10 Lines Lets Battle
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10 Lines Lets Battle
soz bros....
had somethin to eat...
just seen your battle...
droppin in a minute or two...
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this springville immigrant is bringin spirits like the Inn*\\
infringin copyrights within and gettin 'Billed' like Beatrix* killin\\
red eye, bitch talkin shit like Smercona*\\
even dissed by wristless dicks gawkin pics of Madonna\\
you a suck ass fag, i incinerate you like larva\\
tin plated, your naked, i'm encased in lead plate armour\\
get your ghost write typin, attempt to stem this flow so tidal\\
bringin fluid rhymes in writin crash your soul and flood you mindful\\
so this 23 year old fag has been around\\
just click this link and see what fuck I found...\\
explain:
* Inn At Springville
* Beatrix is the Bride from Kill Bill
* [url=http://www.bmezine.com/news/edit/A30910/artmicha.html]
* Mike Smercona's Report
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uppin so this kid dont lose his place..........
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dun count dis az free post-
yo vote on dis battle.....need one more vote...n i swear ill vote on dis battle afta he spitz......
YOU CAN TAKE YOUR NOOKIE AND SHOVE IT UP YOUR ASS//
REDEYE BEAT YOU CUT YOU WIT GLASS//
HE LIVES IN DETROIT UNDER A BRIDGE//
A NEEDLE JUNKIE ON THE EDGE//
I GOT THIS BATTLE ON LOCK DOWN//
YOU AINT GANGSTA PUT YOUR GLOCK DOWN//
THINK YOU CAN MOB YOUR THE FAGGET WHO LIKES TO BOB//
MC NOOKIE LIKES TO SUCK DICK SITTN ON CORN N THE COB//
THIS GUY IS AN AIDS PATIENT TRYIN TO LIVE//
I JUST PULLED THE TRIGGER AND PUT YOU OUT OF MISERY KID//
:shoot: :thefinger
Lets Get Some Votes........................................
Need Some Votes Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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no offence ....but very weak battle.......
imma have 2 vote 4 mc nookie cuz sum partz of redeye were corny n didnt make sense (not hate)
punches: mc
flow:......
personalz:.....
creativy:......
structure:tie......both wak
vote: mc nookie 4 punches
hit dis battle up plze
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107625
Structure:MC
Punches:MC
Flow:MC
other categories:MC
dawg redeye u can come harder than that juss keep practicing dawg and you'll get it soon, but u gotta flow more betta than that, Vote=Mc Nookie
Mc Nookie can u hit this battle up right quick since I did vote on yours honestly please vote on it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107666
Mc Nookie took this pretty much cause red eyes rhymes were elmentary and not hard hitting, not a huge selection of wordplay associated thru out the battle,
Punches go to nok. cuz they simply hit harder,
structure-redeye yer shit was all fucked up,
flow-nookie
v/nookie
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Weak battle
punches - nookie
personals - none
flow - nookie
creativity - nookie
opener - nookie
closer - nookie
OVERALL - nookie
And REDEYE.......retire while you can
battle was wack...still redeye got merked in every category imaginable...he should just quit..both need to elevate a lil..i see potential...
v/Mc Nookie
hit it up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108617