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-W1
Whos This Fool They Call Wicked A Weak Mc Sick Kid He Thinks He Can Flow Redeye Rise Against You Weak Schmoes Tryin To Profile N Pose Im The One With The Most Straight Up West Coast Ill Fuck Your Bitch Till She Gets On Her Tippy Toes This Redeye Hippy Knows If You Battle Me Better Be Pimpin Hoes
This win is in the bag, so just quit ya bitchin’
It was a brown eye...until you went to prison
And the next time I challenge you, just say no
Cause my lines are over ya head...like a halo
I’m not through, bitch. So Death is what u get
U’re a test dummy, I just use u to try new shit
I’m just too sick, Plus all my lines are flu-like
I’d say I’m spankin’ u, but that’s what u’d like
I’m just too nice, and son, your just garbage
This match is like a no-show...over before it started!
Good luck, homie...
-W1
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-W1
This win is in the bag, so just quit ya bitchin’
It was a brown eye...until you went to prison
And the next time I challenge you, just say no
Cause my lines are over ya head...like a halo
I’m not through, bitch. So Death is what u get
U’re a test dummy, I just use u to try new shit
I’m just too sick, Plus all my lines are flu-like
I’d say I’m spankin’ u, but that’s what u’d like
I’m just too nice, and son, your just garbage
This match is like a no-show...over before it started!
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look at this verse...8/10...
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Whos This Fool They Call Wicked A Weak Mc Sick Kid He Thinks He Can Flow Redeye Rise Against You Weak Schmoes Tryin To Profile N Pose Im The One With The Most Straight Up West Coast Ill Fuck Your Bitch Till She Gets On Her Tippy Toes This Redeye Hippy Knows If You Battle Me Better Be Pimpin Hoes
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then this one...6/10...
then tell me who one...
vote...wicked...
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Thnks for voting, lets get some more...
And drop links...
-W1
god i dropped a long ass report on this and it didnt save...ill do a quick summary of wat i had.
Redeye...structure is fukked up, verse needs complexity, better punches, needs personals.
W1CKED...won this battle in every category...except for personals...ya'll tied der cuz i didn't see any watsoever
Comments: elevate both of you, better punches, more personals
v/ - W1CKED
Return favour by dropping honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank you.
I wasn't feeling redeyes verse. It didn't seem like he was battling no one, just spitting out loud or something, the flow was hot, but he didn't have good punchlines, or anything.
My vote goes to Wicked.
Keep elevatin'
Return da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106960
I can't poll vote but I left a written vote in ya battle t-west and i'm anout to hit up yours, bombs...
-W1
Wicked god this . He acctualy had punches and good structure. Redeye was hopless. How can i summerise a battle like this, so one sided. Wicked takes it in ever category
Vote - Wicked
plz return a honest fev
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106914
^Peepin' your battle...
People please poll vote if possible...
-W1
Upping this shit...
All I need is one more vote...
Holla back, people...
-W1
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-W1
good battle,but very on sided.......wicked in every catergory....................
vote=w1cked cuz he owned dis battle frm da begining
Uppin'............................................ ..
Can I get some poll votes...........................
Just need one more........................
-W1
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alright, well maybe if the other guys stucture didnt suck so bad, and he had 10 lines, and it was in actually sentences, or had any punches, personals, or metas then he would ge the win but he didnt, so wicked
wicked - pretty good rap overall, couple of the ryhmes could have been a bit better, but not really necessary for this battle.