no crew, no d.r, no biting, no feedin, no gay shit
you know the rules. check in when your done w/ your other battles
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no crew, no d.r, no biting, no feedin, no gay shit
you know the rules. check in when your done w/ your other battles
checkin in.. comeon wise
ya other battles done...
You spit first...
Since you want to battle me so bad
I won't feed or read ya verse
I'll start keying when i see it
how bout you start keyin in now..n' then post in
30 to 45 minutes... sound good?
Whatever...
You start keying too...
And your next post better be your verse
Im droppin shit n' you wanted to know what an oxy cotton is
Aint chu the same dude who thought shootin the breeze was injectin doses of oxygen?
Yous a faggot.. take seeds to practice magic n' double a hat trick
laugh quick to back shit like herb-able back kicks.. i'd give you a chance-
-but fact is, you never had it
Ya believed poor, i've seen more from a seahorse.. n' bleed more then dream whores
please sport.. What "Wisdom you Witholding"? Your keyboard?
it was said sum how, i read this how from a head thats bowed
i get lead by pounds.. "SUICIDE INC?" shouldn't you be dead by now?
I select him from selections or rejections that met him
who you wanna step wit? yeah hes gon' Wise WayS.. in the wrong directions
best be kissin ya health, im livin un-felt n' inches aint the only thing under my belt
so why diss a dude whos signature disses itself?
Listen.. it'll help.. i come quick to stick in to prove me
you cant out do me.. only place you hot is in a god damn jacuzzi
im stern to see moves, n' a herb is in too, so its worth my rhymes tune
obviously never heard of me dude, welcome to the emergency room
im to ill to write too, to filled for might dude, n' im right beside you
standing next to me in a lightning storm would be the only way skill could strike you!
waitin on u man.......................
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Can't compare our elevation..I'm at tha top..you're suffering from inertia
Congradulations! Thats offically tha gayest Eminem quote I've heard of
Born on Halloween? shit how original.. He evn gots tha Mike Myers mask
Herb is over riden with wack.. Cuz where ever you spit.. ya talent lacks
So eager to battle or eager to get merked..tha fucks wrong with this kid?
You must hate life! Look at tha bottom of my sig.. cuz thats what he did
Hardhitter?what a fucking lie..bitch you tha opposite..more like hitting soft
And Its too easy to son you.. I don't know wheather to kill hitter or adopt
Not much I can say..peep tha top of tha thread..even underrated in his poll
Must be pissed off..Seeing so much greatness..looking in from tha window
For full efect of punches peep his profile, name, sig, avy
And you can't change anything about yourself till this battle is done
For full efect of punches peep his profile, name, sig, avy
And you can't change anything about yourself till this battle is done
posted that to feel as important as you
Multis-Hardhitter by a longshot...
punches-Hardhitter...need i quote them?
Personals/disses-Hardhitter....lol "it was said sum how, i read this how from a head thats bowed
i get lead by pounds.. "SUICIDE INC?" shouldn't you be dead by now?"... HAHAHA
flow-obviously hardhitter
wordplay-neither had good examples....
sorry i don't have 100 posts for a poll vote...
vote goes to hardhitter
nice shit hh...i've only been here for a couple days but u seem to be one of the best heads i've seen around...
peep my battle vs dizzy hommel
thanks, but can we get sum poll votes here??
uppppping this
word this was a close battler hardhitter actually came correct which was more than i expected by a long shot....anyway...multis hard hitter never stopped with the multis over used the damn bitches you know how annoying that is some of the shit was stupid multis too...anyway...Personals.....you both had nice personals....but i'd have to give this one to hardhitter he just used more ....some of it was played....but he had alot...
Punches...this one has got to go to wise ways...his punches stung a bit more in my opinion...hardhitter threw alot but he's gotta work on makin em hit not just throwin em out there....opener/....ahahh Wise ways took the opener...his was funny as fuck lol...nice play off the sig dawg....Closer...Wise ways took this one too dawg...the lines don't seem to even to me and shit was just too simplistic from you hardhitter if you look at shit like your last line it just seemed like your dying for multis....i'm lookin through that bullshit..and givin this to WISE WAYS....no hate to anyone..hit this up 1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109265
Wise Ways: Couldve came a lot harder. Wasnt really feeling your verse much, you had a nice structure but thats about it.
HardHitter: Structure needed some help with. You had some nice punches, but also, you need to improve. Work on your structure and on wordplay.
V/ HardHitter
thanks.. uppin
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^^^lol^^^^Quote:
Originally Posted by BaNE
herbs and there freinds....
Heres an honest vote
punches- Wise (much harder, much simpler, more to the point an funny)
flo- Wise (by a land-slide, hitter was ALL OVER the place)
multi's- Wise (hitter had alot more, wise's were wittier better places an better quality)
wordplay- Tie (wise's was minimal...hitter's was dumb)
meti4's- Wise (same deal as wordplay, but wise had funnier ones)
personals'- Wise(halloween merge wit the avi was nice double personal, again hitter had more, but none of quality)
overall- Wise
it's simple....He knows what he's doin...Hitter needs to be seasoned
friends? i dont know no one on this site
n' your missin sum shit here carson.. be real here
I am^^
ur all over the place wit stupid meti4's....and weak personals
sorry im not in ur voting ring...
voting ring? where are you comin up with this? i have 1 win man
n' been on the site for like 2 weeks.. i think your stretching shit farrr
to much here. n' my punches weren't weak cock sucker
dont sway
then dont sway for him
its simple.............................
You've exceeded your upping limit...
If you post in here again.. you will dqed
And you are swaying hitter.. quit arguing with tha voters
#1
Ya believed poor, i've seen more from a seahorse.. n' bleed more then dream whores
please sport.. What "Wisdom you Witholding"? Your keyboard?
it was said sum how, i read this how from a head thats bowed
i get lead by pounds.. "SUICIDE INC?" shouldn't you be dead by now?
these two really took it for me
I mean Wise ways knows what hes doing being the more experienced emcee.. but i think he underestimated the new kid here. his flow was inpecable n' they actually had punches.. not just flow. Wise had the even side of personals n' punches but hardhitter just wowed me in this battle.. did not see this one coming
v...... hardhitter
Both of you guys need to elevate.
Use metas to connect your punches.
Anyways..
Hardhitter definetly took this with better flow.. hard hitting punches.. and staying consistent with it. Wordplay was lacked.. No good wordplay in this battle worth mentioning. No stand out lines either.. So I'm not going to mention any. You both have potential though. Keep your head up and read some battles in LLL.. that'll help you out.
V/ Hard Hitter
man. carsonjet ridin dick there, no rules bout crew votes here? anyways, hardhitter took this, because wiseways had a very basic structure and used the 'same-old-same-old' whereas hardhitter had some nice multis and his wordplay was good. some parts could have hit harder, but i liked his flow. different. i think wiseways was a lil too confident, and not wise enough...
vote: HardHitter
no hate...
^^
Nice hate vote faggot
Carson Ain't in my crew
*walks to IR*
ok.........he probably migth thnk this is a hate vote but it honestly istn...so heres the breakdown...
Flow:both...good enough
Structure:wise...smaller and easier to read
punches:hard...some ill punches from hardhitter...favorite line from both
Hard:
Ya believed poor, i've seen more from a seahorse.. n' bleed more then dream whores
please sport.. What "Wisdom you Witholding"? Your keyboard?
wise:
Hardhitter?what a fucking lie..bitch you tha opposite..more like hitting soft
And Its too easy to son you.. I don't know wheather to kill hitter or adopt
personals:wise had some ill personals.
mutlis:hard...hard structure but more multis were found within the flow.
metas:....coudlnt find any....
overall:close battle but hardhitter gets this by mulits. not a total merking...just my 2 cents...no hate...probably might think that but no hate beef thats just about it pz out
Hardhitter upped this 6 times. Therefore he is DQ'd. Read rules people.