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no d/r (no carson/kaos theory votes)
no crew
no unexplained votes
must check in
verse due by sunday 1/25 at 1:oopm
i got shit to do this week such as final exams, projects, and deal with my school expulsion! (got kickd out for rappin bout killin a teacher)
i accepted this challenge cus i need to elevate, and i thought this would settle our beef
this is not my check in, and plees follow the rules !
***verse due by sunday 1/25 at 1:00 pm (afternoon 1 o clock)
checkin in...............
Aight.... Agreed...
But 1:00pm where?? what times??
RB times or where you live??
I'm 3 hours behind you Ice
*And no freeposting by Prophets faggot ass who I just beat
i live in philly so i got eastern time (-5 hours) why were you from?
this outta be interesting...ill make sure no d/r votes come on this shit.....
i got suspended didnt get expelled, im home all day monday, i will prolly drop either saturday afternoon or on sunday, if my pops dont take my comp privledges away, so if i do a no show, dont rat me out to the mods, ill drop when i can get back on, i might have to drop on my comp at school, but it might have to be pre written, shit is confusin, or
u wanna call this off for now, and ill open a new thread when i can get back on this shit?
and i aint bitchin out, i just might not be able to get on my comp , cus ia int tell my parents yet! so dont use this as an excuse to hate on me!
^^ aight fuck imma drop today, my popz still dont kno so i gotta do it today
keyin....
Yo this cat wise ways, is prolly older than me, but im sonnin’/
You would think I spit wit a taser, the way my flows stunnin’/
Here to settle this beef once and for all, got tired of runnin/
Yo, im on the brink of killin all of suicide inc./
I’ll Blow they brains out, so they cant think/
And leave em on ice, like babies at skate rinks/
This crewhopper, got more beef wit dynasty than a triple patty whopper/
,Hes softer than butter like hes betty crocker, im a lyrical jalepeno popper/
Meanin im hot, I put an end to him, so call me iceman the showstopper/
Yo You may have beet prophet but I leave you wit lost conscience/
Your names kaos theory and wise ways, Aliases? Stop the nonsense/
hes sweeter than the scent of baby powder, like Johnson and johnsons/
he gets Carson to d/r battles, go ahead and turn that down in your responses/
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109269
Carson d/r voted this battle, this is just 1 of many
…….
Now drop your shit wise! Lets end this beef!, no feedin off my shit either!
he lost that battle but carson still d/r, i didnt feel like lookin for any other battles!
so post ya shit wise!
Interesting how you keyed your 20 line verse in 6 minutesQuote:
Originally Posted by IceMan187
Aight... I'm get to keying now
one its 13 lines and i did it in like 7, it wasnt that hard dogg! my shit wasnt pre written, cus if it was dont u think i would have dropped a while ago being as this challenge has been up since like monday! and anyway im cool cus my pops dont care that i got booted, so i could have dropped anyway!
Called me out like 7 days ago.. Shit.. ya verse must be sweetQuote:
Originally Posted by IceMan187
Its Heat, Especially after admitting you been writing it all week
Ya rhymes antique.. Ice is throwing punches covered with dust
Plus I already whored you..so you just a lost and forgotten slut
I'll Eat this emcee.. Fuck it.. I could devour you.. just by nibbling
Ice.. I'll Son ya ass faster than you can say "Prophet's my sibling"
You a Top Gun?Shit..I'll Cruise right past you and split ya cabbage
It's like I'm Mel Gibsen.. Tha way Iceman's second best to Maverick
And For tha first time in History.. you'll actually get merked in text
Iceman187? How dumb can you be? Tha kids reporting his own death
Wise Theory just made a break through.. Literally tha Ice went thin
You a Herb? ya green..you reek of wackness..you fit all tha symptoms!
Wtf? I swear this fags retarded.. If I'm not mistaken thats a lame flow
I mean.. damn.. tha fucking dumbass walked straight into my Volcano
*caugh* merked *caugh*
Let tha voting commence
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yes...wise wasy wins with better punches
sorry i cant vote yet..but i wanted to see if elevated is better than
front lines...and so far the battles suck
uppin 1, yo how u gonna use that bullshit ass has to pre written line on me dogg
i got kicked out of school and i was tryin to settle beef wid you! you is a pussy
and i aint write it all week, dogg u makin shit up now, your personals aint even real wat the fuck has the rap game come to!?
but u got me wit that iceman187 reportin my death line, good shit, you earned your respect
nice shit except for the fake personals!
Shit this was a good battle
but i thought Wise Ways took this wit his metaphors an personals let alone his punches..killed this newb
took it in all categories...shit was heat
Vo-te-WW
Hit both these up Plz...Rite now..just clik em i got heat..
n i want to see if u r down to battle me Wise Wayss peep my Lyrics..an vote..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109536
can the poll reopened any one who cares if they get a win or not...but hit the lniks up i left honestly like i did on this
Add my poll vote in
yo is our poll messed up?
sum 1 try to vote again and see/ uppin
They aren't registered to vote....
And Iceman... Quit swaying...#1
^^ i wasnt swayin, i aint say nothing to the voters dogg.. uppin
#2........................
Vote!..................
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Flow: Tie
Punch: Wise
Meta: Wise
Structure: Wise
Personal: Wise
Enjoy: Wise
Vote: Wise
breakdown says it all
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109853
hit that up if you aint already
Uppin 4..............................................or maybe 3... cant remember,
VOTES!!!
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Yo this cat wise ways, is prolly older than me, but im sonnin’/
You would think I spit wit a taser, the way my flows stunnin’/
Here to settle this beef once and for all, got tired of runnin/
^this opener is simplistic....your scheme is predictable...you really didn't hit him with an punches here either...
Yo, im on the brink of killin all of suicide inc./
I’ll Blow they brains out, so they cant think/
And leave em on ice, like babies at skate rinks/
^its called filler you might need more prac in Fl before you bust here man...
This crewhopper, got more beef wit dynasty than a triple patty whopper/
,Hes softer than butter like hes betty crocker, im a lyrical jalepeno popper/
Meanin im hot, I put an end to him, so call me iceman the showstopper/
^this had a ok punch in it but the shit just jumped around so much and the last line just sucked.....
Yo You may have beet prophet but I leave you wit lost conscience/
Your names kaos theory and wise ways, Aliases? Stop the nonsense/
^ok personal but everyone knows theyare one in the same...
hes sweeter than the scent of baby powder, like Johnson and johnsons/
he gets Carson to d/r battles, go ahead and turn that down in your responses...
^see how i wrote that last word in there for you with the dots....thats a structure fix cause your shit is fucked....
Called me out like 7 days ago.. Shit.. ya verse must be sweet
Its Heat, Especially after admitting you been writing it all week
^ahhaha nice opener good quote...
Ya rhymes antique.. Ice is throwing punches covered with dust
Plus I already whored you..so you just a lost and forgotten slut
^meh not your best..in fact pretty weak
I'll Eat this emcee.. Fuck it.. I could devour you.. just by nibbling
Ice.. I'll Son ya ass faster than you can say "Prophet's my sibling"
^ooh i like it alot....good personal
You a Top Gun?Shit..I'll Cruise right past you and split ya cabbage
It's like I'm Mel Gibsen.. Tha way Iceman's second best to Maverick
^good wordplay you already got this battle by this line
And For tha first time in History.. you'll actually get merked in text
Iceman187? How dumb can you be? Tha kids reporting his own death
^this is very true this really wasn't a fair battle
Wise Theory just made a break through.. Literally tha Ice went thin
You a Herb? ya green..you reek of wackness..you fit all tha symptoms!
^wow nice ....keep the punches comin man ....
Wtf? I swear this fags retarded.. If I'm not mistaken thats a lame flow
I mean.. damn.. tha fucking dumbass walked straight into my Volcano
^meh your closer was just ok but i felt the middle....
winner ...wise ways...hit this up y'all its a good read and no hate....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110264
completely onesided here
wise takes all categories
flow-ww
structure-ww
punches-ww
creativity-ww
personals-www
along with whatever category i may have missed
ice your shit was played....and the rest was blah
dont take it to heart just being honest
keep spitten though
v-wise ways
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
wise ways won all categories in my view and this was a complete merking
i think that ice man has to go and practice more in the front lines or go to WAC to learn more
no hate but wise just killed you
he had every category and his punches were more direct and hit harder
v/ww
hit up the battle in my sig please
LMAO! Wise Ways verse was pure jokes. Verse shouldn't even be explained... but I'm a mod so I have to set an example. Almost every punch by Wise Ways was a hard hitting personal. The whole, "kid reporting his own death", witty. Had me laughing my ass off. IceMan... what can I say. You still spit like a newbie. Half of your verse weren't even punches... "I'll spit now and stop running" garbage. Just like half the other kids, you verse was just words that rhyme.
Vote=Wise Ways.
Vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108919
Yo this cat wise ways, is prolly older than me, but im sonnin’/
You would think I spit wit a taser, the way my flows stunnin’/
Here to settle this beef once and for all, got tired of runnin/
this doesnt contain a punch, pure filler...nothing more
Yo, im on the brink of killin all of suicide inc./
I’ll Blow they brains out, so they cant think/
And leave em on ice, like babies at skate rinks/
Nope
This crewhopper, got more beef wit dynasty than a triple patty whopper/
,Hes softer than butter like hes betty crocker, im a lyrical jalepeno popper/
Meanin im hot, I put an end to him, so call me iceman the showstopper/
wack, wack, wack
Yo You may have beet prophet but I leave you wit lost conscience/
Your names kaos theory and wise ways, Aliases? Stop the nonsense/
hes sweeter than the scent of baby powder, like Johnson and johnsons/
he gets Carson to d/r battles, go ahead and turn that down in your responses/
nah, not feelin' it
Your verse had weird structure, and lacked hard punches and creativity. Not a very good drop
Called me out like 7 days ago.. Shit.. ya verse must be sweet
Its Heat, Especially after admitting you been writing it all week
cool
Ya rhymes antique.. Ice is throwing punches covered with dust
Plus I already whored you..so you just a lost and forgotten slut
nope
I'll Eat this emcee.. Fuck it.. I could devour you.. just by nibbling
Ice.. I'll Son ya ass faster than you can say "Prophet's my sibling"
nope
You a Top Gun?Shit..I'll Cruise right past you and split ya cabbage
It's like I'm Mel Gibsen.. Tha way Iceman's second best to Maverick
eehhh...blah
And For tha first time in History.. you'll actually get merked in text
Iceman187? How dumb can you be? Tha kids reporting his own death
lol, nice
Wise Theory just made a break through.. Literally tha Ice went thin
You a Herb? ya green..you reek of wackness..you fit all tha symptoms!
first line was good the second line was blah
Wtf? I swear this fags retarded.. If I'm not mistaken thats a lame flow
I mean.. damn.. tha fucking dumbass walked straight into my Volcano
wack
You had a few nice punches. Could have been better but you didnt need it
Vote: Wise, for harder punches and creativity
Please drop an honest vote on my battle with GaZeebo
-W1
this was a complete merkin..........
iceman-u need to fix your structure and work on ya punches....your punches were really soft...u just didnt come hard at all.....u need to elevate a whole lot before u battle vets
wise-nice verse......u had some personals and some mad wordplay.....i was feelin the top gun line and the iceman second best to maverick.....thats good wordplay and a personal.....u had a nice ass verse and u took this battle pretty easily
vote/wise ways