Chrit 8-1 vs Evolve 8-1

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In ... 12-14 Lines?

Sounds good

Will edit in votes....

May as well post early...
Who needs until Friday for 14 lines?
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Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight
Its you that should be banned...
...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait
Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice...
And true you fathered a text style...
...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice...
And forget sonning...
...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin
I mean even ya tourney was wack...
Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in
So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude....
Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too...
Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about...
I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house
And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick...
Its not lack of equipment...
...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip...
And the line limit is dope...
...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores
And after this, you'll be facing 12-14...
...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores

this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when
........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written
bitten? ... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid
only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected
except its, known you were never respected or liked
but we never expected this Dawg........
.................................next time Bark before you Bite
& pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken
i used to think he was dope too.........
..................................then i found out he was fakin
making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar
but i hate Spiders Man..........
...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire
yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts
Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait??

CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!! :nono:

so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice
cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice

*whould have dont more but we agreed on 12-14*

edited for spelling

very nice battle, seemed a bit heated... i'll break it down



Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight
Its you that should be banned...
...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait
NICE PERSONAL, not vey well worded though

Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice...
And true you fathered a text style...
...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice...
lol, nice but vanilla ice is played,, shouldhave used sumthin else in place


And forget sonning...
...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin
I mean even ya tourney was wack...
Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in
lmao DOPE


So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude....
Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too...
blah...

Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about...
I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house
blah...

And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick...
Its not lack of equipment...
...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip...
lol, decent

And the line limit is dope...
...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores
And after this, you'll be facing 12-14...
...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores
nice closer....

OVERALL-8/10





this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when
........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written
dope,, nice opener

bitten? ... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid
only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected
lol decent

except its, known you were never respected or liked
but we never expected this Dawg........
.................................next time Bark before you Bite
ok....

& pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken
i used to think he was dope too.........
..................................then i found out he was fakin
^ok..

making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar
but i hate Spiders Man..........
...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire
lmao nice wordplay... dope

yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts
Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait??

CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!!
^^best line of the verse

so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice
cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice
ok finisher,,,

OVERALL 7/10


well I'm going to go with chrit aka trapt for a better overall verse,, evolve had some good lines and one better than any of chrits, but OVERALL chrit was more consistent,, it seemed evolve used a couple of fillers............ nice battle though.. props to both

this was so fuckin disappointing...


You should both get beat up... I mean... for the only 2 people to have never lost to me once on this fuckin board you'd figure the verses would be FIRE... they both sucked considerably... I wanna slap the shit outta both o' yous...


and Island breaks shit down...

Chrit...

punches: 5...
wordplay: 3.5...
personals: 6... with all the stuff we know... you picked the obvious... *shakes head*
flow: 1... I'm sorry... I have no idea what beat you did it to... but whoa...
overall: 15.5 out of a possible 40... sorry broski...


Evolveintosomethingelse...

punches: 6... you really lacked here... it surprised me...
wordplay: 4... it was no where near what I've seen...
personal: 4... Evo... don't use the obvious shit broski... the legend line was nice though...
flow: 7... it was pretty consistent...
overall: 21 out of a possible 40...

vote: Evo'...

I'm disappointed in you both... *shakes head n' walks out*

This Was Disappointing In A Way...Chrits Verse Seemed More Like A Defense Than A Diss, No Hate Man But You Did Throw Some Nice Personals But You Defended Yourself Also All Throughout Your Verse, Evolve Had Some Nice Lines Too But There Were A Few Hard Hitting Punches

Quotables:

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Trapt Wit
Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about...
I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house

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^Funny, LoL

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Trapt Wit
Its you that should be banned...
...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait
Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice...
And true you fathered a text style...
...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice...
And forget sonning...

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^Nice Hard Hitting Punches And A Good Diss To Him Directly

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Evolve
what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar
but i hate Spiders Man..........
...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire

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^Nice Wordplay

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Evolve
ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts
Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait??

CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!!

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^Ouch...LoL

Personals - Chrit
Punches - Evolve
Wordplay - Evolve
Structure - Evolve
Vocab - Chrit
Flow - Evolve

Chrit Had Nice Punches Man...But You Defended Yourself Too Much In Your Verse You Had Alot Of Personals But None Affected Your Verse Because Every Other Line Defended What You Knew Or Thought Evolve Would Drop Against You

Evolve Had A Tad Better Punches..Only Reason I Think He Wins Is Because He Just Threw More Punches..Good Battle Though

Vote - Evolve

Evolves Verse

this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when
........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written bitten?
Blah.
... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid
only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected
?? Nah.
except its, known you were never respected or liked
but we never expected this Dawg........
.................................next time Bark before you Bite
Wasn't feeling/
& pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken
i used to think he was dope too.........
..................................then i found out he was fakin
Blah.
making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar
but i hate Spiders Man..........
...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire
Nice.
yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts
Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait??

CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!!
Good personal.

so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice
cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice
Average.

Trapt Wit's verse

Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight
Its you that should be banned...
...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait
Halfway decent n' funny.
Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice...
And true you fathered a text style...
...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice..
Ehh
And forget sonning...
...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin
I mean even ya tourney was wack...
Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in
Stretched a bit, personal was aight.
So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude....
Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too...
I've seen you flip this concept before a few times, not very original.
Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about...
I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house
No.
And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick...
Its not lack of equipment...
...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip...
Boo.
And the line limit is dope...
...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores
And after this, you'll be facing 12-14...
...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores
Nah.

Vote- Evolve.

Both really dissapointed me, both came half assed with a few shitty lines. It came down to originality for me, Evolve didn't come very played. Chrit you started out aight, then really lost me. Evolve started real bad, but had a few decent lines at the end to win.

3-1 Me... No More Freeposting

I already said sign me the fuck out
Close this

LOL.. I Aint Running The League Anymore... Well I Am.. But Just Not The Way You Think

Vote - Evolve

Chrit's verse did seem like more of a defense tryin' to take less punches off wat Evolve would've used ... But Evolve still came wit some nice punches ... I thought the "bark before U bite" line was wat took this for Evo ... Nice personal if U get it ... Chrit had some sicc ass punches also ... The yahoo shit ... Had me rollin' ... But Evo juss had more lines that did it for me really ... Nice battle

v/ evolve. chrit didnt really try here. put up a lot of filler. volve didnt. volves punches were a little stronger. blah.

ok....ive read these closely......heres what i think from the breakdown....Each verse from both will be judged honestly. NO HATE! ready set go....

[chrits verse=]
Go ahead and say I bite... but "volve... get ya shit straight
Its you that should be banned...
...for being a 30 year old pm'ing for names of yahoo jail bait
^ok i sorta lost the flow here but kept reading it...Then i got the picture..
not to great of a opener but moving on
Truth be told... you were ill... just the fact is now you aint nice...
And true you fathered a text style...
...that faded and died in '97 right along with Vanilla Ice...
LOL....Witty so far so good..
And forget sonning...
...You know Trapt, Chrit, or any alias will never be ya kin
I mean even ya tourney was wack...
Fake allegory in the finals... Exposed in the same round Walter whored you in
though i was not watching tourneys a lot...So i cant comment on this line
So use ya played ass personals... The way you did last time, dude....
Then win by the kids on ya dick... Hell... let em give you anal too...
Hard hitting here....Good punch/Personal
Man ya barely mentioned in legends... I dont see what the fuss is about...
I mean you have to be the first old man looking up porn at ya momma's house
....Im not feeling this....^seems like u had nothing to think of on this line
And quit frontin.... we know the reason you'll never have a soundclick...
Its not lack of equipment...
...its the fact you sound like Jae Cyph on a helium trip...
LOL....Lmao^^at this shit..Witty punch lol good drop here
And the line limit is dope...
...too bad you're the reason elevated and elite not just sleeps but snores
And after this, you'll be facing 12-14...
...in prison for trying to bang that age of webcam whores
exactly...lol good punch/closer....


[evolves verse]

this little bitch Chrit got some nerve to be talking shit, when
........4 out 5 Dentists Recommend what he's written
LOL witty ass punchline GREat Opener
bitten? ... nah, more like Consumed & Digested text kid
only to be Thrown Back Up in YOUR verse un-detected
LOL LMAO...OMG....^evilness is reigning
except its, known you were never respected or liked
but we never expected this Dawg........
.................................next time Bark before you Bite
Lmao...Jesus...Biten shit..LOL good punchline...Im feeling you so far
& pardon me, but aint he white... i could be mistaken
i used to think he was dope too.........
..................................then i found out he was fakin
..nah not feeling this...
making believe... what a Web he Weaved, know he's a liar
but i hate Spiders Man..........
...........................so i'll hit C w/ the Biscuit like Tobey McGuire
Good puncline but not as good as the others u droped so far
yall know me, im fire... ill as hell so i don't care if he fronts
Legendary Member w/ 4 entry's... but wait??

CHRIT'S NOT EVEN MENTIONED ONCE!!!

...Nicely done Great drop also...

so go ahead & stunt... acting like you all that & nice
cause that just compliments me... considering i just beat you .......Twice
LOL u did...lol....Ok closer...not to great but good though

ok...From the breakdown evovle has this shit man...I was feeling his shit a lot more...BOTH WERE VERY GOOD THOUGH! honestly great battle...We should see more shit like this...

My vote=Evolve

no hate

I dont think Chrit came as hard as he
should have. It was kinda dissappointing.
Evolve came nice with some witty lines/
personals which just took it out from under
Chrit.

vote - Evolve

Vote ~ Evolve

1.) Because Chrit Signed Out.

2.) I think Evolve just came with the better overall verse anyway. Last time you two went head to head, I gave it to Chrit. Cuz I honestly think he pulled it out. THis time though, there's no doubt in my mind that E took it. Not a bad battle from either, both came alright...but for you two...alright is below average. Anyway, Evo took it with better punches and a more enjoyable verse.

Evolve wins - 9-1
Chrit signs out at 8-2