aiight
10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
no crew voting an all that shit!!!
spit your shit, an good look!!!
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aiight
10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
no crew voting an all that shit!!!
spit your shit, an good look!!!
Checking In..........................
yeh man no worries..... but more than 10 lines if we want.... is that oright
yeh, i will try an match you............................................... ...................................
Check it out before you read my verse
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=100875
let the humilation begin- this kid looks like some1 from Bready Bunch
puts on a hard act on RB, but lets mommy pack his school lunch
I check out you tried Audio, but where you going - its not for you
Text battling is the number 1 thing ur wack at, Audio is number 2
Your rhyming methods are going nowhere - on RB your a pest
Shouldnt have ever registered - just looked round as a Guest
this shit aint complicated... but its puzzling -you think you can beat me
Judging by your arrogance, if you were blind, youd claim u can see
B4 anyone votes, heres some feedback:
........ Its not your determination its talent that you lack.........
Even If your using pre-writtens- your verses still end up wack
You try hard, so i feel bad for making you look so stupid
Understand you couldnt make people like your verses - if you were Qupid
I tried to be nice, But that pic speaks for itself...
You dont look like Santa- you resemble an ugly elf
ok man... spit within 20 min
peace
my fists of fury, hittin you with punches a-plenty,
your a step down from born to kill, at the age of 20,*
im 'clockin' this new age 'grandfather' of rap,
your like a wire, as soon as heat near you, ya snap,
even deaf, and armless peeps give you the slow clap,
you try to cover it up, but like rap, you can't act.
this kid a no-body, what personals could i use,
give future battlers one, after he tooken 007s abuse.
i spit in future tense, whilst you rappin bout the past,
like bricks a window, one of us is gettin smashed....
an i can see right through you**......
a terrible waste of life, you as unwanted as the clap!!!
*Born to Kill, well known on the site, he pretty old, an EKI is twenty!!
**the window line, i can see through you = metaphor!!!
My breakdown:
punches - eki
personals - tie
flow - eki (just)
creativity - tie
opener - eki
closer - eki
OVERALL - eki......good battle, real close but he edged it. Props to both!
punches - eki more real
personals - double O, had more ground
flow - Double O, easier to read
creativity - Double, nice meta
Original - None, nothin original
I DUnno jus felt Double O's verse more, Eki wasn't wack or anyting jus lacked a certain something.
iight...
as im in same crew as double-0 seven... im not gona vote... but im gona take that time and give you both some feedback...
Eki... nice structure... and a tight flow... some good punches about him doing audio... they were good... liked them... best line was...
'I check out you tried Audio, but where you going - its not for you
Text battling is the number 1 thing ur wack at, Audio is number 2'
very good... creative aswell... some other nice punches... some complexity... good overall verse... props to ya...
double-0 seven... you structure and flow were tight... very good... had some good punches... liked the shit bout the future n all that... best line...
'this kid a no-body, what personals could i use,
give future battlers one, after he tooken 007s abuse.'
haha... creative man... very good...
im not gona vote... so im not gona sway the voting either...
both tight verses... and this is gona be close... or it should be... unless the d/r start to vote... then someone is gona get screwed...
keep up both if ya...
OUT
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Multis-Eki
Personals-Tie
Flow-Eki
Punches-Tie
Meta-Eki
..I thought this was a very good battle..but..Eki came ahead by a hair...peace..
~Go Vote~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104404
punches - ek
personals - tie
flow - ek
opener - ek
closer - ek
ovarall - eki......good battle,
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107036 vote in my battle and please return my favor
uppin
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I don't know..but Eki's verse gave me a simplistic feel..
Normally he has pretty complex..witty verses but this time?..
I dont know, anyways..you had some ok punches..a little plain..
Some ok personals.. nothing really breath taking..
Double 0, pretty consistant.. you always bring what's needed.
Some witty punches.. nothin really great either but i feel,
..You had the better punches & overall verse so..
vote Double-0 Seven
Poll voteThis bitch..
breakdown
open: eki
close: eki
personals: eki
metas: tie
punches: tie
multis: tie
vote=eki
can you plz vote on the battle in my sig its being slept on...
yeah eki did drop pretty simple...i think double 0 seven did drop pretty nice...it was better than eki to me..nothing outstanding to me out of this verse.. james bond did have some consistent punches
v-double 0 seven
vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107063
second time uppin.................drop your links an the vote will be returned!!!!
^^that's how u know kids on this site can't vote, when they drop stupid votes like that.....dude only had 2 personals and 1 of them was a slap the opener was the only good punch............eki came with some soft punches but more punches and punches is what wins battles not flow even tho it helps your verse.........overall Eki get's it......Quote:
Originally Posted by Toner
upin.............................................. .............................................
up3............................................... ...............................
last uppin............................................. ......................................
My breakdown:
punches - eki
personals - tie
flow - eki
creativity - tie
opener - eki
closer - eki
so from that i think eki beat u 007..his verse was just a bit better..i dont no if u feel that its true but i do an so does everyone else..
pc
hit this up honestly..wit a vote cuz i did in your battle pc..
Click it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107247
up yo tha top.............................
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punches- Double(harder and better overall...funny shit....)
Multi's- Double(more of them and a better display of them also)
Met4's- Tie
Personals- Double(much funnier ones....same amount but better quality)
Flo- Double(Eki was choppy then smooth....Double was more balanced)
Overall- Double
This was real close...
007 came with the wittier stuff...
Nicer wordplay...that "tooken" line was pretty tight.
But the punches seemed kinda mild from both sides overall.
Eki had a few played things, (cupid, elf (yeah, I know he had tha hat, it's still played though!)
Only one line really stood out, ("bunch/lunch", funny shit)
LM had the flow and nice complex closer...
That kinda sealed it.
Close battle, but LM...
Sorry, OO7, I mean...
Those cats remind me of one another...
So does High Class.
Sorry for tha confusion.
Peace