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nO hate
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crew
feeding
biting
we gotta both rap before 5 central cuz ill be gone by then
I Checked In Already So You Can Go Now............
You Know Im Not Serious, Gettin This Win Hands Down...*
Looks And Looks, But This Clown Has No Skill To Be Found...
Rock Bottom, Named Off A Wrestelrs Special Move? WHACK!..
Hit You In The Face Wit My Punch, Gettin Hit Like The Black Jack...
Scared To Drop First, So I Gotta To Fulfill His Wants..**
Verse So Ill, Leavin Him Silent Like Luxious Resturraunts..
His Verse Has No Vocabulary, Look In The Dictionary...
My Sound Thumpin The Speakers, Leavin You Buried...
I Dont Wanna Do Ten Lines, I Already Know That I Won...
Gotta Make My Verse Gray So This Pussy Dont Run..***
*= Peep His Sig
**= I Have To Drop First
***= Gray- Hard To See- Invisible, Get It?
w/e I'll go ......................................
Far From Fatal...Your Rhymes Are Nothing But An Attempt,
When You Fail To Kill...From Rb You'll Be Exempt!
This Is My First Battle...But It's As Good As Your Last
After I Merk You...Your Prime Will Be In The Past!
Your Verse Is A Mirage...It's Easily Seen...But I'll Never Feel It,
Cuz Your Punches Arn't There...You Can't Throw A Real Hit!
Your Gonna Have Lethal Infections...Cuz My Words Are Lethal Injections
Like Pascal's Principle...When Against Me Pressure Comes From All Directions!
Fatal Mirage Is Nothing...I've Already Fought Em,
And Like Rock...I Left Him On The Bottom!
rikki-tikki-tiiiiiiiiiiiii vote on it pleeeeeeease
no one vote cuz we be newbies.....come on vote anyway
me is wanting it very muches for you to votes please
^^ you r gay wit that rock bottom shit but no hate
rock bottom loses this becus my crew member LethalNJectionz used that lethal infections line b4 and you bit his shit
besides you had like 1 punch
fatal had more punches, better flow, and his shit rhymed the whole time
vote/ fatal mirage
also Fatal, you wanna join dynasty soldiers?
Uppin, You Forgot To Poll ^^^^^^^^^^ ....................................
^^ no i didnt you r winning 1-0 and i am the only other person in this thread
^ faggot fucking hate vote bitch....anyway uppin..
Uppin again................last one me need votes.......
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Originally Posted by Fatal Mirage
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This Is Exactly Fifty Characters
Nice verse from both...
Fatal had some pretty creative and good punches
But he had some filler... get rid of that
You had good flow
Rock i wasn't ya shit till a couple lines in
Need to work on whats a punch homie
so
V/ Mirage
uppin
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Your Gonna Have Lethal Infections...Cuz My Words Are Lethal Injections
Like Pascal's Principle...When Against Me Pressure Comes From All Directions!
i think rock bottom took this, but if you can show me a link to the supposed battle where he copied this, i will reconsider it (which doesnt mean ima vote the other guy)
uppin.............................................
I thouhgt Rock bottom took this u both had flow an punches not bad from u both but i liked rocks verse better structured....good shit..likes ya personals..
Vote-Rock bottom
Hi ti t up honestyl Plz. Cuz i took the time votin on this..pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487
lol truthfully, fatal won this battle with his finisher.
"I Dont Wanna Do Ten Lines, I Already Know That I Won...
Gotta Make My Verse Gray So This Pussy Dont Run..***"
dat right there won the battle...nothing that rock did could compare to that line. So Fatal took punches for sure. Structure is basically a tie vote...both of your lines looked a little strectched. But I won't judge flow because both of you have a different style, which I can see by reading, and it wouldn't be fair to judge the one that was msot similliar to mine. Don't need to comment on anything else, Fatal won this battle.
vote- Fatal
Return the favour and drop a honest vote on the battle in my signature please. Thank you.
Last Uppin
Fatal Mirage Up Count- 5
Rock Bottom Up Count- 6
This Was A Nice Battle But Ima Go Wit Fatal He Had An Overal Btter Verse Punches,Wordplay,Personals/Disses, Etc....
Vote=FATAL
You Know Im Not Serious, Gettin This Win Hands Down...*
Looks And Looks, But This Clown Has No Skill To Be Found...
Rock Bottom, Named Off A Wrestelrs Special Move? WHACK!..
Hit You In The Face Wit My Punch, Gettin Hit Like The Black Jack...
Scared To Drop First, So I Gotta To Fulfill His Wants..**
Verse So Ill, Leavin Him Silent Like Luxious Resturraunts..
His Verse Has No Vocabulary, Look In The Dictionary...
My Sound Thumpin The Speakers, Leavin You Buried...
I Dont Wanna Do Ten Lines, I Already Know That I Won...
Gotta Make My Verse Gray So This Pussy Dont Run..***
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pretty nice shit here lacked creativity on a sense but nice flow
and pnches and personals were pretty stable i say 7/10 k
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Far From Fatal...Your Rhymes Are Nothing But An Attempt,
When You Fail To Kill...From Rb You'll Be Exempt!
This Is My First Battle...But It's As Good As Your Last
After I Merk You...Your Prime Will Be In The Past!
Your Verse Is A Mirage...It's Easily Seen...But I'll Never Feel It,
Cuz Your Punches Arn't There...You Can't Throw A Real Hit!
Your Gonna Have Lethal Infections...Cuz My Words Are Lethal Injections
Like Pascal's Principle...When Against Me Pressure Comes From All Directions!
Fatal Mirage Is Nothing...I've Already Fought Em,
And Like Rock...I Left Him On The Bottom!
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struc fell off at the end and flow was kinda choppy so yea
imma say overall a 5/10 or a 6/10 somewhere between there
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vote/fatal...
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109339
hit this up if you will k peace