B.I.Detained Vs $pitacular

10-12 Lines
No feeding
No hate
No B'shit
Drop 2 hrs afta Check
Gives time for other shit
I got a crew Now lol^
Check in B4

G'Luck
pz

yo Brix checkin in

holla at me when you online so we can do this shit

Yup I'm on now
I'll wait for you to get bk on then we'll both Spit
pz
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U tried to Keep Me Outta Elite... then your The First to jump on my Dick
U tell me you Gotta Crew Now... then you Point Out that it's Shit (see top)
make U feel like you went Back in Time... when you "Become History"
the Way I Lay you Flat..... you'll always be "Brix" to me
Even my Style's Startin to Soften... cuz I battle You too Often
get you Punch-Drunk till you're "Hammered"... to Put the "Nail in the Coffin"
I'll make you Bleed Pussy, Period... wiggle my trigger Finger & Bang
leave you're Body Wet & Bloated... like your Name's B.I.Retained
how many Aliases will you go by? Fuck it's already been Too Many
I know you don't have Multiple Personalities... cuz you don't have Any
Funny how You're Finished... when my RB rep's just gettin Started
Oh - and you need to fix your Sig... it Should read "Audible= Garbage"


* "laying bricks" = construction/masonry term

Token accepted him in Elite..*Shakes Head*..I hate wen Mods Fuck Up
Spit claims he never Rides the Dick..yet his Ass is caught in Stirrups
Another Clear-Up..call me Clearasil..the way I get rid of Nitty-Gritty Shit
or a Tabacco Kit..coz I'm Known for Chewing up, Swirling & then..*Spit*
he got me on a 3-2 Deficit..the 1st time I battled Spit I came 1/4 assed
but the Last time I actually turned up..I ko'ed Him in a Different Class
coz Even tho you're Elite..your Name will always be Tarnished to F.Lines
CProgress cud change all Poll Systems..but he cud neva Turn bk Your Time
your in Decline..I Hope Feebs sees this & Relegates back to your Origin
Spit deserves to be w/ all the Noobs..like Chrit w/ his Wins to None-Again
theres no Ink in your Pen..No key In your Fingers..Spit Defines W'Block..
his Heads just become a Countdown..another 5 votes then the Clock Stops

s'pose to be no feedin... usin the "turn back your time" after my shit is feedin dog

but whatever g'luck

pz

wtf?? I dont get it!! where have i fed??
must see summit I cant n I put No Feeding in the Rules
I dint read ya verse b4 I did mine
anyways uppin
& g'luck too
1st

Spit=Nice Verse I Liked The Personal About Brix…Nice Line You Was Consistent Nice Setup And I Liked Ur Punches And The Flow Was Good
B.I=He Was Aite He Came Ok But He Was Rusty On Some Lines And I Wasn’t Really Feelin His Verse It Was Kinda Off…But Ok Opener But HMmm

Vote=Spit He Took This Hollaz

lol uppin
1st
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wataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

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U tried to Keep Me Outta Elite... then your The First to jump on my Dick
U tell me you Gotta Crew Now... then you Point Out that it's Shit (see top)
...try to use links sparingly...this really aint a punch just a statement
make U feel like you went Back in Time... when you "Become History"
the Way I Lay you Flat..... you'll always be "Brix" to me
....quotes??? meh this was ok
Even my Style's Startin to Soften... cuz I battle You too Often
get you Punch-Drunk till you're "Hammered"... to Put the "Nail in the Coffin"
...wow played and quotes again...
I'll make you Bleed Pussy, Period... wiggle my trigger Finger & Bang
leave you're Body Wet & Bloated... like your Name's B.I.Retained
....does not rhyme much...either way nope
how many Aliases will you go by? Fuck it's already been Too Many
I know you don't have Multiple Personalities... cuz you don't have Any
...decent
Funny how You're Finished... when my RB rep's just gettin Started
Oh - and you need to fix your Sig... it Should read "Audible= Garbage"
...not bad decent :mad: never say that again!! lol jk


Token accepted him in Elite..*Shakes Head*..I hate wen Mods Fuck Up
Spit claims he never Rides the Dick..yet his Ass is caught in Stirrups
...nope
Another Clear-Up..call me Clearasil..the way I get rid of Nitty-Gritty Shit
or a Tabacco Kit..coz I'm Known for Chewing up, Swirling & then..*Spit*
...decent
he got me on a 3-2 Deficit..the 1st time I battled Spit I came 1/4 assed
but the Last time I actually turned up..I ko'ed Him in a Different Class
...not a punch just a statement
coz Even tho you're Elite..your Name will always be Tarnished to F.Lines
CProgress cud change all Poll Systems..but he cud neva Turn bk Your Time
...meh
your in Decline..I Hope Feebs sees this & Relegates back to your Origin
Spit deserves to be w/ all the Noobs..like Chrit w/ his Wins to None-Again
...ok could have been worded better
theres no Ink in your Pen..No key In your Fingers..Spit Defines W'Block..
his Heads just become a Countdown..another 5 votes then the Clock Stops
...meh


well this battle was definitly not up to elite standards....

BI - your structure all of a sudden changed for this one?
go back to your regular cuz this was stretched...
your punches seem to want to be good but you drown
them by your poor word choice...you only had two
decent bars that i saw

SPIT - stop using quotes so damned much... and links
use them sparingly...your punches are kinda played...
you also need some work on wording and such...you only
had two decent bars that i saw and one was played

overall - BI i just think he came harder...
btw i asked token if i could vote, and since it aint
a text it dont matter...plus i vote against BI all the time
when he loses

^^lol

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Ok.. I let Spitacular in under probation.

And he has not met the dope level he originally showed me.

So Spitacular is now off the elite list.

and BI Detained.. I'm very dissapointed.. I'm tempted to take you off the list as well..
But I'll give you another chance.

Carry on.

Spits Opener Was Funny As Fuck...LoL...But He Pretty Much Went Downhill From That...BI Hard Harder Personals And Punches...Which Is What Wins Battles In My Opinion..No Hate...

Quotables

Quote:

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Originally Posted by $pitacular
U tried to Keep Me Outta Elite... then your The First to jump on my Dick
U tell me you Gotta Crew Now... then you Point Out that it's Shit (see top)

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^Nice And Funny

Quote:

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Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
your in Decline..I Hope Feebs sees this & Relegates back to your Origin
Spit deserves to be w/ all the Noobs..like Chrit w/ his Wins to None-Again

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^1st Line Good, 2nd Line Was Nice

BI's Opener Was Also Funny...Just To Lazy To Quote It..LoL

Personals - B.I.
Punches - B.I.
Vocab - Spit
Opener - Spit
Closer - Tie

Vote - B.I.Detained, Close Battle But B.I. Gets It For Having Continuous Punches Throughout His Verse, If Spit Wouldve Continued As Good As He Did With His Opener He Woulda Got This

Will You Two Please God Check My Battle Against Mentill Before It Goes Into A Coma..

Yo Token you're entitled to your opinion but I disagree with you. Every line of my verse was based off of the history between Brix and I - and if you read it, it's all on point and the truth and his verse is shit. Basically, his verse opens by dissin You, not even me. Yeah I could have done better but to remove me from the Elite list just proves that I am constantly discriminated against every fuckin time on RB - I see a lot of wack ass verses, even in Elite, but nobody is riding those muthafuckas while every one of my verses is overanalyzed and picked apart. Most of the cats on the Elite list wouldn't even hold their own with me and you know it (I'm not referring to the respected Vets) but if I don't deserve to be on the list, neither doesn Brix or a gang of other emcees. Just had to say my piece. Well anyway Toke thanks for giving me the chance, wish you would reconsider the removal though for real

pz

yo Brix no hate

This is just part of the reason I removed you from the elite list.

I've seen other battles that just aren't as dope as the one you showed me.
Until I see that again.. You're off the list.

and Brix is on probation right now.. I'm just going to wait until his next battle to decide

You rite
I jus came w/ too many weak/Fillers
but I do come good..all my other battles here
are good
jus that I battle good heads and lose lol
Oh well..Spit'll be bk
Uppin

hate to disagree but i think spit came good,, most punches were good and most of his wordplay too,,, bi detained came mediocre but showed some potential,, his lines were stretched though so he needs to sort his structure and try making his punches clever therefore hitting harder, i havent seen any of spitaculars other battles but i think off this one he deserves to have another chance in elite... but i aint the mod :(

so vote spitacular

I'm seeing things Spit's way as well...

Just thought he had a tighter verse...

That riddled BI with personals.

Nothin wrong with Brix's verse...

It was tight too, just wasn't near as personal.

Well, it was, but the shit was too round the bush for me...

Nothing hit direct, (like the Chrit line, it hit him first)...
(softening the effect to me)...

Spit was wittier and more effective cuz he just came right at his opponent.

That's all, dukes.

Peace

this was very close

both of these verses were some what dissappointing

spit yur verse was just kinda lacking the hard hitting punches

it seemed to fall short with the personals

and you didnt attack him hard enough

BI yur very first line was dope

but then yur verse just started to go downhill,

the flow was a little off but thats not a huge deal

vote BIDetained cuz his verse was a little bit better

I know ya'll elite's probably don't care, but here's my two cents:

$pitacular: I thought your verse was great. You had good personals because you were able to go back. Made for good punches. Nice wordplay and good flow. Keep elevatin'.

B.I. Detained: Your verse was great, too. You had good personals and punches, but you just didn't come as strong as $pitacular. Good wordplay. Keep elevatin'.

I'm sure you both can do better like you say you can, but:

Vote: $pitacular

And, I respect your modness or whateva, Token, but I don't think that is really fair. Maybe he was just off his game that day. I don't know much about the elite, though.

And, Poppa Bean, just curious, but how did you get a custom avatar when you are a newbie? ^^^ Please PM me with the answer, or anyone else who knows.

BI gets this win

Spits lines were decent but nothing hard hitting...personals were ehh and 'quoting' isnt needed...

I'll make you Bleed Pussy, Period... wiggle my trigger Finger & Bang
leave you're Body Wet & Bloated... like your Name's B.I.Retained

did not rhyme to me...at all... so that was a definet problem...the punches were not that bad, just not that great

BI..
and this rhymes how?

your in Decline..I Hope Feebs sees this & Relegates back to your Origin
Spit deserves to be w/ all the Noobs..like Chrit w/ his Wins to None-Again

you had some decent punches, 1/4 assed was my fav...nothing great either but defiently more consistent

vote BI

/\he is british...you know them bloody bastards have lazy tongues



jk :)

V/ BI He had harder punches, other kid had some iite punches, but nothing real special, .. i thought he lacked real punches, and there for got edged here!, .. =)

Punches : BI
Flow: BI

Vote : BI Detained