik

*Of a victory cause like extasy i make your style contort

aight yo.....................i see where u comin from......lol aight let's get some votes

my badi meant to say good spit let's get some votes..and yehhhh i'm just playin spittin how i can at this point i will spitt wheneva though....gl peace

this is the wackest battle ive ever read
it actually hutrs deep inside me to knoi we got ppl like this in the site

^whateva, at least drop some kina opinion and dun freepost. Uppin fo honest votes (1)

lyric got this one, cutastraphe waz kinda wack... lyric got better wordplay although hiz rhyme wasn't that awesome. Lyric of cutastraphe, if u wanna battle me, holla at me in pm... PZ. Both keep elevatin'.

lyric got it in my opinion as well. cutastraphe wasn't hard hitting enough, and didn't get personal enough. nice rhyme scheme htough from cutastraphe where he repeated previous rhymes in his lines, but that was the olny redeeming quality. was pretty good on both parts though, but lyric was just a little bit better, with more cunning punches and a nicer flow.

punches lyric: My rhymes are like sweat cause they flow out me naturally.....
Sting ya eyes if ya get too close and cause a real Cutastraphe

metas lyric: Like a tread mill, you be testin but ya failin bad like ya ca-reer
You say ya from in my chest, caus you seem ta think ya ill

wordplay lyric: kindof played but its aight.... I de-feet you easy, like amputatin ya ankles wit a chainsaw
My shits all well-done, but your still a lil bloody and raw.....

personals cut: i think this clown is lost, lyric not really RB...
he's just a new cat with no crew and no rap

overall i gotta go with lyric

uppin # 2. Hit this shit up. Drop a link and we'll check it out

basi:

lyric took the wordplay from the first line
he had better punches, cut you need to elevate more
all you fuckin hattas stop freeposting

vote: lyric

Wack vote. Gone -Token

yea sorry hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=107921&page=2
and my topical vs rule

thanks, uppin #3. Drop a honest one please. Thanks

This is actually your 4th upping. Every post after both verses are dropped count as an upping.
-Token

lyric took this shit, it was a wack battle, but a close wack battle!!!
lyrics punches hit harder, an thats all that won the battle for him!!

Shitty vote - Gone -Token

i think lyric got this one cuz he came harder and more creative. cut....u didnt flow that well and some shit didnt seem to rhyme even in my eyes and im pretty opened minded to that shit....work on connecting punches and just all around coming more agressive. lyric came a little played but nowadays everything seems played....the de-feet is kinda over with...but u still punched better and your shit connected more nicely.

vote: lyric

close battle.

hit this up with honest votes guy...i toook the time to vote on ur shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109418

k Final uppin. PLease drop an honest one here. Leave a link and we'll check it out, thanks

lyric got this..he had better punches
...way better flow..cutas u a midwieght
dawg u let i newb get you..u punches was
absent..and u need to practice on flow..

vote:Lyric

Lyric totally got this....and here is why....cautastrophe is so whack...his shit didn't rhyme didn't flow the punches were basic the vocab was elementary.....it was bad it hurt me to read it...ow my brain....Lyric not bad good punches get more personal...it'll help you win battles...face it man straight punchin is nice but gettin personal is the shit that legends are made of......