This is a repost.. did it wrong the first time.
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This is a repost.. did it wrong the first time.
Ok just re-post it in here, the other post is nothing sorry.
signing and dropping...
yo, why you botherin with this? when you know you gonna miss
go back to wearing make-up, dawg, and worshiping Kiss
you got no wins yet and the stupid name 'flood'
I will place a bet dat you will change it soon to 'Mud'
it's true dat I'm new, too, probly newer than you
but at least I got some flows and at least I gotta clue
this is slapdown, cracktown, 'Wak attack
I'll be fuckin supermodels, you'll be smokin crack -
in a little back street, on a blood-stained sheet
how you gonna battle me? you can't get to your feet
ho-no, dat was a bit lame. your turn...
I'm about to teach this "seargeant" who's bars-are-whack (barwak)
How to actually have a battle not a simple attack
Infact I'll subtract ya life with skills intact
while you lack a real back-bone, just got sacked now go back-home
If infact I did smoke crack- at least I'd have money ill just leave you with that
Oh wait- I still got 5 lines to go
Oh no, this homo better just lay low
Until I say so- this floods will un-clog you like Drain-o
With pain slow- I eleminate most foes and paint flows
Flood waters rise up 'n over ya head
You end up dead in the water like just like I said
ok..... so what ne one gonna vote or what.........................................
ummmmmm..........................................v ote?
weak ass battle both need way more work if i would give it to anyone it would be barwak only cause your opener and it still needs work
sorry guys upp your battles
someone should vote on my last battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107990
flow = Sargeant - flood your barz where inbalanced
punches = Sargeant - came a little harder witht the punches
personals = both pretty weak
multies = Both pretty weak
Vocab = sargeant - i enjoyed choice of words especially rhyming mud and flood... clever
Originality = both
overall = Sargeant
Flood takes this battle
Punches: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Multis: Flood
Personals: Neither (Flood had one, but it was whack)
Vote - Flood
while you lack a real back-bone, just got sacked now go back-home
Decent multis, but no punches in either verse.
Both need elevation
Drop a honest vote one of my battles, in my sig.
uppin for some voting please............................................ ............................
barwak was hopeless
Flood got it in every catagory, but feeding was gay, dont do that anymore...
whatmore can i say?
v/flood
-W1
vote flood
this was easy barwak is straight whack, flood had s nameplay which was like the only personal in the battle so i give it to him lines hit harder an were more felt..
my vote goes to flood..it punches hit harder and he was more creative with them..but it did do some hoe shit..he fed off seargent's verse..but even past that..he still ripped him..seargent's verse was too simple..no creative punches..he was just saying random shit at him
v/flood
my vote is flood
brwak is simply wack
vote my shi
return the favor
flood definitely won that one..... sargent you need lots of work... flood your shit was simple, but I like your style.... You won this one by a long shot
(Requesting votes in Log1k vs YOZkillah)
by the way... how many votes you need to make it official.. pm me
yo, why you botherin with this? when you know you gonna miss
go back to wearing make-up, dawg, and worshiping Kiss
not bad nuthing really hard on him
you got no wins yet and the stupid name 'flood'
I will place a bet dat you will change it soon to 'Mud'
blah nuthing to stronge
it's true dat I'm new, too, probly newer than you
but at least I got some flows and at least I gotta clue
nuthing tight no pounches or nuthing
this is slapdown, cracktown, 'Wak attack
I'll be fuckin supermodels, you'll be smokin crack -
blah
in a little back street, on a blood-stained sheet
how you gonna battle me? you can't get to your feet
best line throw the verse
um this was pretty lame nuthing really stood out no hard pounches or personals in here
I'm about to teach this "seargeant" who's bars-are-whack (barwak)
How to actually have a battle not a simple attack
better opener
Infact I'll subtract ya life with skills intact
while you lack a real back-bone, just got sacked now go back-home
aight pounch but still pretty weak
If infact I did smoke crack- at least I'd have money ill just leave you with that
Oh wait- I still got 5 lines to go
Oh no, this homo better just lay low
lol ok i guess nuthing to tough
Until I say so- this floods will un-clog you like Drain-o
With pain slow- I eleminate most foes and paint flows
good wordplayin
Flood waters rise up 'n over ya head
You end up dead in the water like just like I said
welll still prety weak but a much stronger verse
my vote flood
lol shit log1k I forgot how to pm.................
uppin 2 one more vote and its over...............,
uppin 3.........................................50
uppin4.......plz 1 vote.........................50
uppin 5.....wtf...vote..........................50