12 lines.. 30 mins..
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12 lines.. 30 mins..
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checkin in cuzzo who goin first????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
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Blind spits.. we both drop our verses 30 mins from now...
Harlem Finest DOnt get claps but you get an ovation/
Come through your hood and smoke you whole location/
you aint ready like a girl tryin to keep her virginity/
Im only gexperimentin' on you like guiney pigs/
you as fake ass they "cum" like a hitched orgasm/
all your rhymes old news like j maden sports caster/
you "cover up" like the Bitch your is/
and try to "make up" quick for what ever shit you in/
bars come softer than a box of cotton/
you get drunk cuz my rhymes hit hard like vodka/
im not hova but i'll roc-you-fella/
my words "melt-in" your mouth like motzerella/
I'm grateful to the mods for blanking battle stats.. pretty neat
Otherwise I could possibly be banned.. for preying on the weak
Like forgetful private eyes, this herb'll be gone without a trace
I can't refer the mentally challenged.. but I'll put Weezy in his place
Bad move kid.. you dropped in half the given time for fvck sake
Basically, I'm gonna capatolize.... on ya mothers mistake!
Check his custom text... Gangsta... Weezys supposedly well known
Had to send out a message to rival crews.... he used his cellphone!
Ya chances of victory are slim.. a vote maybe? Keep wishing..
Those gaps in ya verse... it seems the punchlines are missing
Open for votes..
I forgot to mention it up the top... 200 posts needed...
Harlem seemed to take this one with ease...
Weezy came all forced with a really bad rhyme scheme...
Hardly a bit of that flowed, let alone made sense.
I can see ya starting ta use metas and trying to utilize wordplay...
But ya all over the place with it.
Slow down, think shit out before keying.
Harlem did his thing.
Nice personals, good wordplay, nice punching.
Pretty weak closer, but everything else was tight.
Harlem fo sho!
Peace
ok....
weezy didnt make any sense at all...
His first line was played as hell, and the rest didnt even flo....
I don't exactly understand what he was trying to do here......
Harlem did a lil self glorification...which I hate....
The first bar was blah....kinda punch'd on your self...
The rest was ok, atleast u had a ryhme scheme and displayed some flo
easy vote- Harlem
harlem took dis battle no boubt.....good battle though
harlem had good punches.....flow....n structure......
weezy- good punches.....but not az hard as harlems.....werk on ya flow.....n ok structure
punches: hf
flow: hf
structure: hf
opener:hf
clozer:hf
hr took dis overall.....
plze hit dis battle up.....or if u dont....datz juss fuqed up........thnx.........
ill drop link.....soon
plzeeee hit dis up....only one vote needed............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106644
..This really wasn't much of a battle..Harlem took this one with no try at all...
Breakdown..
Multis-Harlem
Punches-Harlem(Weezy's shit didn't make no fucking sense)
Flow-Harlem(once again Weezy was saying shit just to be saying shit!)
Personals-Harlem
Meta-Harlem
once again an easy battle to call..Vote-Harlem
~Go here and..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&page=1&pp=15
Uppin............................................. ..........................
Uppin x2........... drop a link etc..................................
pretty easy battle to judge... harlem took this with ease... better punches, much better scheme, weezy, yours barely rhymed...need to work on that... all categories would go harlem so....vote=harlem
...return the favour
Uppin x3... One more vote... drop a link etc.............
harlem took this easy did wat he had to do,
with nicer punches and more consistent,
also he threw some personals in there and his flow was ite,
not rly close harlem wins,
plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107574 thx............pz