10 Line Max
No feedin'
No Pre-postin
20 mins to spit
Blind Spit
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10 Line Max
No feedin'
No Pre-postin
20 mins to spit
Blind Spit
no nigga you read da rules yo spit 1st, no blind spit shit or no battle!!!!.........
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First time visit to front line, your goal for today is 'must rhyme',
20 minutes I should adjust da' time, cuz yo place aint here with BombZ,
But at home with momz layin' on her lap, your praying, Im spraying gats,
He think he's 'fitted' to win, but I'm flipping ya' hat,
Go ahead and spit punch-lines, but harder I'm hitting ya' back
Sicking ya behalfs, cuz I don't see you on da' map,
'Shitting' on this cat, which explains why his rhymes is all 'crap',
We above and combin down, so pussy fall back!
If I 'jocked' you instead, tell me what would you call that?
if u wan meeta start, jus say it an ill tear u up................................................ .............................................
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Start niggah! you were suppose to start a whuile ago, hurry up, you got till mid-night cuz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hear you... but listen up closely, im an emcee,
you empty no lightly but, nicely- take my advice please
harden and ur too slow, pik a beat an flow, im ur new mentor,
take all the ryhmes u got an find a thrash dispnecer, use a crap artist,
iv jus begun uv gon ur farthest... mann, this is rap nigga, an ur frontin
american bandstand, damn man, uv crossed dangerous territory,
native land , and...so wathc ur bak, my crew hasgottan eye on u,
but ur no threat, dubble or nuthin, its ur bet, "careful- stand bak explosives on jet"
btu wait im not thru jus yet, top mark " theasaures" , yous a DIKtionary, this is mor complex than ur average pictionary,dont bite my shit, jus do ur does,
remeber my name, oh , an screw the rules... im an and 1 starter, uv already made it,
ppl say u did a bomb sho and afterwards replayed it, jus say it,
i no ur past present and future, its time u gave up loser, ima one hitta spitta,
are u fo real nigga, or a no good sorry quitta, uhp, ur finished, dont lash bak,
or ill end up pullin the trigga...
uppin 4 votes......................................
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Bombz god this
Better wordplay... And hes punches acctualy connected. Plus hes structure was better.
Jock i really wasnt feeling your verse. No real hittin punches in there. Keep elevating man
vote Bombz
plz return a honest fevour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106914
i respect that, but if bombx is fo real- y is he lashin out on firs timers, cmon now
yo, dont make that an excuse, being new to a website forum has nothing to do with your talent, if you sucked, then why did you registar? Okay, stop bitchin',
Uppin for votes!
v/bombs
Bombs wasn't spactacular but he has a couple nice punches...
All Jock had were some decent multis at the begining...
Sorry fellas but I can't poll vote...
-W1
bOMBZ gOT THIS SHIT , COMPARABLE SHIT BUT BOMBZ HAD A LIL BIT BETTER FLOW
pLEASE DO ME THE FAVOR OF VOTING ON ANY ONE OF MY BATTLES
/v - Bombz
Why? Much better verse overall, better punches, better wordplay, better in basically every aspect
Why opponent lost? Lacked the strength that Bombz verse had, whack punches, terrible wordplay
Personal comments: Bombz came much harder, jock...trip to wackness emergency center is required. No hate. Just tellin it how it is.
Noticable lines...
But at home with momz layin' on her lap, your praying, Im spraying gats,
He think he's 'fitted' to win, but I'm flipping ya' hat,
could of been worded better but still good
good votes, uppin' for some more though, lets get this going............................................
my vote goes to bombs he had better flow and punches...close battle though.........
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vote goez 2 bombz 4 better werdplay..punches( only by a lil) n..a lil' betta flow
good battle
bombz: good punches, flow, stucture, n dat bout it
jock: ya structure waz off...punches were tite...n ur flow waz tite 2.....good shyt
punches: b
flow: b
humour: jok
werdplay: b
structure: b
vote: BombZ
yo hit dis battle up....thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106644
imma vote on bombz..............******
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That was one of tha weaker verses I've seen from Bombz
I thought jock was gonna take this... but he ain't have any punches
Both had multies...nice flow from both
Bombz got personals.....
so
v/Bombz
hit this up with a vote...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...38#post1092938
Opener - Bombz
Flow - Bombz
Vocab - Bombz
Structure - Bombz
Multi's - Bombz
Punches - Bombz
Personals - Bombz
Closer - Bombz
Vote - Bombz
Shit a no brainer, Jocked bro, u gotta start-spittin some hard-hittin punches, better multi usage, and fix ya structure up. But u werent terrible dont get me wrong, Bombz just beat you thats all.
"btu wait im not thru jus yet, top mark " theasaures" , yous a DIKtionary, this is mor complex than ur average pictionary"
That was a nice line, its just they werent as hard hittin as Bombz, Feel me?
Good luck next time Jock, and good battle Bombz.