10 line min...14 max
no d/r
no crew
no bytin
no hate
due in 30 min or dqed*
1 :thefinger
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10 line min...14 max
no d/r
no crew
no bytin
no hate
due in 30 min or dqed*
1 :thefinger
jay nova, bout to get run over, n over,
wanna be mc, jockin jay z,
ya hecked ya ava, seein that i knew u had no flava,
new to rb, a winner is what u wont ever be,
u's far from killa, u aint got 1 in ya trailer,
so ya must be on the libaries comp, either way u gettin stomped,
fuckin wangster, talkin hard u's an aol gangster,
imma spit wit tef, cut off ur right, n leave ur other half left,
my nine milly, have u spread like cheese from philly,
all over a bagel, dam u dont want to tangle,
ur flow should be telegrafic, i picture u caught up in traffic,
hope u on dial up, can see u paying for dsl when u suck,
only thing u know about the projects, is what u hear in ur headsets,
comin here new,repersent the world worst crew, fuck it im done so your thru.
mods close this this cat is alway whinning in his battles if some one goes over the line limit, or the time limit an hes past 30 mins to drop.
he sets the rules then dont abid by them, or if u dont whines. this should be closed.
for example this is what he wrote in his last battle.
is this a fuckin joke........imma take it easy on this cat....and u had more then 12.....14 homie....WOW....but check this you
DAN...DA MAN!....ur whack...what u flowin for?/
i dont want to be the main reason u bout to go 0 and 4/*
battlin me...where do u get OFF WITH THIS?/
cause u flow like a LAXATIVE...all you spit off ...is SHIT/
well u was at home...practicin ya ryhmes spittin/
im SERVIN you in this battle....i geuss u can call my ryhmes chicken/*
ya ryhmes is so bad...im surpised they aint makin the news/
cause u couldnt win this battle....IF YOU PAID ME TO LOSE?/
last bar....takin easy well i blast at it/
but i still got this cat breathin HEAVY...like he was ashmatic/
yo this cat wasa fuckin joke man....up these votes...or dq him for breakin the line limit...either way i get the win....1.....HAHAHAHAHA
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Jay-Nova and ReaLL.......
spit.....
A T O M I K
F L O S
HAHA WE DO I ALWAYS GET STUCK WIT THE WEAK CATS....
O WEL...HEAR WE GO...BOUT TO TAKE IT EASY ON THIS CAT...AGAIN!
yo jae roc...you bett dunk when them thangs pop/
before i put bullits hole...WHERE YA ROCK YA TANK TOP/
I aint JAY........bust u must be smokin that "LA LA LA" SOLDIER/
cause when i rap...my punches will DUST more then DIRT OFF UR SHOULDER/
who u think u playin wit.....them ryhmes that ya spit/
they couldnt win...if a MOD DQED my shit/
thats cats fam..got him so GASSED up/
when i spit FIRE....im surprised it dont BLOW his hoe ass up/
YUP....its WRAP kid.....no need to be testin/
cause the only thing u RIPPIN...is the PAPER off this PRESENT.../
didnt even try man.......this cat is crazy...were does he get off?.....1
dawg it went over 6 mins....i have a life homie..and spit first...have 30 after u spit bitch...stop whynin and lets gets some votes.............
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lets get this thing closed ...........................................
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Why Would We Close It Dumb Ass.....i Went Over By 6 Mins.....i Could If It Was 20 Or 30.......so Calm Down Dick........lets Get Some Votes.......
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jae - ok structure..........flow fell off.........vocab was basic.........ok multis.........bad metas.........no wordplay.........punches were weak..........no personals
jay - structure was good......flow was ok.......vocab was basic.......some of the multis were good.......no metas.........wordplay was tight........some of the punches hit hard.........good personals
conclusion - jay nova takes this in strucutre, flow, wordplay and punches so he gets my vote
VOTE - JAY NOVA
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105947
much appreciated.........
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~:Fav Line:~
Ja'e RocQuote:
Jay Nova
YUP....its WRAP kid.....no need to be testin/
cause the only thing u RIPPIN...is the PAPER off this PRESENT.../
last bar....takin easy well i blast at it/
but i still got this cat breathin HEAVY...like he was ashmatic/
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Flow~Jay Nova
Vocab~Tie(BasiK)
Metaphors~Ja'e Rock(Weak)
Punches~Jay Nova(Hit Harder)
Multis~Jay Nova
Wordplay~Jay Nova(Nice)
Overall Vote~Jay Nova
~:Explaination:~
Punches Hit Harder Ok Wordplay And Good Multis Won this For Him
Cla$$ick.....It's On
Ja'e Rocs Second Verse Is Mine That He Copied And Pasted To Show Some Stupid Point.......his Verse Is The Very First Verse Written...one.....so I Geuss He Liked Both My Lines....
Uppin # 3.................................1............... .......................1..................
uppin #4......1......................................... ..............................1.............
ja' roc?....was that a battle verse?....ok umm....Jay nova merked this kid, it wasnt even funny....He had a ryhme scheme and honestly thats all he really needed here,
whats goin on these days wit these newbies?.....wtf? seriously...
vote- Nova
nova need2 explane........................................... ..
only need to in order to merk this fag....lets go...........................1.................... .............
Punches: Nova
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Nova
Opener: Roc
Closer: Nova
Personals: Tie
Vote - Jay Nova
I don't know which is Jae Roc's verse, but I counted the 2nd one, just cuz it was a lot better, but still not good enough.
they couldnt win...if a MOD DQED my shit
Best line of this battle.
Could you return the favor, in my sig
dawg JAE ROCS VERSE......is the FIRST verse.....the second one is a VERY OLD BATTLE of mine....1............so count his first 1
Either way, both verses got beaten by the 3rd verse
Jay Nova got this... his lines connected instead of breaking off in the middle of his rhymes... Both need to elevate... Jay Nova had the more elevated verse tho so he gets my vote...
Hit up my battles plz...
ya both were whack but i would go with gillz...****************************************** ******** ************************************but hey i will vote after 100dsfsdgngfhjgfjgfhgfbngtgf