10-20 LINES
I SPIT FIRST
NO HATE,D/R, CREW VOTES
verse due 2nite........
gd luck g
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10-20 LINES
I SPIT FIRST
NO HATE,D/R, CREW VOTES
verse due 2nite........
gd luck g
ayt im spitting now............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..................................
This took me along time 2 key up so get votes on this!!
I'm Chokin Angels When I Chose The Angle, I Suppose I'll Strangle Those Who Tangle/
My Blows'll Mangle And Flows'll Wrangle Till His Toes'll Dangle & Leave His Nose And Ankles/
But, Check It Kid My Nine Tecks Will Spit, And Land Punches Till I've Wrecked My Fists/
i'm a Specialist Cuz I'll Deck This Bitch Till He's Connected At Only His Neck And Dick!/
Reign*Man's So Ill That I Infected Sick, And Injected Ticks To Prove You Can't 'Flow' Wit Ya Neglected Clique/
I'll Project A Diss With 'Intoxicated Flows' That'll Leave You Left In Piss'/
Dawgs Said McAinus A 'Cannibal', Its Hard To 'Eat War' When I've 'Wrecked Ya Mandibles'/
You Couldn't Be On Top Of Your 'Game' If You Had Sex With Animals!!!
My Text's Great, But The Next Day We'll Be Standing At McAinus Grave'/
Cuz 'McAinus Fake', Everyone Sees Right Through Him Like 'X Rays'!!!
Pump Lead In You Till Its Spreading Through And Ya Head'll Spew/
I'll Shred X.L.G, Just Call Me "T" Cuz I'm Always A Head Of "U"!!!
McAinus Will Lose & The Rest Of Dudes Can Get Left Bruised/
Cuz X.L.G Is About As 'Real' As Kids Comin Out Of Testin Tubes!!!
Put Ya Head Through The Ceiling Dude, You're Not My Banana Clip, But I'm Still Peeling You/
Cuz Crowd Surfing Is The Only Time The People Are Feelin You!!!
This mite be 17 or 18 lines but im sure it doesnt matter!!
this thread shud b closed
i asked 4 it 2 b closed..........reign man keep the verse and i will battle u another time soon ive got a lot on at the mo
wat the fuck?????????????????
that took me fucking ages u lil faggit!!!!!!
why the fuck did u accept it and set it up u lil bastard?????????????????????
ayt mods wont close this so i cant get another battle up!!
so mcaines spit 2day or i get the win
Yo come dawg spit, No need to back out even if you have too much on. Reign*man i fuckin hate you, but your verse was good.
Mc aines get droppin a verse........
lmao at rapper_bigga!! u dont even know me dawg!!
ur a bad loser rapper_bigga!!
mcaines if u dont show up by 12.00 (gmt) im reporting it and il probably get the win
quiet fuckin freeposting dickheads!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
mcaines hurry up
mcaines u better spit and fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
Yo Reign*Man* he is typin now so calm down! ur murkin will soon be hear!
ayo reign man i just seen this shit imma start keyin and shut yo ass up.....it will b up 45 mins from now...fuck midnight 45 mins
Front on my crew and up your ass you'll find my shoe/
I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew/
Your nothing but a pussy reign,your whole attack is weak/
Im stompin on yo ass on the return to my battle peak/
In your verse you tried two get at me with your multi's/
Your better off edit and repostin cos all that shits faulty(not hittin me)/
Like ur crew textbook ur lyrics are as fake a 60s movies/
Just look at this kids record he has got his wins from battlin newbies/
I create keys like a locksmith,so you aint taking me in this bout/
Plus ya avatar looks like t.v.'s,before color came out/
Time to get X-rated and crazy,stop wishing you were xtreme/
You can’t play on my level,infact you can’t even make the girls team/
I’ll eXpose your weak eXpressions, only emotion u display is fear/
I’ll have you over and done with quicker than Se7ens TEXTBOOK career/
You couldnt surpass my style, im just that much slicker/
Your useless,You couldnt "build bars" if i provided you the liquor/
You lack sense, rambling mumbo jumbo when ur sparking/
After this battle u will be elegible for handicapped parking/
Your a little net geek,ya waste'n ya time tryin to be creative/
There is no time to debate it I suggest you find ya flow n save it/
no shut the fuck up reign man
hit this shit up wit votes
sorry explanation.....se7ens textbook career-he wasnt in the crew long....
Like ur crew textbook ur lyrics are as fake a 60s movies this is ment 2 say fake like 60s movies ............sorry ma bad 4 not postin it b4
my 2 cents
Vote=======reign man
cuz he had some punches---it flowed nice and was a bit more creative
Mc ===you had some ok shit in there---but if you woulda just came came with a few ill personals or punches u woulda Killed this kid --cuz all his shit really did was rhyme---with lil damage
so my vote--reign man for better flow and and punches
return tha Favor both====Cata_Strophix Vs Iceman
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106585
uppin number #1................................................ .................................................. ........
well...truthfully I wasn't really feelin dis battle...but in my opinion MC Aine's takes the victory. The*Reign*Man...u did have the multis and the flow in this battle but it sounded forced as hell...and Aines just had better punches and more personals. In both of your verses...sum shit was beyond whack but Aines did have the harder hittin punches and in a battle...personals and punches decide who wins...flow n multies can only take you so far.
v/- MC Aines
reign=ur structure was fucked up son the lines were to stretched out but u had nice multis and nice lines and i liked ur vocab was straight i liked the flow
ma aines= ur metas were stupid and u fed of his verse that's like one of the rules of the battles dont feed of battles but guess u didn't listen ur shit was stupid son had some punches that were like wat the hell and i didn't like it the cop shit was stupid son just being honest
vote=reign
vote on this battle please 2 close it already http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106586
upiin this shit........................................reign ma where have you got 3 votes from u had 1 before my verse was even in.................can sum 1 plz sort this out and uppin 4 votes
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......................
Fuckin Vote And Drop Ur Links 2 Yall Battles And Me And Mcaines Will Repay The Favour!!
Those People Who Already Voted I Will Vote On Ur Battles In Bout 4 Hours Cause I Gotta Go Now
all punches, volcabs, metas, an personals would got to reign, flow would go to mc acne, n reign nice serve on xlg, dawg really feelin it. 17 to 18 lines an served they whole crew nice touch. my vote mc acne, got reigned on.
VOTE: Reign.
Time to get X-rated and crazy,stop wishing you were xtreme/
You can’t play on my level,infact you can’t even make the girls team/
I’ll eXpose your weak eXpressions, only emotion u display is fear/
I’ll have you over and done with quicker than Se7ens TEXTBOOK career/
You couldnt surpass my style, im just that much slicker/
Your useless,You couldnt "build bars" if i provided you the liquor/
^^Aines this was the only hittin punches in your whole verse......everythin else looked like pretty much filler N stuff N not really hittin hard..........
REign you came with alot of flow N alot of multis....but most of the punches you came with were played N stuff......i couldn't find any quotables in ya verse really N the personals about McAnus could've been worded better i think for harder delivery........ i know u put alot of effort in it, but the thing is the concepts u came with i seen been used before and the flow was the only thing that really was keepin ya verse goin.... nice verse but freshen ya concepts a bit.......that's all....
vote Aines..
uppin 1 more vote and this is finished!!!!!!!!!!!
drop ur links and il repay the favour
iight...
im not officially in any crew... ima vote on this... you both need to elevate... here is a tip... for future reference for you both... dont write too many lines... jus stick to 10 lines each... much easier on the eye... and people dont get bored... like a did...
some good punches from both... no personals... none that a understand neway... flow was off in places from both... structure was even... close battle... both of the same level... ermmm...
vote - aines
verse was jus a little bit more complex... only reason he takes it...
props to Reign... you had a good verse... but lacked in complexity... keep elevating both of ya...
OUT
uppin keep the votes up and drop ur links and il vote on urs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
3-3!!!!!!!!!
mah vote goez 2 reign man 4 harder punches n flow..u threw up nice n hard shyt....n good flow...it waz eazy 2 read......
mc....ur shyt waz tite....but i waznt feelin it az much as i waz feelin reignz....u had good structure...but ur peronalz n punches were not datt hard..ur flow waz tite 2
punches: reign
peronalZ: reign
flow: reign
opener: mc
clozer:reign
overall: reign
yo plze return favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106822
n yo i have anoda battle but i dun got da link....culd u go 2 front linez n chek it....
mah battlez r killer emcee vs. dr.punch
n killer emcee vs. suttin dat startz wit "M"...lol
good battle
Man...
Nice little battle here.
Both slingas went for great flow and got it...
In fact, both verses kinda had nothing but at the beginning.
That and the multi's by Reign.
But the punches were soft or came in threat form...
Pretty much straight and kinda simple.
Then things really heated up towards the middle...
The both started some nice dissing...
And they both utilized wordplay and metas to do it.
So, judging became real hard because they both were ripping it.
But, McAines slowed down at the end, sort of went back to threatening...
And could have done alot better on that closer.
Reign's closer was played some, but it still had the wordplay and humor...
And he never seemed to let up throughout his verse.
Plus, he never let up on those multi's either.
Those are what gave him this very close battle.
Peace
uppin 4 da last time.............................................. .................................................. ..............
Aight battle.....
But Reign definatly took this with punches<--hit hard
He had some good multies too.. Aines had flow
But punches wins battles..
So
v/Reign
Return tha vote please it getting mad slept on..........thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106391