checkin in....you spit first
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checkin in....you spit first
ite////25-30 linez max.......40 minutez afta chek in
no d.r
crew
prerittin
bite
recyclin
chek in..................................***********
aight den................................spit when you ready....................ill be waitin............................................ ....
look at dis bootlegged emcee so called "shawty" 770..
werent u dat bitch 1/2 off on e-bay........dat hoe??
juss cuz she got a nice uzername she think she a "shorty"
she didnt tell hurr age in hurr profile cuz she really forty!
u beatin me iz like bush findin weaponz of mass destruction
impossibe- so go n' rerite ur shyt n' put dis battle unda "construction"?!
dis battle provez dat all mcz werent created equal
u aint gonna beat me, but ill give ya a shot at anoda sequal!
mah punches swing left 2 rite...uncontrolled
u another wannab emcee dat i nocked out cold
they hit u hard, rite in da centa of ur flat chest
if u even get one vote....boy will i b impressed!!
yo im ur fatha....n srry 2 tell ya but u waz a mistake
da condom ripped....it waz "trojen" not trojan...it waz fake
it happened afta prom nite...afta i gave ur mom tongue
den it got tense....srry.....but we were desperate n young
she came bak 9 monthz lata sayin "i gave birth"
da 1st time i saw u....i swear u were hell on earth
so there, now u culd fill in ur section of :biography...
u grew up notin like me,u suk at rap,n 2 pussy 2 watch pornography....
killa emcee killz watevaz in hiz way....n now itz u...
u dun belong 2 rap...go 2 punk....listen 2 blink182
wherever u are.....take care of urself mah lil' honey
dun make da mistake i did wit ur mom,u mary sum1 wit money!
wunn.....throw up ur shyt.......no prerittin!!!!!!!!
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read da 1st line like dis....end: seven seven o..no zero..
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Killer Emcee da only thing you killed was ya own verse/
i thought you were good but i guess it coulda been a lot worse/
oh yea my mama told me about that night/
you peaked afta 30 seconds am i right?/
i also thought i would let ya kno/
when she took of ya pants she said"where did his dick go?"
you challengin me was pretty sad/
isnt it weird that a forty year old shorty is older than her "dad"/
you still talkin junk but i got you punk/
you aint good enough to be in da front seat so you ride in da trunk/
i kno youve heard of all da hell i been raisin/
kickin down doors comin in guns a blazin/
all you is is a wannabe/
but im gon tell you who im gonna be/
im da lil momma from da ATL believe me/
my rhymez will be imprinted on ya mind fo sheezy/
yo u r wayyyyyy offfff ur timeeee..........
mods itz a no-show....i get da win.........********************
itee........***************
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*******************************i accept
if you want to win dat way go ahead.....i just wanted to see what da voterz think......but whateva dawg itz all on you i guess you just wasted one of yo raps......
nah i accept...i dun wanna win like dat.....but yo.....it took u bout one hr n dat all u rote???????...w/e..........************************************
lol killer merked this kid
killer-
ur structure -8/10
ur punches -8/10
ur flow-7/10
ur personals-8/10
ur multis -7/10
metas-7/10
ATL Got merked? Yes 10/10
vote-Killer Emcee
damn i give this one to killer emcee
one atl was way short on lines
two atl was like mad late n shit
and 3 i think killer had a better verse than atl
therefore my vote goes to killer emcee
oooh...dang my fault.....i thought you said no prewrite and then i didnt see the lines min and max......my bad for not readin the rules carefully......maybe we can battle some otha time.......
uppin numba 4***************************
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killer emcee merked this dude atl wit punches creativity flow personals multis metas.....atl elevate a bit and try and meet deadline
killer emcee Easily merked this bitch it was no contest he beat him in every department!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>XLG<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
uppppinnnnnn (5)......cmon yalllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im sleepin on dis!!!!!!!!!!!*******************
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i think its pretty clear who won this one....the lack of lines certaintly didn't help i suggest you guys hit up the whackness emergency center..... both of you killer you need a couple of touch ups ......but w/e vote goes to killer nice battle to both keep elevating one............