Telekinetic vs B.rantis

10 lines
no feeding
no hate or dr

This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis)
Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
You got no referrals, yea really nobody would unless they was insane
Cause just the lines above shattered you like a window I bring the pain (window pain)
Im rippin veins an arteries you haven't even began to scratch the surface
You're just a freeloader on this sight uppin post counts your only purpose
I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote
Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke

Uppin for B. rantis to post. Come on don't disapoint me
Youve had 15 more min. right now than it took me to post

Like John Travolta you should face it Telekinetic
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks
unless you bummy like yourself, broke with an 86 chevy,
like it says your a flyweight, my rhymes are heavy
My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours
tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse
and i know u thinkin' " why B. Game bustin on me?"
because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3
Your 3-3 im sorry to say its the unwritten law,
im keepin a donut in my loss column, ur simply played out like pogs

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I'm not sure if I'm allowed to do this, I read the rules but didn't see any mention of not being able to leave a vote even though I can't select a winner in the poll. LoL please just warn me, don't ban me. Thank you.
Anyhoo...

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Telekinetic:
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
Ha, not a real punch, but still kinda funny

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B. Rantis:
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks

tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse
LoL...ch-ch-ch-chia pet!

because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3
LOL...best line of the battle

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Telekinetic, I'm not trying to hate, it's just that a lot of your concepts have been done to death, honest. Also, your punches took to long to get to the point, I'm not really sure how to explain this, but you need to word your lines differently to get the full effect of each pun. Feel me?
B. Rantis took this battle with a better verse, wittier punches, and better lines.

aight battle....on tha verge of weak..

Seemed close but Tele definately got this cuz
of metas....wordplay... punches... and personals
B.. came with those too.. just tele edged you out in all of them

so

v/Tele

drop an honest vote please.....it's getting slept on
I took tha time to vote on yours...thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=106344

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vote=tele
harder punches was mostly one sided b came wit nuttin

anybody do me a favour peep dis shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106180

I can't poll vote.

I think B.Rantitis won this battle.

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This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED

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Telekinetic, this was your best line.

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My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours
tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse

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B.Rantitis, this was your best.

You both came iight, and pretty even, but B. took this.

Vote: B. Rantis

SAM get the verses right before you post like that.
You all said I lost an you showed my shit an said it won.
lol its aight tho

what are u talking about tele, he said i won like 5 times in his post, i dont think he messed up

yea i dunno who his vote was for, too confusing of a post

OK i get it. I dont even think people get half the shit I put in my verse. Alot of people too simple minded.

Lets get some votes by people that can really vote lol

I give this battle to tel cause his rhymes came in cleaner he exlpained a few rhymes
but thats just to give a better verse he wins in my eyes
if rantis would have had more complexe rhymes and a better ender he would have takken it

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This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis)
Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED"
that was ill keep up these rhymes and youl keep wining
help me out i need votes on this battle sorry i cant vote yet but soon i will
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106471

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Give us some feed back an ignore that one vote that was just a dick sucker tryin to piss people off

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I can't poll vote, as I said, but my vote was for B. Rantis. I see how that post could've been confusing... I said Rantis won, but I wanted to show you 2 your best lines as feedback or something, so I showed Telekinetic's best line and Rantis' best line. Rantis' verse was way better than yours, Telekinetic. Tele, it's not that people don't get your stuff... it's just that your stuff is wack. Sorry.

we need ppl. to vote, so many battles but no one votes on them........................................c'mon ppl.

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This kids shook like a quake cause I know he can't stand this
B.rantis is new to RB.........but see you just prey like a mantis (praying matis)
^^^ok...seen the prey/pray lines alot before, but this was a fresh flip
Your a 19 year old newb alive now but about to be dead
This is new to me too, I don't normally battle Special ED
^^^Nah, not feelin' it
You got no referrals, yea really nobody would unless they was insane
Cause just the lines above shattered you like a window I bring the pain (window pain)
^^^Ill concept, should have been worded better though
Im rippin veins an arteries you haven't even began to scratch the surface
You're just a freeloader on this sight uppin post counts your only purpose
^^^Nah, not feelin it
I just ended this guys amazing 5 post career with 10 lines that I wrote
Shit I didn't even have to throw any punch lines cause this kids the joke
^^^lmao! this one was ill...

Like John Travolta you should face it Telekinetic
cause your days are numbered here like cars with cassette decks
eehhh...this was aight
unless you bummy like yourself, broke with an 86 chevy,
like it says your a flyweight, my rhymes are heavy
nah, not feelin' it
My punches speak for themselves, u have to explain yours
tell ur bitch to shape her shit up, looks like a chia pet horse
nah...
and i know u thinkin' " why B. Game bustin on me?"
because your lost on this site like Freeway with his Mach 3
blah
Your 3-3 im sorry to say its the unwritten law,
im keepin a donut in my loss column, ur simply played out like pogs
nope...

Just wasn't feelin b. rantises punches...
Tela had the punched and multis, so he gets my vote...

Sorry fellas but I cant poll vote...
Please peep my battle:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106945

votes with tele for obvious reasons above


v- tele

vote on this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107063

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basically everything wise ways said here..

aight battle....on tha verge of weak..

Seemed close but Tele definately got this cuz
of metas....wordplay... punches... and personals
B.. came with those too.. just tele edged you out in all of them

so

v/Tele


agreed^^

vote on this now: Dazasta Vs As5A5sIn5

im dum...i already voted..lmao anyway vote on that battle regardless

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Damn sombody vote on this shit it has like almost 200 views an 2 votes

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Ight Break down
Punches- both came hard, Both had good creativity n down falls to their punches,
But I think Telekinetic's were delivered harder,
Wordplay- B.R, Used some elementary words,nothing special...Tele's wordplay had more of a selection of words, bigger and better.
flow-like I said becuase of the weak wordplay sometimes the flow was off in B.r.'s shit
so I think tele had the better flow.
structure- Both structures were weak and yall need to work on them,

v/ Telekinetic