Dreamin Remix

i just cut a loop from that track, Scribe - Dreamin... n remixed me into it.. n it came out very well.. hope ya enjoy.. n o yeah, drop links too..

http://verbal_conflict.dmusic.com/

upp..

I'm lovin the beat, Flows on here. Pretty good but your just rhymin any word that you can. Work on Uppin your lyrisism. You sound like you got marbles in your mouth. Work on that, It's prolly just your accent though. Emotion's ehh Pretty good though

thnx for the feed... uppin!!

i like, but the acent is killin me....i know its nothing u can change....but its killin me....

other than that potential most def, good beat and track to jack....

.pz.

thnx man.. n my accent is that bad???

im fron NY so yes, lol.....

ahahah.. aiight.. im from CA...

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Originally Posted by AlcaTrakz

im fron NY so yes, lol.....

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Don't you ever take taxis?

^^lol... but uppin!

Yo ya accent aint that bad cuzzin...
i actually thought your lyrics were straight on this...

just work on ya flow a little bit...

loved the beat on this trak cuzzin
overall this was nice
definitely see ya potential--mixed in well
when u get time peep my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108080
uno

thnx man,... n i'll peep as soon as apossible.. uppin..

wake up!

Listening...
Presence is tight right out the gate. Ridin the beat well. Flow's tight. I like this beat. "own perseverince(sp?)", other guys got tight flow, "touch the sky" "workin 9-5, hard work" word, i feel u on that tip. I like the concept, yall presented it well. Nice audio, all around. Good shit...return the favor...

^^thnx man.. n when i posted this track.. ppl think i know this guy(i wish i did).. but i never heard of him until couple days ago.. but he real dope.. from new zealand.. thnx though... uppin!

hot track...beats fucking sick...lyrics were tight..i like this track..accient aint that bad..but over all good track....nice work...keep doin ya thang VC

thnx man... uppin!

son shit was hot i liked it but your flow is a lil offo not sayin it wasnt hot tho u feel me but yo shit was hot mos def

thnx man... i'll redo this if i can contact this cat n if he say i can put it on my mixtape..

Uppin!

up up n away!