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10 Lines
Drop same time
Normal rules
Post 30 mins after check... to how close ya verse is done
check........waiting for you before i start keying
you wanted to holla at me, your an MC? this guys bout
to lose battlin against me, you should of stuck to beatin
off to gay porn intensely, we all know you took that
last line offensely, c'mon just tell me da truth, nobody else
will know, cause you got us all wondering why is this cat
tryin to flow, this cats a joke, you should only be thinkin
bout one thing tryin not to choke, i dont really care, ask
me if i think this rap shit is fair, your despair, i hand out
shaddered jaws like samples, i got plenty to share, my
rhymes hit you all at once, you beatin me is like jackie chan
doin his on stunts, now piece im out, i shouldn't be battlin
against fake ass niggas with virgin mouths.
{DGK}-DIRTY GHETTO KIDS
I thoguht you was gonna check in? oh well I'll start
my bad........................
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{DGK}-DIRTY GHETTO KIDS
This kids two faced.. one sides a herb and tha other sides wack
I Needed exercise.. so I started doing jumping jacks on his back
When tha battles over...
To-Faces record will look great.. in tha mirror.. lol.. a reverse KO
...You brake still and backwards spit could I here everyone show <--read backwards
He can't flow yet he rolls with tha sea food.. eat him like lobster
Battling? I ain't talking about baseball.. when i say L.A's a dodger
You ain't hip.. So why'd i waste my time.. I ain't throwing out ten
People still telling you to elevate.. when you on top of a mountain
you gonna drop or what nigga?....................
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{DGK}-DIRTY GHETTO KIDZ
Uppin 4 Votes!!!..................
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I Hope You'all Niggas Will Hurry Up And Vote, I
Wanna Get My Win...........................................
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Uppin!!!...................
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Wiil You'all Niggas Vote!!!!...................
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Lmao... he's in such a hurry to get merked... Lmao
#1
Breakdown:
punches - wise ways
personals - wise ways
flow - tie
creativity - wise ways (that backwords line was dope)
opener - wise ways
closer - wise ways
OVERALL - wise ways......you killed him
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Wise Ways took this very easily.
Better punching, utilized wordplay...
That backwords shit was nice.
Hit tha personals and was hard thoughout.
To-Face was all straight forward, mostly threats.
No complexity, cept in that format, I was like, "huh?"
Use real lines and bars, man.
That shit was crazy to read.
Wise
Peace
wise ways nice drop and nice merk..............nuff said
2face you promised alot in ya verse make a mufucka feel shitty bout his self instead of tellin him what u gonna do
flow=wise
punches=wise
structure=wise
open=wise
close=wise
meta=both
vote=wise
battle gettin slept on........hit it up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=1&pp=15
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.........................thanks for tha votes................
Not much of a battle..wise ways killed the other clown..
Multis-Wise Ways
Flow-Wise
Punches-Wise
Personals-Wise
Meta-Wise
Vote-Wise Ways..
~Go vote~
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=104404
Uppin!!!.......................
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Wise Ways takes this..
Alot more complexed, elevated verse..
Some nice wordplay..combined with ok punches..creative..
As said, the backwards line was witty & creative.. fresh.
Overall just a better, executed battle verse..
Face managed to somewhat held is own..but still got crushed by creativity.
vote Wise Ways
LOl
2 faced got ya ass handed to u ..
wise ways or wuteva his name is..killed ya ..wit a few good punches an personals
nuthin great....
just a another day spittin a nother newb killed....
V-Wise Ways
Hit the Link up been slepted on an vote honestly like i did
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106125
wise man you merked,
not close here,
wise nice flow structure ahrd punches could of had more personals but you still took that.
nice man try-out for instant dawg...................
no h8....................pz