Telekinetic vs Tek

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No hate or dr
Blind spit 30 min after check in

Check.. bring heat dawg.. les get it poppin..

iight drop me da link when done fa sho
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You think you're up to the test? There's no way you're touchin' this vet
I come wit thunderous text, you need dashes, just-to-make-ya-punches-connect...
Tele's gettin overthrown, Use this broke MC to carve another head in my totem pole
You get ya boys to carry ya' dick, cuz we all know, you can't 'hold your own!'...
I'm a ragin' homophobe, beatin' this faggot wit potent blows, til' his soul implodes
This Poet is tryna make 'spectacles', when all his foes have been 0 - 0...
You talk about Thug Appeal? That's no deal, Answer this: What kind of a hoodlum
Forever gets on his knees 5 times a day, and their religion aint even muslim?...
Challengin' me into this battle, I'm keyin, and mah shit still blow minds
You get no feedback, so b ready to give opinions on all ya own lines...//

Lyrical soldier please, Tek musta forgot to bring the ammunition
He come to battle naked like a bitch that's learned a new position
WIT is missin an lines are gay like fagots walkin on tight ropes
With ya punches fallin short like small retards with high hopes
Tek is gettin smoked like a Philly when Iverson didn't get the ball
Ya battles gettin NO ANSWER worse than a damn busy phone call*
You stalled like a broke elevator, elevation for you is one in a million
By the time you get to fealin this level I'd done own the fuckin buildin
I'm as clever as Moses, an Tek you know this parts your lyrical waters
Don't think I KANE you're ABLE now there's two biblical slaughters**

* Allen Iverson's nickname is the answer get it?-- no answer
** Kane killed Able in the bible for those who don't know

Uppin for votes...................................

aight... not a bad battle actually... but ima break it down:

punches - eh.. tek: he had some real good punches and tele, u had a few good ones in there, just none really stood out...

multis - tek: his multis were a bit better than tele's...

flow - tie: both were real good...

opener / closer - tek: tek took this with ease... opener AND closer were real good, and tele's opener was tight, i didnt understand ur closer even with an explanation...

well, not bad guys... peace...

vote - tek

ill edit my links into here when i go dig em up... peace

damnit... wouldnt let me edit... sorry for the free-post... but here are my battles... be sure to return the favor...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108207
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108113

Ok the last line- Moses parts a sea in the bible and Kane is used instead of can
"I Kane your Able" I put tek in the role of Able. An Kane killed able in the bible- I killed Tek in battle. That makes two biblical slaghters. Get it!

I see comlex shit isnt goin to work here.
If you dont get my shit why vote?

shit.. this battle was REAL close in my mind.. but I see it like this...

You both had nice flow, that's about a tie.. everything was about just as good as the other.. punches both sides were pretty nice. but my honest vote goes to tek on this one... I think he just edged ya out telekinetic.. I was really feelin his lines.

vote- tek

Return the favor, please.. battles gettin slept on real bad.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266

I understood the line first time an i think most peeps will.. its not neccessarily them not understandin it.. they jus mite not think much of it.. anyhow..

let the votes continue..

a close battle. both had good flow to them and both had good punches but i felt teks lines betta

Vote-Tek

Thanx.. but do that again an ur likely to get banned.. its jus not cool.

Yo, I can't poll vote in here yet.. sorry... but i'd appreciate some people checking out my battle and voting. Its been up way too long. (this isn't a free post- i voted a couple posts up)

punch: tek
flow: tie
multi: tek
meta: tek
structure:tel
enjoy: tie

vote: tek

tek came with the stronger n less played punchs..just need to fix up ya structure n lose the bolds..tel has potential..keep at it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107590

please hit that up

Appreciate the feedback.. been a long time since someone gave constructive criticism..

uppn.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108596

Hit that up please

Tek ripped this kid in every category.....not that your whack...Just aint on teks level yet...cant poll vote...good battle

Peaceful

yeah uppn this.. wanna get another battle goin.. -followin links-

Tek- NIce Verse, Bad Structure, SHorten Your Lines ANd Youll Be Even Better Then you Are Now. I LIked Your Multies, And your Punches Landed Pretty Hard. NIce Flow, The Multies Kept That up. NIce Verse, Ok Wordplay

Tlekinetic- You Came Weak, NIce Vocab And Wordplay, With Nice Flow And Structure, But Not Great Punches. They Attempt, But Missed. Nice Vocab n Wordplay. And your Flow Prolly Tied With Tek's.

Punches- Tek
FLow- Tek
Wordplay- Telek
Vocab- Telek
SStructure- Telek
Multies- Tek
Opener- Tek
Closer- Telek

I Dunno, Close Battle TO Me, But Tek Took THis Win

Hit This Up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109027

This was an aight battle in my eyes
But in tha mayne essentials Tek got this
His punches were more complex and harder
Tele you came with a nice verse full of metas and wordplay
But tek just got you with punches and personals
Tele prolly got flow.. but thats not enuff

so

V/ Tek

Can you hit this up... Its third page slept on and I'm outta ups....thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108823

Yo, I couldn't poll before... but I already posted my reasons for my vote-tek.. polling now..

Please hit up my battle though. It's 4-2... honest votes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266

alright i'll say it like this..props to telekinetic much elevation since i seen him last...nice verse good punches they were witty and hard hitting....you just got a lil outclasses in this one....Tek nice verse really goood wordplay nice punches....some not pretty original......you want some constructive critisim i got some for ya...get rid off any line having to do with his dick .....the fact that he sucks dick....i mean u used them well but a real muthafucker is above shit like that.....Tele you came hard and earned my respect in this battle but tek been doing this for a while and just came even harder.....LOse the bolds i agree with sphere....peace out....