10 lines 30 mins...
Blind sopits.. we both drop at the same time..
Good luck..
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10 lines 30 mins...
Blind sopits.. we both drop at the same time..
Good luck..
^ Blind spits I meant...
Checkin' In...........
checkin in..........................................
This herbs a fellow Welshman... the kind that makes us look weak
'Cos before you reach ten posts son... ya reaching one defeat
Ya structure needs building on.. < 'Constructive critisism' incurred
Facing me? It ain't the scope... ya whole vision must be blurred!
You're a standard newbie kid.. one glance at ya verse 'n it shows
For every poll you obtain... the voting emcee's nose grows!
Lyrical Sniper... *Ahem*... probably the most original handle yet
You've got it three times in your drops.. still... its easy to forget
I say "Nobody can beat me"... this loser's like.. "Yeah, I can!"
^ Work it out.. I caned your drop before your typin' had began!
you call your self harlens finest "but you come from a small town in wales"
your just like peter pan thinkin you can beat me "grow up your telling tales"
This is a lyrical war " and i'm the dream master in command"
again your like peter pan with your lyrics you can "Never Never Land"
you suck man liturally, fuck harlems finest, "change your name to Dyson"
and you copy and paste others rhymes and flows "and bite off others like mike tyson" :laugh:
i'm evil nigga "i rip shit and take rappers souls"
luck for you, you aint in an election "coz you aint gettin NO votes in the polls"
your birthdays on christmas eve " ill remeber to send you a card"
but i'd rather send you a christmas present" leave your bones shatterd and scared" :shoot:
ok uppin for votes.... :thumbup:
I've seen worse battles
punches - lyrical
personals - lyrical
flow - harlem
creativity - lyrical
opener - harlem
closer - harlem
OVERALL - lyrical......on punches and personals
LM are you serious?..
Peter pan lines?
Tyson lines..played as fuck.
& personals? There was only one true personal..
and it belongs to Harlem & the whole Wales thing.
..Also Sniper dont bold parts of your verse & seperate ur bars.
Also work on creativity...& be more complex.
..Harlem also had more direct hitting punches, hence the handle line.
Not a very good battle, but Harlem takes this..more creativity.
(& LM you know better then to vote like that..
uppin............................................. .......
haha he voted for the sniper kid?lmao kid clearly lost..whats sup with all the peter pan lines? extreme gayness..and a tyson line?thats not only played..its dead...what a pointless battle..
v/harlemsfinest aka aftermath
Uppin x2......
Don't forget to poll the votes, drop a link etc...
Uppin . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Harlem had nice complexity, and consistant with punches, throughout...
I liked snipers secong peter pan line, but his verse was flat besided that...
Harlem cont it with pur consistantsy, and how he put his words together...
Plese return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=107595&page=1
v/harlem, if you didnt get that from the explination...
-W1
uppin.............................................
yeh..um...peter pan?....grow some...really....
Harlem pretty much ran this shit...He didnt drop really hard, but he did have a steady structure with basic consistant flo...Mixed with a few OK personals....
But that wasnt the factor in this at all....
Sniper had the newbie bold my punches style wit a space every bar set up...
^^thats not what we look for.....
The fact that u used the words peter pan and never never land in your punches was enuff for me to give this one to harlem....
vote harlem
drop an honest vote here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108025
uppin.............................................
Uppin...
harlems finest takes this one in my eyes!!!
sniper came played- copy an paste
an wack- peter pan, (nice try though)
harlem had better punches, format, wordplay, in fact he probs get this in all aspects nit just the important ones!!
plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108420
I thought Harlem ripped this up and down with personals...
Wordplay was decent, pretty tight.
Punches had hurt on em.
And the format was pretty flawless, great flow.
Lyrical was a bit stretched, flow suffered a tough.
Punches and wordplay were weak.
Nothing was even close to hard, no where near.
Sorry.
Vote: Harlem
Opener - Harlem
Flow - Harlem
Structure - Harlem
Vocab - Harlem
Punches - Harlem
Closer - Harlem
All the punches in snipers verse were old and played. Harlem flowed really well and had some nice punches, with some originality.
Vote - Harlem
If you could return the favour it'd be appreciated.
Pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106511