12 lines max
due in half n hour
no dickride/unexplained votes...etc
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12 lines max
due in half n hour
no dickride/unexplained votes...etc
check in
check in homie............................................. ................................
check.. les get it poppin kid..
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ight lets get it
look...
battlin me son, u gon need more than a gat wit u,
last battle i took da literal L...now im handin ur 1st back to u..
if u had any rep before this..u just lost all ya stripes,
this battle's a no contest..im a mole who abused a fruit..
i bet he'll no show...and come back witta lil sorry note,
faggit aint droppin hot bars..if anything its prolly soap..
ill keep poundin this kid..until his spine is backless,
ya verses suck..a lamp wouldnt shine ya wackness..
leave u lookin like the bitches in ma sig, lesson taught,
stop ur frontin muddathugga, i'll kill this Jugga.. an leave the Naut..
i got better things to do than jus fight wit bitchy kids,
grand finale? ur 'takin a club to da head' like diddy did...//
4th line sposed to say 'fight', not 'fruit'..my badd..
-awaits the kid-
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time's up son.. an u made the fukkn half hour deadline.. smh
another waste of my fukkn time.. bitch.
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Have him clapped up, wrapped up like bitches in Hindu Temples
"Servin" his dome more "slugs" than exotic "Chinese menus"
Tek winning's like throwing punches in a straight jacket
Or "swinging an axe" at "steel doors", he can't seem to "hack it"
You're either gay, retarded or in need of a shrink
What dude in his right mind writes his name in pink?
Got my eyes set on world conquest, I aim to rule
This fag got his "eyes set on balls" like a "game of pool"
Grabbin nuts for votes like chipmunks right before eatin
N like female slave bondage believe this "pussy's been beaten"
time 2 end this.....(spittin a bit more faster)
This aint "gay sex in pool halls" so whats Dre's pics all about?
Covering up his image cuz he looks like Adam Sandler wit "8 balls in his mouth
uppin 4 votes
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People still use them 'sex' lines??
W/e man.. uppn for votes.
that's called vote swayin...............cud have ur ass reported..............................stop bitchin...........
werd you had him juggernaut till you started with the balls in your mouth fag shit...then you lost it cause thats played...but oh well you threw a couple nice punches adn you had some fun thats what really counts...TEk nice verse except for the fruit thing..hehe keyze for sheezy anyway tek had this one just because he was more creative and he threw alot of punches thought a couple were weak but you didn't really need to be at your best...good battle guys close...vote.TEk hit it up then niggas..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106645
-fall back-
not intended nicca.. an u do realise how late u were dont u?
dawg why u takin shit so serious
look at da time u checked in 2:35 i dropped 3:10....jes barely 5 mins over the deadline.........nigga dont be ass over small shit like that.....not some'n 2 bitch about.......
besides....is this a job? are any of us gettin paid 4 droppin?......5 mins differe oh wow.....im so late....chill out meng
Blah.. no more postin unless its an 'uppn' post.. goes for both of us.
No contest here...
Juggernaut...
I KNOW I saw that "slugs on menus" line just earlier this week.
Shame on you! (I'm almost certain the rhyming word was "temples" as well)
Aside from that...
Tek takes this with the "soap" line and the closing play on his name...
Good wordplay displayed and nice personals.
Everything else was just steady dissing, rarely adding filler...
So, for not biting lines, and for a better closer for sure.
Tek
Holla back...
Vote here!
damn this is sick....respect to both...
flow & multis: tie
structure: tie
personal: jugganaut
word play: tek
punches: if jugganaut kept going steady he wudda had this, the pool punch was aite, but erry thing after that was ass.....ima give this to TEK
Vote: tek
return the favor please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106629
uppn for more votes.. iv followed all the links.
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[I]Breakdown:
punches - tek
personals - tek
flow - tie
creativity - tek
opener - tek (his wasnt bitten)
closer - tek
OVERALL - tek
Werd.. lookin to close this so i can start a new one.. appreciate the votes..
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Uppn for the KO.. i want this closed..
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Last upp.. plz get this closed!
I wanna new battle..
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iight...
close battle... id say it was just edged by tek...
structure was good from both... flow was both good aswell...
tek takes the punches... punches win battles...
good shit from both of ya... keep up...
no hate...
vote - tek
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