20 lines
20 mins
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house rules
ding ding mutha fucka!!!!
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20 lines
20 mins
200 posts to vote
house rules
ding ding mutha fucka!!!!
mic check one two..............one two!!!!!!!!!!!!
yo man thaught we were doin 10?.............20 in 20 is to much................you ite with 10?...............................pz
aite dowg 10 iz straight......................holla
thx alot man.,.........................check in................................................ ......................pz
yo ite man rip it,
yo bitch rhyming hints....youve got rhyming blips,
leave you dazed im hard to see dawg...like window tints,
youre a faggot bout to rip your lines up as if K was a shreadder,
eat your fucking cheese lines as if this bitch here was chedder,
this bitch is a bad spill im about to wipe him of the floor,
you hardly qualify for elavated...front lines is the other door,
its me whos not youre average(avy)...cause with K comes experience,
knowing that i aint gonna let this herb beat me is my number 1 coherance,
youre so far from me...i can just see youre ass in the mist,
dont it make you laugh...freebase(aka nitemaree 9-16) is the dopest on your list.
...............pz
Just take a break from rappin, and just give it a little rest/
Cuz with these "bullets" that Im spittin, your Computer Screen needs a Vest!/
Reverse Each Word And Maybe You'll Have Somethin I Understand/
Cuz I Disperse Heat In Each Verse And Leave You With Swollen Glands/
Jus Quit,No Rappers For Hire,Only Hot Spits Is When You Perspire/
Kinda Like Punchin Through Phones,Im Connect In Through A Wire/
Try To Admire How I Make Emcees Expire With Clean Flows Like Detergent/
These Words Blurtin,Like Low Blows,Im Leavin "Kids" Hurtin/
No Need For Re-Wordin,"No Games" So Im Leavin This "Kid Clue-less"/
L's Im Refusin,Like Suckin Off The Soulchild...Its Time To "Face" The "Music"/
iight...
.:K:.
yo bitch rhyming hints....youve got rhyming blips,
leave you dazed im hard to see dawg...like window tints,
quite a decent opener... 6/10
youre a faggot bout to rip your lines up as if K was a shreadder,
eat your fucking cheese lines as if this bitch here was chedder,
good punch... 7/10
this bitch is a bad spill im about to wipe him of the floor,
you hardly qualify for elavated...front lines is the other door,
haha... better than the one before^... 8/10
its me whos not youre average(avy)...cause with K comes experience,
knowing that i aint gonna let this herb beat me is my number 1 coherance,
good vocab on this one... decent punch... 7/10
youre so far from me...i can just see youre ass in the mist,
dont it make you laugh...freebase(aka nitemaree 9-16) is the dopest on your list.
haha... tight closer there man... liked it... 9/10
Rythmic Hints
Just take a break from rappin, and just give it a little rest/
Cuz with these "bullets" that Im spittin, your Computer Screen needs a Vest!/
decent opener... ok'ish punch... abit stretched... 5/10
Reverse Each Word And Maybe You'll Have Somethin I Understand/
Cuz I Disperse Heat In Each Verse And Leave You With Swollen Glands/
first line was just filler really... second line was an ok punch... 6/10
Jus Quit,No Rappers For Hire,Only Hot Spits Is When You Perspire/
Kinda Like Punchin Through Phones,Im Connect In Through A Wire/
decent multi... decent punch... 7/10
Try To Admire How I Make Emcees Expire With Clean Flows Like Detergent/
These Words Blurtin,Like Low Blows,Im Leavin "Kids" Hurtin/
haha... good... liked it... 8/10
No Need For Re-Wordin,"No Games" So Im Leavin This "Kid Clue-less"/
L's Im Refusin,Like Suckin Off The Soulchild...Its Time To "Face" The "Music"/
abit stretched... maybe could of been worded better... decent idea tho... jus didnt hit as hard as it could of... 7/10
[b]TOTALS
.:K:. - 37/50
Rythmic Hints - 33/50
K took this on points... quite close battle...
keep it up...
OUT
thx man....................uppin(1)................... ............................................pz
ok...a one sided battle almost....k had flow...structure..and punches..both were good verses...but k's flow had him more persistint to merk this kid...no hate but i was feeling more from k
my vote goes to k
aight........descent battle
k got this.........his punches hit harder and his whole verse flowed better..........he used multis which work'd...........
rhythmic hints had sum descent punches but ya need to work on structure a little........
peace
bit of a Schmeeeeeaaaammmm battle but!!!
Flow-K..not all that fluent but better noone the less
Punches-Just about K..Rythmic was creative..K was jus a lil harder
Complexity-R..gave more to the battle
Sustainment-Neither..none carried it all the way thru
Structure-K..looked iight to the Eye..crooked sumtimes
Enjoyment-Both..sum Good Imagery in punches
Vote-K
Punches win battles..not in all cases buit this one pz
MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107206
AND PUT A GOOD EXPLANATION
thx yall..........................................uppi n(2).............................................. ..pz
Instead of just sayin thanx lol..put a Vote on that link I left above
I put an Honest vote on this so do the same plz
pz
^.........................uppin(3)................ ....................thx........................... ......................pz
K's punches weren' the hardest I've ever seen...
But man, ya sure hit RH's personals nicely.
RH talked about himself and __________ opponents.
Coulda been anyonehe was speakin of.
And he wasn't even rippin them hard.
A few metas, a touch of wordplay...
But all soft and generic.
K wins for better personals and for the better directed punches.
Peace