1 verse
10 lines . . 5 bars
No crew - No dick riding - No hate votes
No free posting - and all votes have to be explained
due date: Wednesday 9 PM central time
i'll post later on today . . exams! (uuh!)
get at cha soon! blah! i'm outtie!
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1 verse
10 lines . . 5 bars
No crew - No dick riding - No hate votes
No free posting - and all votes have to be explained
due date: Wednesday 9 PM central time
i'll post later on today . . exams! (uuh!)
get at cha soon! blah! i'm outtie!
checkin in . . i'll post some time after MichaelMadness checks in . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
ight Mang, Lets see whats good
Wednesday??? can't u get this done by tonite?
yeah i can try but like i said dawg . . i got exams to study for but when i get through wit studyin i'll post my 5 bars dawg . . without a doubt . . 1
Ight so just have it posted by wenesday or whatever?
Niggas!
let's get this shit started na!
aright! AYO..
1) My LYRICAL machine GUN’s givin this “MICHAEL” JACKSON 7 L’s/
L in moLestin chiLdren ~ shouLd easiLy ring some beLLs//
2) This cat MADE his first MISTAKE ~ tryin to battle against ME/
this blind SNAKE is chopped STEAK ~ his DESTINY’s to lose to me//
3) Not FAMOUS without a CHORUS ~ too much surgery on the nose ~ now you’re NAVAL-CRIPPLE/
you’re hella BRAINLESS ~ but you get a BONUS for having a mind ~ that’s mind-FOOL//
4) You was brain-DEAD before I IMBEDDED your spine into your SKULL/
I shoved your nose BONE up your forehead ~ shattered your CRYSTAL//
5) Time to DIMINISH you ~ you’ll WISH you never accepted ~ battlin this SURGEON/
this bitch blew up ~ but I popped this BLOWFISH ~ now he’s in FRACTIONS//
aright MIKE . . just waitin for you drop . . then let's get some votes in! get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
Igght mang, Ill have my shit posted by 9pm like u said
aright dawg . . just make sho you on time dawg . . and you show . . get at me soon! blah! i'm outtie!
Wtf I jus had this shit all written I went to go hit paste and it deletid it wtf , I have to retype the hwole fuckin shit now
You called me out , but you don't want none of me man /
You said you was ILL?? Yer Lyrical Machine Gun Must Be Jammed /
The site of your text makes me want to Sick n want to hearl /
Fact is...I've seen harder punches thrown from a six yr old girl /
Youv'e mixed w/ the most maddest in the world,
So peeps, I must merk him
Then he'll be off of R-B fer 10 Days , Cryin 1 day for each line that hurt him /
For certain Im Puttin A hurtin to this person,
From The first punchline I laced it was a closed curtain /
Moral of the rhyme being, this Bitch could never b hard /
u call me brain less, well if I am , U mustve been born a retard /
But Ima stay spittin till the best in me is gone /
u said destiny will bring u to win , More like destiny will prove u wrong /
9 mins, over time limit big deal , I had to rethink a whole new rhyme
Igght lets get some Votes uppin this Biatch./..........................
both were wak......no offence....yall culd elevate.....but mah vote goez 2 ill 4 betta punches n personalz...u had a tite flow
mike- ok flow....werk on ya punches........good shyt tho
punches: ill
flow: ill
humour: mike
personalz: ill
vote: ill
hit mah battle up.....repay favor..even if u cant vote give opinion.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106644
Astonishing How I Hit him with more in every catergorie , but still other aponnents like kiLler Emcee doubt this because I am Closely winning the battle i had w/ him.
hmmmmmmmm.. fair
That battle was hands down , some of his shit didn't even rhyme dogg
tryin 2 vote sway????????datz y i got 3 peeps votin 4 me in which only 1 culd vote......n u only had one vote.....so stfu bitch........
How manys voter voted for u on the poll muh fuckers , 1, thats it
suck a dick you muh fuck
dat wa i said dik slappp......3 pple wanted 2 vote 4 me..but only 1 waz able 2.....dam u illiterate dik..............................***************** ******************
Also Proving the point i have 1 vote to,yer a waiste of time shut the fuck up
im da dik??????dat y u gonna get DQ'd if a mod sees this 4 uppin more dan 5 timez.....
im not gonna rat u out....but juss tellin ya*******
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**************************************n dat waz an honest vote
OKAY?! wtf dawg?! my shit DID rhyme! why you hatin because you got voted against? and quit freepostin here! take that shit to the PMs! and yeuh thanks for the feedback killer emcee . . i'll go peep yo shit tomorrow if it's still there . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie!Quote:
Originally Posted by MichaelMadness
ill - um well that is a pretty terrible structure there, the random caps words are pretty dumb looking, no rhyme scheme that i could detect here, no personals and pretty weak punches, also michael jackson is just a bad topic to rap about
mike - good structure except one line that was too long and screwed that up, flow was good at parts (beginning) but gets worse, a little bit of feeding of ill, punches were alright, not much for personals, and the rhymes were ok, but also kinda weak in parts (gone/wrong)
overall vote = mike
Keep voting.........Mods sorry about that previous ish .....................
well that shit just shows how smart you are . . the "CAPS" were the rhymes . . and i don't know who's verse you was lookin at but i had an internal rhyme shceme goin on as well as end rhyming . . and that Michael Jackson punch . . look at his name dumbass! "Michael"Madness . . think about it! T REX you a dumbfuck! but vote counted anyway . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie!Quote:
Originally Posted by T REX
illmintid had flow structure punches and wordplay the other guys verse had nothing this battle was one sidded so micheal madness you need to elevate a lot...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106583
someone hit that battle up with an honest vote...
DAMNIT! I HATE THIS 100 POST RULE! LOL . . i could have 2 votes by now . . oh well . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie! uppin! (1)
More poll votes cmon someone out there must be able to vote
Im so tired of sein this battle get sat on day after fuckin day, sorry for all the posts mods
Illamintid
"2) This cat MADE his first MISTAKE ~ tryin to battle against ME/
this blind SNAKE is chopped STEAK ~ his DESTINY’s to lose to me//"
^^^Not a bad punch right their. Could have came a lil bit harder but not bad.....
"4) You was brain-DEAD before I IMBEDDED your spine into your SKULL/
I shoved your nose BONE up your forehead ~ shattered your CRYSTAL//"
^^^Also one of your more stronger punchs. Nice internal rhyme...flow was their and it rhymed well....nice punch
Michael Madness
"Moral of the rhyme being, this Bitch could never b hard /
u call me brain less, well if I am , U mustve been born a retard /
But Ima stay spittin till the best in me is gone /
u said destiny will bring u to win , More like destiny will prove u wrong /"
^^^I liked those too punchs right their. They both hit hard and had nice creativity.
"The site of your text makes me want to Sick n want to hearl /
Fact is...I've seen harder punches thrown from a six yr old girl /
Youv'e mixed w/ the most maddest in the world,
So peeps, I must merk him
Then he'll be off of R-B fer 10 Days , Cryin 1 day for each line that hurt him//"
^^^them punchs right their were easily some pre-school raps right their kid. Reading this i felt that you could have been alot more creative and more witty but w/e....
THE FINALE OUTCOME
Illmintid----->>>> You had a pretty straiight verse. You had some nice punchs...good flow and nice creativiy
Michael M----->>> You also had some nice punchs, nice flow. Only down fall would be that you werent so creative in your punchs.
VOTE---- ILLMINTID
Be easy you two....1
Igght lets get some Votes uppin this Biatch./..........................
ILL- You showed some sign of begining skill. You had the right idea your punches were just weak an that mike jackson shits played to death on this kid. An some shit just wasent maken alot of sense to me. Be more clever in your shit.
Mike- Desent drop you feeded on his shit but no rule against it so I like the first line
Your punches could also use some work. Be more creative you got the right idea it just comes with practice.
OVERALL-Mike for harder punches
Hit these battles up with votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106542
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106449
thanks
Been upped way to many times , just get this over w/ nd vote
ayo! i dont know why yall can't take the time to sit down and think about the damn metaphors . . but oh well! yall just read shit fast . . yall aint for the quality . . yall for the post count! but fuck it! this MIKE cat's verse was hella elementary! but yall wack fucks haven't even realized that . . no hate MIKE . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
illamintid took this battle i think..his punches were on point...nice wordplay in this battle...MM shoulda put much more effort into this battle...
v-illamintid
return da favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...20#post1096320
FINALLY! an intelligent EMCEE! thank god! yall emcee wit 100+ posts . . don't forget to poll vote . . get at me! blah! i'm outtie! uppin! (3) <---i thinkQuote:
Originally Posted by dazasta
come on fellaz! don't sleep on this battle . . emcees with 100+ votes don't forget to poll vote! and don't just read the verses! try to understand the shit before you poll or post a vote! get at me! blah! i'm outtie!
come on this shit is mad old , lets get this voted on and over with finally , mods sorry bout all the posts but this battle is almost a week old, Lets get these votes up............