alright... Checkin in.... Check in then drop yo' stuff. Good luck wit' this...
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alright... Checkin in.... Check in then drop yo' stuff. Good luck wit' this...
Yeah yeah.. les get it crackin.. ima post against Juggernaut first coz the deadlines closer.. but i'll save the best for u shawty.. this ma check in.. nxt post is the verse.
yeh yeh, fair play. ima be logged out for a while. but i'll spit back as soon as i got this, drop tht shit whenever yo' ready... holla
:: comes in laughing hard ::
Check the level this Demon's Reaching, this battle aint even close to seeming even,
Your mouth's like the Bermuda Triangle, there's no
chance of SEA MEN Leaving..
Bitch is in her Prime? thats only because shes not even a Factor,
While her broken bones heal i'll remove her from the Cast like a pair of Bad Actors..
I'll jab ya chest till ya back hurts, u only spit Hot cause u lack Certs,
And in this thread i'm gonna Win Slow like Eddie from Family Matters..
Ay shawdy ya Text Reaks and ya Chest's Weak so i'll DROP you With the WEAKEST JAB,
Ya Rhymes neva Hit The Spot like an armless exema patient tryin to REACH HIS CRABS..
Ya hits are Pain-less n nameless, what are you doing? Throwing Numb punches,
Quit it, cause you and rappin dont go together like Breakfast and Lunches..
I'll Demolish yah punchez, Like Earthquakes, im leaving this bitch shakin,
U a vet? Wit tha bullshit you post, you aint even a rookie in the makin..
For-see the soul im taken, piercen your eyes wit inked pens,
Cause my punches will leave you 'seeing double', like a pair of identical Twins..
you a Pussy and virgin, and still you cant spit 'tight' lines,
Leave ya fam dead, so no back-up, like I was 'detaching ya spine..
tight rhymes is like bentleys for you girl, you just can't afford 'em,
your only way of murdering me is if i read all ur shit, then 'died laughing from boredom..
u just got merked, ass kicked by the battle king, someone hand me my crown,
the only way you'd get 5 votes in this battle, was if we went '5-rounds..
Whoa! Shit jus wouldn't stop flowin.. ur turn gurly.
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So what i'm a gurl, reading ur rhymes made me laugh even harder, i think i'm 'bout to hurl,
readin your shit, you make ur self sound like a doctor,
if this is an earthquake, ima 'bout to rock ya,
this'll shock ya,
take a step from tha throne,
'coz you 'bout to get thrown,
after i'm finished, all thts left of you is a bloody bone,
i'll murder you ass, leave your shit in tha past and you think ur'll still be known,
u've always been on ur own, if i'm pussy, what tha fuck are you...
it's found... your nothin',it's true,
you can't stop flowin, 'coz ur shit is clogged up,
i'll put your ass to tha bottom 'coz my shit is way up on top,
Virgin? and you think ya tha pimp? when tha only thing you can get is from a porn website,
you better stick ur faggotass outta my way, 'coz my place is right in tha light,
you tha pussy, got tha bitchin' for gurls 'coz none of them give any shit to you,
go fuck yourself, ur frustrated and it's tha only shit you could do,
pain-less ain't true, but name-less wouldn't matter,
tha only thing needed here is ur ass gone,
ur rappin' is wrong,
you ain't right in this game,
all ur rapshit is lame,
all you say has been copyrighted and used,
so i'll leave you ass wit' votes equallin', done, left you murdered nd confused.
yeah whatever, i'm tired man... whatever
yea so tek definatly took this one....you can to elementary as far as vocab and ryhme shceme are concerned lyrical...also you really didn't leave any lasting impressions like i wasn't like whoa that's akool line i wish i thought that one up..or like thats a good idea i'll flip something like that next battle....TEk...nice drop you had hardcore punches..try not to glorify yourself too much other than that though good drop vote goes to TEk...peace out....
Werd on the advice dawg.. props to shawdy too..
drop a link an i'll peep ur battle.
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Tek all da way flow stucture wus tie but tech had way betta met4's
better punches n personals that were consistant n hard hittin....
My VOte-Tek yall return the favor wit honest votes on dis battle\/
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106389
Pz.... ThanX....
word heres the link its in elevated....................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105960
Tek reallyyy took dis battle for flow n punches..werd 2 UR..ur vocab laked but ur flow made me 4get dat shyt..good shyt there....n yo murder....ur shyt waz "ite"....ive seen better but ur waz ite...juss keep elevating......mah vote goez 2 Tek
punches: tek
flow: TEK
humour: tek
vocab: none
vote: tek\
drop vote here dawg.....thnxx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106644
LMFAO!!!!....
Check the level this Demon's Reaching, this battle aint even close to seeming even,
Your mouth's like the Bermuda Triangle, there's no
chance of SEA MEN Leaving..
Tek cudve just droped this line and took the battle....
elevate shawty...~1
that was my favorite line fa sho! Had myself laughin wiv that shit!
yo uppn for votes.. iv followed all links.
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Breakdown:
punches - tek
personals - tek
flow - tek
creativity - tek
opener - tek
closer - tek
OVERALL - tek
^^Straight merkin....Lyrikal~Murder, elevate battle newbies til you improve
Uppn..
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Uppn to finish this.. i want new battles.. links will b followed..
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Tek ripped this even with long ass stretchy lines.
Wordplay, personals, real nice flow, hard and humorous punches.
She didn't stand a chance with her very elementary rhyme.
And choppy format and flow.
Good effort, but way outclassed.
Better everything, Tek.
Holla back...
Vote here!
I jus went for a slightly different style.. but preciate it mayn..
uppn..
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looks like you got this bad tek... you got gud drops... nice battle wit' ya.... Uppin'.... ..... .....................
Thanx ma.. keep elevatin.. u aint bad at all urself u know.. props to ya..
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iight...
tek took this quite easily... had a nice opener... 'sea-men' thing was funny... but she is a girl... thats what she does best? haha... joking...
nice flow from tek... good punches throughout... goooooooood flow... structure was good aswell... and wordplay was cool aswell...
and iight flow from lyrical...some good punches... but they werent up to tek's...
tek takes this with an overall more complex verse...
vote - tek