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rules are this since im spitting first.. you have 20 minutes to drop after i spit.. if you dont drop in 20 minutes after i drop my verse you will be automaticly branded a no show and i get the win
10 lines minimum and 20 lines max.. if you agree to these rules check in .. peace
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ok just a quick freestlye for the faggot rhymetyme
check,
dude, I'll just straight up SMASH YOUR CHIN and leave you with FRACTURED LIMBS,
SLASH YOUR SKIN, then dump you off in a hole smaller than the one sadamm got CAPTURED IN
cuz every diss that your LACIN RUDLY sends extra volts of hate RACIN THROUGH ME
so im a just scar your FACE AND TRUELY
commit more murders scenes aganist your family than JASON MOVIES
your lyrical ROUTES BAD and your getting labeled with a "SLOUCH" TAG
in this battle theres no DOUBT THAT, this verse that i send through my MOUSE PAD
will leave your MOUTH GAGGED
you must have "skipped class" during this battle cuz you've been literaly "OUTCLASSED"
keyed beyond recognition!!
This guys a smiley face, and I'm a rhyming entity
Disability? Nah, that's called Authenticity,
When you rhyme, your style fills a quarter of my capacity,
When you walk away, everyone will see the crack-of-your-ass-shitty,
What were you thinking, when you you "copied that Rhyme"
I wrote that 3 years ago in my career, the "height of mine",
So you better "start to mine", cuz this shit just about to "dart a line",
mix those rhymes with 8 parts o' water and a "part of brine",
you still cant win, even if you "start to shine"
Allright, so mr. smiley face, get "sprayed with mace",
Im just "like jase"(jason), im a killer you cant "seem to face",
when you "try to race", you get beaten like i flew "like aerospace"
You got hacked like a "computer database",
And I AM sadam hiding in your "closest marketplace",
waiting to stab you and end up with a "scarface",
So just walk away, and you wont have as much disgrace
Losses are now commonplace , with mr. smiley face
uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ...........................................
This Was the Best Battle Seen On This site By Far But M Vote Goes To ;) He Came Harder & Was More Direct With The Punches & Disses He Stayed Focused Threw Out His Whole Verse His Use Of Wordplay Was Better Etc...
Vote=:)
Can Ya'll Vote On This??....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105778
aight :)
dude, I'll just straight up SMASH YOUR CHIN and leave you with FRACTURED LIMBS,
SLASH YOUR SKIN, then dump you off in a hole smaller than the one sadamm got CAPTURED IN
Fucking lmao funny ass shit
cuz every diss that your LACIN RUDLY sends extra volts of hate RACIN THROUGH ME
so im a just scar your FACE AND TRUELY
GOOD but not like the opener
commit more murders scenes aganist your family than JASON MOVIES
your lyrical ROUTES BAD and your getting labeled with a "SLOUCH" TAG
not bad creative
in this battle theres no DOUBT THAT, this verse that i send through my MOUSE PAD
will leave your MOUTH GAGGED
you must have "skipped class" during this battle cuz you've been literaly "OUTCLASSED
strected ass fuck but still good
overall 90/100
RhymeTyme break down
This guys a smiley face, and I'm a rhyming entity
Disability? Nah, that's called Authenticity,
aight but not strong enough to be an opener
When you rhyme, your style fills a quarter of my capacity,
When you walk away, everyone will see the crack-of-your-ass-shitty,
not good wack ass fuck
What were you thinking, when you you "copied that Rhyme"
I wrote that 3 years ago in my career, the "height of mine",
good diss but next time make it complex
So you better "start to mine", cuz this shit just about to "dart a line",
mix those rhymes with 8 parts o' water and a "part of brine",
WTF?
you still cant win, even if you "start to shine"
Allright, so mr. smiley face, get "sprayed with mace",
Starting to become wack
Im just "like jase"(jason), im a killer you cant "seem to face",
when you "try to race", you get beaten like i flew "like aerospace"
good comeback that was creative
You got hacked like a "computer database",
And I AM sadam hiding in your "closest marketplace",
would be good but it is just like :)
waiting to stab you and end up with a "scarface",
So just walk away, and you wont have as much disgrace
good line but that was not a good closer
overall 85/100
good battle but RhymeTyme elevate and you will become a bad ass I will bet on it
good battle fella's
hit up my battle against vendetta
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105714
aiight cool already done that 2 to 0.. now uppin for my ko................................................ .................................................. ..........
Casuality, you didnt include my last line. Thats my closer...
Losses are now "commonplace" with mr. "Smiley face"
uppin for more votes.. come on lets get this shit over with.............................................. .................................................. ..............................
sorry about that I didnt even see the damn line
sorry man
R$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
i dont know on this one,i thought smiley cat came a little soft on this one,,i thought content was alittle elementary,but the opener was kinda cool,and ending not too bad either,but i feel rhymetyme came a bit better on this one
vote rhymetyme
damn uppin.. lets wrap this up.. drop links to your battles if you need some shit to get voted on uppin for my ko................................................ .................................................. ...........
dis is 1 dope battle and very close......rhyme tymes opener was the best on this 1, smiley face hit bk wit 1 dope line 4 a finisher. in the end tho i think :) took it as his punches hit harder and he was straight 2 the point which i like.....rhyme tyme u ad a few gd multis and if u carry on ur shore 2 elevate.....:) go hit ma battle up wit ur poll aswell now
damn i wish you could edit on these battles.. what i ment to type on that last line is "YOU MUST HAVE "SKIPPED SCHOOL" ON THIS BATTLE CUZ YOUVE BEEN LITERALLY "OUTCLASSED"
ohh well it doenst matter.. dudes still going to get ko'd uppin this shit
damn 2 more votes in this bitch............................................. .................................................. ........
damn vote niggas... the votes are 3 to 0 .................................................. .....lets hurry up and wrap this battle up
dude, I'll just straight up SMASH YOUR CHIN and leave you with FRACTURED LIMBS,
SLASH YOUR SKIN, then dump you off in a hole smaller than the one sadamm got CAPTURED IN
cuz every diss that your LACIN RUDLY sends extra volts of hate RACIN THROUGH ME
so im a just scar your FACE AND TRUELY
commit more murders scenes aganist your family than JASON MOVIES
your lyrical ROUTES BAD and your getting labeled with a "SLOUCH" TAG
in this battle theres no DOUBT THAT, this verse that i send through my MOUSE PAD
will leave your MOUTH GAGGED
you must have "skipped class" during this battle cuz you've been literaly "OUTCLASSED"
structures kinda fucked leave the caps out people can tell what ryhmes and the multis and shit i give a 16/20
This guys a smiley face, and I'm a rhyming entity
Disability? Nah, that's called Authenticity,
When you rhyme, your style fills a quarter of my capacity,
When you walk away, everyone will see the crack-of-your-ass-shitty,
What were you thinking, when you you "copied that Rhyme"
I wrote that 3 years ago in my career, the "height of mine",
So you better "start to mine", cuz this shit just about to "dart a line",
mix those rhymes with 8 parts o' water and a "part of brine",
you still cant win, even if you "start to shine"
Allright, so mr. smiley face, get "sprayed with mace",
Im just "like jase"(jason), im a killer you cant "seem to face",
when you "try to race", you get beaten like i flew "like aerospace"
You got hacked like a "computer database",
And I AM sadam hiding in your "closest marketplace",
waiting to stab you and end up with a "scarface",
So just walk away, and you wont have as much disgrace
Losses are now commonplace , with mr. smiley face
not feeling this verse as much had some weird played lines don't seperate words with - -- -- shit like that .....you had weak punches i only felt like one ...don't worry so much about multis..12/20....
hit these up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105864
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105893
aiight cool ill hit your battles up later.. im bout to bounce.. but 1 more vote.. yall.. so i can ko this dude...............................
aight yo i think that smiley wins this because his punches hit harder were better and were more consistent
he had the better overall verse and better everything
ok battle but smiley wins