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Checkin' in..... You spit first. gud luck wit' it...
Fuck it... -
~ they call my lyrical m-u-r-d-e-r,
i'll blow your ass up quicker than paul walker can 'drive' his car,
fast and furious, tha crowd looks curious,
so i'll give them a cure, cause my flow is so ill,
my flow is too heavy, my mic is gonna kill,
i deal my rhymes probably like you deal ur drugs,
hangin' around, smashin' ya'll up in tha clubs,
your say you been rappin since 2002,
but dude, you just a faggot and some practice is needed for you,
join a crew, then ur'll maybe have some back up,
your just an out-kast, n ima leave ur ass fucked up,
my votes ballin' over, ur votes none,
tha only way you could beat me is by a bullet from a gun...
i'll beat you by a ton,
your lost for words, u've lost ya tongue,
silence in tha room 'coz you chokin,
and it ain't from all tha smokin,
you pussy, maybe you should put tha mic down,
take a look around and so go back to tha court,
stick to opera 'coz ur raplife is only short,
this ain't your game, ur'll never be a player,
unless you play to lose,
i light ur fuse,
10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 Bang... murdered and confused...
This 'bitch' think she all "hot" but shes gotta 'bad ass',
Cant rap, maybe to shy for that n feedback let ya dad ask,
Ill take it easy, cause I wouldnt wanna kill this teenyboper,
Could have backed down with the proposal you seen me offer,
It must be wackness that you n ya trimmed pants create,
You expect me to believe you when even ya Implants are fake,
Who knows bout this rap shit, or even ya gender,
Could be lookin for older guys who be believin ya tender,
I think this bitch is here now just wanting some ass,
But now Ima be the transperant words haunting ya past,
Ive been spittin not knowin where this whores been,
She expect to beat a man when shes only fourteen?
This shit is funny, cause I could say what even ya wackness lacks,
You statin you bringin us all down then it be best u practice facts,
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yeah yeah... u spit gud. let's get this shit voted.......
yo both flows were nice. pretty much a tie on all spit. but with true spittin some shit for example. (You expect me to believe you when even ya Implants are fake,)
shit makes no sence, of course implants r fake.
if i could poll this one wouls lyrically murder ya True.
an by the way I am in a crew, so that punch is wasted. lol
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LMAO, of course implants are fake, im sayiing she has fake implants... get it???
u fucking moron, I should smack u bro! lmao. so much for trying too look smart.
fuckin herbs.
yeah yeah, true true... realized tht lol - meant ta say a real crew but anyways... shit was tight... yeah - uppin...................................
Never seen a 14 year old chick even freestyle yo so it sall good
yeah yeah, my age seems ta be gettin ta you - huh? cheers. Uppin.....
both yall sucked, tru soulja! your from canada? nah manne ain't no rappers from there yo, so stick to dis shit right cheer aight
and been and fourteen deffinately don't rhyme souldja think of better vocab u lil bitch my vote goes to murder on dis one
Whore been
four teen
its a multi rhyme u fucking idiot, why is this thread full of fucking herbs?
Murder all your little friends votin for you?
i gota go with true soldier on this one the flow was great good line choices
but do watch for thoses wack lines like the implants hes right they are fake either way so just work on making sense threw the whole rap
other guy needs to work more on flow and keeping his shit constent
overall true soldier
hit up my battle its almost done thanxs
soon ill be able to vote fuck wins sould count as 10 posts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106471
fair stuff.... Uppin'........ C'mon, get some votin'............. ~~
and nah... i don't know these people... so don't give me tht shit - maybe they just givin' truth...
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you queer
Uppin.......... ............. ........... Get some more votes up in herre ............... .....................
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Why does nobody vote? I even vote on people that say they'll get me back, and they just fuckin sneaks, UP.
well there was an obvious winner uin this battle, true solja!!!
his punches hit harder, he had better wordplay, structure, punches!!!
he won in every aspect an he only droppped one verse!!!
plz drop an honest vote on that!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108420
One sided battle..True took this with ease..
Breakdown..
Punches-True(it was easy to see this Ly.had virtullay none that stood out)
Multis-None(That was worth)
Personals-True
Flow-True(both had decent flow,but True was little better)
Meta-None(once again no signs of worthy)
..easy to vote-True...you have gotten alot better..from the days when you use to PM me "Crying" about my critism..LOL~~~~
thanks pens, uppin for one more vote peeps....
UP.
True-Souldja obviously won this....lyrical-murder, your style is too simple and your punches are played out and ineffective. What I suggest is a trip to the sites wackness emergency center. and get help there. True SOuldja took this in every category. Its pretty obvious why.
Vote- True
Plz drop an honest votes on one of the battles in my signature please. Thank you.
One sided battle...
True Soldja took pretty much every catergory.. better structure/flow, punches etc.. much more creative compared..
Lyrical Murder.. try and incorporate good pers onals to make impact.. work towards witty punches etc.. a few multies were in there tho which was safe..
Overall..
Vote - True Souldja