Soft Focus:The Voices In My Head. Feat Rule

Emotion:
Wispered Conversations between Me and my alter ego
Pondering on the true meaning of life and watching it grow
Beliveing and conceiving what my conscience tells me is right
Wondering how I started this fight,My Brain turns off like a light
I have to wonder whether the voices are evil or im insane
Watching this pain,laughing at the alter ego that lives in my brain,
He give's me options that i submit to a conversation, Understand
That everyone has these voices, It's just a mass array of choices
Who are u voice and why the hell are u so mysterious
It's like u turned me from someone normal to a phycho conspiratous,
I am fearing this, that the voices inside me head are hearing this
Plotting my trip to a pycho ward, PLotting lies becausetheyare a fraud
I wonder what caused them and why they are hear, My fear-
Is they will only go away when my family has to shed a tear
The voices driveme crazed, like they are constantly amazed
at my stupidity they blame me for there own idiocy
Im in a coffin now the voice shut down my private war
They found me hanging 3 feet above the fucken floor

Rule:
Rescue my inner confusion an ease my tension of lust
Debat my securities from within on what ego's to trust
Question myself regularily because i'm lost critically
I sit patentialy as my inner self fades away constantly
But if I just sit and listen to the souls in my bones
I may recieve answers for my destiny in unique tones
As I close one eye vision a cloud that'll rescue Mike
Put my hands together and pray for a brighter life
Shiny star an so far ahead of the entire universe
The consisious in my head will elimate the false herst
Rule hides from religion but I believe in god and jezus
Deny talent because faliur creates my life thesis
But the voices in my head know what's be strong
Guide the right path away from the dead an gone
Think so the voices can comunicate the reabilatated
Council denied emotions as the problem is exscalated
I'm lost don't understand pasion who see's the tears?
Graduated talent that's been suffering for three years
Nobody knows my pain or listens..but the voices
They guide me now..help me with all my choices

common ! uppin

what the fuck 20 000 members and no replies wtf??

WHAT THE FUCK 17 VIEWS AND NO FUCKEN REPLY

WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH RB THE 20 000 MEMBERS FOR GODS SAKE,

come one i will return the favour

yo this wus a really good piece... stuck to topic all the way through...
threw in some multis here and there in emotions verse...
pretty nice man...
rule had the better of the verses tho because he wus more on topic

thats just what i think... check out my open mic... Corrupted Visionz:reppin'
good work both of ya...
Pz....

thnaks ups

lets get some fucking replie one rpely in fucken two days

Wake up Rb

mad tight.....yeah dawg...u should hit up my shit...its open mike called you see my life...Damn it took me 5 mins to read yall shit..but some good shit....Keep up the good work man....Mine has audio wit it also...it has al link...but mad tight i wonder if yall do audio

Good verse Emotion....uppen for some more feed.

mmm it's ridiculous we've had hardly any replys

ye fucked up....uppen

wtf weve had like two replys this shit aint fare its ridculous

commmmmon uppin

alright this is gettin gay..now that the 3 link thing is gone...lots of pieces are getting slept on...damn

uppen

i know its hucken ridculous its fucken stupid i am gettin fucken pissed off replie motherfuckers

commmmmmmon uppin

hey that woz real nice, its a hard hitin peice, the flow worked well all the way through the vocab was good. nice peice dawg

7/10

can ya do me a favour now, go vote on this battle, it only needs 1 more vote and i cant up anymore. cheers.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108416

rule your flow was exelent, very tight piece, you both complimented eachothers peices

overall 8/10

commmmmmmmmmmmmmon uppin

Emotion. . You Had A Consistent Flow, I Was Definately Feeling Your Verse. . Content Was Dead On With The Topic. . Multi's Were Good, Vocab Was Good. . Only Thing That Bugged Me Was Some Lines Were Extended And It Knocked The Consistency Of The Flow That I Talked About. . But I Picked It Up And Everything Is All Good. . I Didn't Like The Idiocy Line, Just Seemed Filler And Didn't Rhyme With Anything Besides Stupidity, You COuld've Carried It One And Elaborated Into Another Line Overall Though, Real Nice Verse. . Quotable :

Wispered Conversations between Me and my alter ego
Pondering on the true meaning of life and watching it grow
Beliveing and conceiving what my conscience tells me is right
Wondering how I started this fight,My Brain turns off like a light
^ ^ Really nice start, Suggestion : Type Ya Verse In Word Pad Or Something And Use Spell Check, Some Words Were Misspelled. . Just A Tip.

Rule. . Your Verse Started Out A Little Rocky, Opener Was Pretty Good. . The First Two Lines Of It. . The NExt Two Didn't Even Rhyme, Ya Have To Watch Out For That. . Your Flow, Just Like Emotion's, Was Consistent. . I Judge PIeces On Flow, So You Get Extra Points. . Vocab Was Real Nice And I Like The Multi's In This. . Made Your Flow More Crisi And Edge Emotion's Verse. . Overall, Your Verse Hit The Content More Deeper And Better Than Emotion's. . Therefore, I'm Feeling Your Verse More Than His, But You Both Did A Good Job. Quotable :

But if I just sit and listen to the souls in my bones
I may recieve answers for my destiny in unique tones
^ ^ Dope, Real Deep, Feeling It.

As A Whole, You Two Complimented Each Other Very Well, I'll Be Looking For Individual Drops From Each Of You As Well As Another Collab. Pz.

Ok, I Spent Alot Of Time On This Reply. . So Can I Get A Decent One In Return ? Check Out - Doper Than Thou - , It's Up Now. . And If You're Feelin That, Then Drop Feed To - Make It - Which Will Be Up Later Today. . Thanks. Might As Well Let This Shit Ride To 2000 Characters. . . 2053 To Be Exact.

Will Hit Both pieces Up Shortly

comeone upps

upps