He accepted so im checkin in and its blind spit so ill drop when he checks in.
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He accepted so im checkin in and its blind spit so ill drop when he checks in.
150 + polls for votes
Checkin in........
How many lines are we havin then?
I dunno how many lines so I'll just start keyin up til I think I've said enough
Time to settle this beef....
....What made you put Fuck LM under all of your posts
You suck at OM and battles but make attempts at both
....What annoys me the most is you claimin to be dope
But just admit it, bein recognised, you've got no hope
....I wished you'd choke....be a loss to your shitty crew
Well not really, coz the other members are iller than you
....Your I.Q must be really low to think your any contest
Fuck it, filler.......................just thought I'd take a rest
....You've never impressed anybody on this fuckin site
Damn!, your like a mountineer who's afraid of heights
....Plus you pre-write, cant keystyle a single fuckin battle
Well thats obvious, coz all you ever be spittin is babble
....Now you dabbled in beef wid me, your left in a coma
Fuck you, I cant be bothered now, this bullshit is over
Done
Oh yeah...for the people who dont wanna think,
line 2 - OM = Open mic
Just thought I'd clear that up
I ain't Phayme, put ya lame shit away its obsurd,
every lyric u spit I swear it's shit i've already heard,
whenever LM tries to spit he ends up swallowin words,
and ends up shittin out his lyrics, save that shit 4 the birds,
LM ya styles decrepid and aging ima make ya retire,
cause ive seen you boostin lyrics..Wynona Dik Ryder,
if I doused you in flames u couldn't start a confligration*,
get pounced and mamed by my lyrical elevation,
you had plenty of time to smite the KID, whyd ya try,
thats like suicide jumpers tryin to go back...won't fly,
im th killa, this niggas illa than me i doubt it,
cause on the rilla, i'll fill ya body wit bullets so drown bitch
u better copy and paste or get some help writin ya shit,
and flip my name around im tired of niggas ridin DA DIK,
Now its over
iight...
this was a good battle... LM takes it... he made you look stupid, without even seeming to try... he had some good hard hittin punches... and personals... wrecked your crew and you... haha
your verse wasnt bad... it just didnt hit hard enough, and was off flow most of the time...
im not gona poll... im in same crew as LM... but in my honest opinion... he takes this...
Vote - LM
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...88#post1109188
Phayme was a cat he battle and said he didnt bring his best.
Confligation: fire
Smite; to beat(beat)
Uppin this shit yo. U..P..P..I..N .................................................. ....................
LM, I like how he put his words together...
It was easy to read and he had some decent punched...
Very consistant with it...
Killa ha a punch or two that i was feeling...
Pretty consistant with everything..
Both had decent persanals...
I gotta go with LM, based on the fact that killa went kinda basic in some lines, and the last bars wasnt well done, good concept but what about the "killa" part...
Anyway, nice battle fellas...
Keep doin it...
-W1
forgot to poll vote...
*done*
-W1
lm - good structure.........flow was on target.........vocab was pretty tight........good multis........some of the wordplay was ill........most of the punches hit hard.........nice personals
da killa kid - pretty good structure.......flow was pretty good.......vocab was nice........some of the multis were good........i was feelin some of ya punches, some i thought were wack.........tight personals
conclusion - lm takes this in flow, multis, and punches so he gets my vote.......
VOTE - LM
Uppin for votes (1)...........................................
....What made you put Fuck LM under all of your posts
You suck at OM and battles but make attempts at both
....What annoys me the most is you claimin to be dope
But just admit it, bein recognised, you've got no hope
....I wished you'd choke....be a loss to your shitty crew
Well not really, coz the other members are iller than you
....Your I.Q must be really low to think your any contest
Fuck it, filler.......................just thought I'd take a rest
....You've never impressed anybody on this fuckin site
Damn!, your like a mountineer who's afraid of heights
....Plus you pre-write, cant keystyle a single fuckin battle
Well thats obvious, coz all you ever be spittin is babble
....Now you dabbled in beef wid me, your left in a coma
Fuck you, I cant be bothered now, this bullshit is over
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9/10 pretty good hard punches hard and direct personals
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I ain't Phayme, put ya lame shit away its obsurd,
every lyric u spit I swear it's shit i've already heard,
whenever LM tries to spit he ends up swallowin words,
and ends up shittin out his lyrics, save that shit 4 the birds,
LM ya styles decrepid and aging ima make ya retire,
cause ive seen you boostin lyrics..Wynona Dik Ryder,
if I doused you in flames u couldn't start a confligration*,
get pounced and mamed by my lyrical elevation,
you had plenty of time to smite the KID, whyd ya try,
thats like suicide jumpers tryin to go back...won't fly,
im th killa, this niggas illa than me i doubt it,
cause on the rilla, i'll fill ya body wit bullets so drown bitch
u better copy and paste or get some help writin ya shit,
and flip my name around im tired of niggas ridin DA DIK
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8/10 pretty good but wasnt to great decent punches
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vote/LM for better werdplay and for making more sense
hit this up please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108857
Uppin for votes (2).........................
Im tired..so ill make this short.
vote LM for better punches..
Ill come back later to put up a more detailed explanation.
Uppin for votes (3)............................
LM took this by way of better punches and personals....killa kid your verse was aight but you just got out classed....needed to come a little bit harder then you did...but overall it wasn't a bad battle...LM just had a more cleaned up, well rounded verse.....return the favor and vote on the battles in my sig please
Nice pretty even battle, both had witty punches, an aiight personals!!!
LM takes it though as his hit harder than killas, nothin much to seperate the verses!!
plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...10#post1115110