rules
10 lines, no more no less
i set up
you spit first
usual rules,
im sure you know what they are by now!!!
p.s
goodluck!!!
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rules
10 lines, no more no less
i set up
you spit first
usual rules,
im sure you know what they are by now!!!
p.s
goodluck!!!
im at school so il spit later!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!**************************************** *************
aiight man..............................................
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uppin.........so u can spit..............................
ayt im spittin now sorry 4 da delay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yo check it bitch
No Matter How Hard This Kids Tryin My Spit's Flyin At Alias
Finds The Bitch And Hits Quick Gives Him Fits Writhin In A Ditch Dyin
Master Plan To Collapse Ya Glands With Cannons When I Blast Ya Man
So Ya Crashland Like A Legless Rapper That Cant Stand Up To The Task At Hand
Pride In Your Bitches Eyes When She Realize What's Between My Thighs
Fantasized bout My Surprise Since Your Little Guy's Just Minimized
At Least You're Tryin But Cease Your Cryin Please Its A Beast You're Fightin
Reachin Rite Inside My Levis Jeans Dyin To Beat The Lion
Explosive Lungs Corrosive Tongue Consider This Post Closed Youre Done
My Flows Just One Just Another Victim Reign*Mans Roasted Son
ayt im done u spit
this kid, he be in the 'text book' of 'free agents'*
but it ok kid, the shit aint nothing major....
Xtreme Lyrical Gangsters have you played,**
and my opening 3 lines, just had you slayed,
i seen ur raps, an we should have pinkslips on,
an that aint no dress, flip word, an leave you spun,
if i tried in this battle, it would be a waste of lines,
force feed you my watch, give you a rough time,
with a record like urs i'd go away and die,
your a disgrace of molecules, a waste of life!!!
* http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/member.php?u=25260
his sig says text book, his sig- free agent
**XLG, Rbs wackest crew, he was in an now hes aint an tryin to get back in!!!
overall...a very weak battle....
structure- Alias(much better compact not stretched)
punches- Alias(Thats all he had...but the delivered nicely)
flo- Aliase(Rain was stretched and way off key)
Multi's- Rain(he had more solid ones....and more overall)
Meti4- Rain(Alias didnt have much here)
overall- Alias....he simply had a better battle verse here...
not good from either- both elevate...*1*
Reign Man Had this hands down, Alias, he beat you just because you piggheaded enough to say your the next pac, but he also ripped you w/ punchlines and meta's
v/ Reign man
You are referring to the wrong verse... so vote is gone.
-Axe
were the fuck did, i say i was the next pac, im havin this shit disallowed^^
fuck off alias that was a good vote, he had a explanation!!
lets get more votes up in here!!
btw wat the fuck r u talkin bout textbook or xlg 4??
A clear example of a d/r vote..it's been reported.Quote:
Reign Man Had this hands down, Alias, he beat you just because you piggheaded enough to say your the next pac, but he also ripped you w/ punchlines and meta's
v/ Reign man
Alias my Bad Dogg, I accidenlty read "TheWHitefLAMES" and I didn't notice the avatar,my bad , on the real, Mods Sorry bout this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ill break this down line for line
Reign mans verse
No Matter How Hard This Kids Tryin My Spit's Flyin At Alias
Finds The Bitch And Hits Quick Gives Him Fits Writhin In A Ditch Dyin
nice wordplay here
Master Plan To Collapse Ya Glands With Cannons When I Blast Ya Man
So Ya Crashland Like A Legless Rapper That Cant Stand Up To The Task At Hand
nice wordplay and multies
Pride In Your Bitches Eyes When She Realize What's Between My Thighs
Fantasized bout My Surprise Since Your Little Guy's Just Minimized
At Least You're Tryin But Cease Your Cryin Please Its A Beast You're Fightin
Reachin Rite Inside My Levis Jeans Dyin To Beat The Lion
again nice use of multies.. the disses didnt hit that hard though
Explosive Lungs Corrosive Tongue Consider This Post Closed Youre Done
My Flows Just One Just Another Victim Reign*Mans Roasted Son
overall this verse was filled with alot of good wordplay.. and pretty decent disses i give this verse a 7.5/10
aliases verse
this kid, he be in the 'text book' of 'free agents'*
but it ok kid, the shit aint nothing major....
Xtreme Lyrical Gangsters have you played,**
and my opening 3 lines, just had you slayed,
the wordplay in these rhmyes was pretty basic nothing major.. and the disses were pretty basic nothing mindblowing here
i seen ur raps, an we should have pinkslips on,
an that aint no dress, flip word, an leave you spun,
if i tried in this battle, it would be a waste of lines,
force feed you my watch, give you a rough time,
with a record like urs i'd go away and die,
your a disgrace of molecules, a waste of life!!!
overall this verse was pretty basic there was nothing real special bout the rhymers plus the disses were pretty simple and plain
overall vote: im voting for reign man in this battle.. he had better wordplay.. better uses of mulites.. and more clever lines than alias had.. vote reign man
ayt uppin!!!
drop ur links and il repay the favour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very close....but weak battle
regin- nice punches.....good flow...n ok structure
alias- nice punches...ok flow.....good structure
weak battle.....both culd do better......
but i think reign took dis for better wordplay.....
close....but weak battle
vote: reign
NO HATE OR D/R....
hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106822
These votes aren't allowed.
-Axe
Punches- rain
flow= alias
wordplay- rain
structure- rain
personals- alias
Reign= I Like your verse you had some nice punches and flow. you need to work on your structure though. this was a close battle, to make it not close, put some personals in your verse
Alias- you came weak, but it was ok. you had some nice personals. you had nice structure though, but it was a weak battle. Reign beat you cuz of his punches and flow IMO
Vote= Reign
Hit This UP
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106323
Rein got it with punches...
I was only feeling the rough time line from alias...
Rein was much more consistant...
Sorry guys but i cant poll vote yet...
Pleas peep my battle...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107595
-W1
ayt uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1 more vote and this is ova!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
aiight....dis battle could've been better....but imma go wit reign man on dis one cuz he was aiight but better than alias...he had better flow and was more creative......
vote=reign man
yo check out my battle againt c_lo i cant send link cuz i upped it too many times.it gettin slept on sum1 plz visit...
ayt uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just 1 more vote 4 me will end this so i can battle 1 of ur punk asses!!!!!!!
those people who voted i will vote on ur battles now
Weak battle...
punches - alias
personals - none
flow - alias
creativity - reign man
opener - alias
closer - reign man
OVERALL - alias......not very creative but your punches won it in my eyes
Hit the link up in my sig so my battle can be closed
These votes don't count.
-Axe
both horrible
flow- alias
multis-reign
personals- reign
structure- alias
punches- alias
vote- alias
These type of votes don't count.
-Axe
..Iceman, u should not be judging..
Anyways yeah it was horrible though..heh
Both very un-creative..& lacking..
Though Alias had the slightly upper hand in punches..
& seein as this is a battle n its all bout punches.
He gets my vote.
vote Alias
haha tru^^
for every
not a great battle....coulda been better...alias took it basically for every reason stated above..
v/alias
vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=100995
You give the shittiest explanations I've seen.
-Axe
uppin 3-1 2 me now lets get the show on the road again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The*Reign*Man is DQ'ed for dropping his link in a crew forum asking for votes.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107077