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-1o lines max.
-Due-24hrs.
-You know the rules.
Checkin In.........
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Im About To Spit Hol Up
"Yea yea yea"
Yo Yall Watch Me Put This Foo To Bed/
This Fool So Wack I Can Take Him Sittin On My Head//
Look At These Lyrically Fine,well Designed Lines Of Mine/
Solgoob You An Alright Dude But Was Born With No Lines Or Even Rymes//
Ima Kill This Foo Right After Spittin This 5th Line/
Sol Thinks Im The Only Mc To Merk Him But Soon They'll Be All Kinds//
U Lil Stupid Wack Goofy Guy Known As A Newbie/
U So Wack Its Blah Just Like What Every One Heres Outta Scooby//
U A Rookie A Mommas Boy That Everyone Probably Calls Pookie/
I Can Kill This Herb Even If I Was To Bust Like Special Officer Doofy//
:done
Come On Ddogg Spit Fuck Homie...............
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Where Ya At You Got 18 Minutes Dude.........
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Mods Excuse Me But This Guy Is A No Sho
I Think He Should Be Dqed
What Do You Think?
Look Mods Im Sorry Bout All The Postin But This Is A Waste Of My Battle Time This Cat Didnt Even Show To Spit
And Hes The One Who Set It Up
Can You Close This Or Even Get Me The Win And Dq This Fool
No, I'm hear 24 hrs mean to the end of the next day. Atleast thats what I ment, so I have been to faded to write, I am going to drop a verse soon or before 12-midnight.
~No worry~
Skill wise this battle is like Allen Iverson Vs. Ronald Murray//You need to practise your shit,You heard me//Your type dont concern me//You must have written in a hurry//Was that a battle verse or were you trying to be flirty//This fag ante 17 he's over 30//I'd say I'm gonna rip you a new one but you'd probely think I was talking dirty//Your verse only matches par, I'm better like a birdie//How come you think your good, you arent even wordy//and there wont be a rematch cause you arent worthy//Here's a wake up like the blue pill//I'm real ill//Your the counterfiet, I'm the real deal//You dont have talent or skill//If you think your hot this will put you on chill//Your nothing this is a daily drill.
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Ronald Murray-pernounced, Murrie
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READY FOR Ya'll to be Voters.
Sol had the best punches and rhymes...
T's shit was real basic...
Sol got this one, hands down...
Please return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107595
-W1
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Upping
Upping For Votes*
Uppin For Votes*
vote solg,
breakdown
punches sol
vocab sol
structure sol
flow sol
metas sol
sol came str8 on all he was suposed to, krakkar just got crumbled up,
n left all soupy.
Tx for the reply's Uppin For Votes*
Uppin*
UPPIN For VOTES*
UPPIN, C'mon VOTE Ya'll*
Whatever People Dont Know About Good Verses Any More I Dont Give A Fuck Some One Vote
Upping*
Some One is really spelled like, Someone.*
My vote goes 2 kracka T cause he had betta punches SOL u need 2 elevate a little on punches and flow and structure it's to choppy and of course Kracka T has a betta verse 2 win but it was pretty even, Vote=Kracka T can ya'll return the favour please since I took time 2 vote of ya'llz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108019
Upiin For Some Votes Get At This Battle And Post A Vote Peace.........
Uppin for votes*
Will return votes*
My verse was directed toward my opponet Krakka t could have wrote that at school. people man, they dont understand what a battle be, mother fucking newbies.
Upiin For Some Votes Lets Finish This Battle Peeps Lets Get Some Honest Votes Ight Peace
Ight,
Krakka T Came hard with some solid punches, I think Solgooberdier came harder at times, but his shit wasn't as well written..
structure- Solgooberdier yer's was kinda wack, you gotta work on that
personals- I think krakka came w/ more creative personals,much cleaner.......
wordplay-it was really a tie , both used equal amounts of creativity in their shit...
flow-Krakka's was cleaner, Solgooberdier yers was iight but i dunno I think krakka jus composed his shit better....
a good battle...no beef... keep elevatin
v/ Krakka T
Be a honest person and peep my battles....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108569
SCORE
2-2
Upping for votes*
Yo Yall Watch Me Put This Foo To Bed/
This Fool So Wack I Can Take Him Sittin On My Head//
Not really feeling this opening.. The punch here isnt really directed not that hard of one either
Look At These Lyrically Fine,well Designed Lines Of Mine/
Solgoob You An Alright Dude But Was Born With No Lines Or Even Rymes//
the flow of it could be better, no real punch of meta
Ima Kill This Foo Right After Spittin This 5th Line/
Sol Thinks Im The Only Mc To Merk Him But Soon They'll Be All Kinds//
i was expecting a little more on your follow through.. the setup hadme thinking your next line was gunna be extreamly hard hitting, and it wasnt
U Lil Stupid Wack Goofy Guy Known As A Newbie/
U So Wack Its Blah Just Like What Every One Heres Outta Scooby//
your starting to lose me a little, i think some rewording would have saved this bar.. maybe make it a little more direct with the punchs/
U A Rookie A Mommas Boy That Everyone Probably Calls Pookie/
I Can Kill This Herb Even If I Was To Bust Like Special Officer Doofy//
um.. not really feeling this ending, the follow through had potentual, but your setup isnt a hard hitting one, you lacked some strength with your punchs...
Over all i think you should try directing your verse more twords dissing your opponent, work on the creativity it seemed sorta of rushed and generic.. Your metas are ok, but need a little better guidence when your spitting them... Try going for more punchs than metas though.
Skill wise this battle is like Allen Iverson Vs. Ronald Murray//You need to practise your shit,You heard me//
opening is eh. straight diss i suppose... not much of a metaphor
Your type dont concern me//You must have written in a hurry//
[/b] kind of a filler, follow through could have had more to it[/b]
Was that a battle verse or were you trying to be flirty//This fag ante 17 he's over 30//
ok attemp ok the personal.. Punch wasnt the hardest for setup or follow through
I'd say I'm gonna rip you a new one but you'd probely think I was talking dirty//Your verse only matches par, I'm better like a birdie//
it connects to the other bars well, with a decent punch.. but the follow through could have come harder with the meta punch
How come you think your good, you arent even wordy//and there wont be a rematch cause you arent worthy//
not much of punchs here
Here's a wake up like the blue pill//I'm real ill//
eh, this line could use some rewording, maybe strech it out a little bit, try for a harder direct punch
Your the counterfiet, I'm the real deal//You dont have talent or skill//
not the best as far as punchs go, but direct. Metaphor could have been spit a little better
If you think your hot this will put you on chill//Your nothing this is a daily drill.
ending wasnt to specil.. um wasnt much of a hard hitting punch or metaphor
Over all your verse was straight with punchs, had metaphors in there although they could use a little work.. I wasexpecting to see a little more personal punchs in your verse but it wasnt bad.
Vote-Solgooberdier
He came with constant punchs, had metaphors with an alright flow.. Krakka t's verse seemed sort of generic and strayed away from directed disses..
Both yall need to stop swaying votes
Peep the battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107825
Uppinnn Number 3 I Think................
Vote Peeps.....
Upiinnnn Num 4 Please Vote Peeps.........
Vote Vote Vote
Im Runnin Out Of Upins Lol
SCORE
3-2
My Lead*
My vote goes to krakka t cuz i liked his flow and da way he made his shyt seem like he wasnt tryin at all.........
vote=krakka t
can anyone hit up my battle against yo yo yo
Krakka T had sumthin too say but it didnt make much sense, "no diss too you" u were saying sumthing then started with sumthing else
solgoob u had sum good hits i liked em, u got my vote
overall the only thing that solo had better than krakka were multies. he had a shit load of multies and they were good but some were played. The punches were a tie they both had alright punches. wordplay was minimal from both and the personals were lack luster at best. Solo coulda won wit his multies but krakka had the better flow and structure.
VOTE_Krakka
You are the biggest DICKRYDER, no joke.
I have 3 votes and It dont show. I mean the graph.
Uppin Number 5
Vote Peeps We Need 1 More...................
Solgooberdier is DQ'ed for upping 14 times. READ THE RULES.