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Produced by: Vikaden Productions
Written by: Postman
Mixing: Postman
Performed by: Postman
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i like the beat, it took a little bit till it really started but thats alright. lyrics are good nice metas, catchy chorus 2 lol, can u review mine?
Ok board so
I listen, and u sound really off in the begininng .. U kno what im talking about,"talk shit and youll end up getting ur house hit" it was a rushed bar or u stretched it out .. I dont want to rewind it so ima move on.. and when u said "Play wit my Chedder" u rushed that or said chedder funny .. "Fuck ur name,ur game,ur dame and ur chain" dog extend ur vocab and this IS a topic that has been played since 92 trust me dont be on the next mans dick do some thing original "u better move like a train or leave ur brian on the block" what? dog Dont wast beats wit simple bullshit like that..It sound to me that u like a lotta bullshit emcee's and thats the style u mimick..and whats wacker is talking about busting heat when u never have,will,Or do.. hiphop needs to be expaned not just laced wit the same bullshit topics "Money Cars Bitches and Guns" J.U.I.C.E said it best Gansta's dont rap they husle .. other words dont be a studio gansta cause thats even gayer then Textcees talk shit about audios
Now u can take that how u want ..there was No hate involed .. My advice is get off ur gassed up ego and elavate .. we all need to elavate if not then then ur headed no where
100
Thanks to EVERYONE for the feedback.
and absymol ill make sure and work on that for my next track. :thumbup:
flow was dope, hook was nice... nice quality, like the voice.... a lil to G'd up for me though... but its real nice... dope drop...
return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105456
abysmal u stupid... stop hatin, shit was on beat total frum what i could tell....
post, hook was siiick... got me "hooked"... ya know... lyrics was ya usual gangsta shit... it suit ya ass tho... str8 track overall... 1
upp this bitch
I`ve checked 4 tracks.Its not really my style but its solid enough.I liked shotgun the best .
later fam
peace
aww,forgot my link
http://www.soundclick.com/chewfuphat
^i peeped ya and dropped some feedback.. thanks
uppppppp
nice shit, i ain't really what im into, im more into the other forms of story tellin like nas!!!
the guy singin at the end was ill, an i was feelin the beat!!!
^thanks.. i think you listened to the wrong song.... but its al good.
top soil
Listenin'...
... Intro Is Low As Fuck...
Quality Is Good...
... Hook Is Coo'...
Vocals Are A Lil' Low...
... Flow Is Iight, Could Be Better...
Some Words Are Forced...
... Lyrics Are Iight...
Mic And Voice Presence Is On Point...
... How Old Are You???
You Sound A Lil' Young...
... Like 13 Or 14...
Keep It Up, Boy Boy...
... Stay Up And Strong...
- Jay-O
Nice beat ay..Hook is pretty nice..Gotta agree with Absymal though..the topic is played out as fuck...gets fucken boring to listen to like I really can't be bothered to listen to it which is why I will stop it..However, the flow, delivery and production is all of good quality so maintain all that but find some real content..pz..
LOL.. nah yungin.. im older than you.. vocals arnt low either....... good looksQuote:
Originally posted by Jay-O
Listenin'...
... Intro Is Low As Fuck...
Quality Is Good...
... Hook Is Coo'...
Vocals Are A Lil' Low...
... Flow Is Iight, Could Be Better...
Some Words Are Forced...
... Lyrics Are Iight...
Mic And Voice Presence Is On Point...
... How Old Are You???
You Sound A Lil' Young...
... Like 13 Or 14...
Keep It Up, Boy Boy...
... Stay Up And Strong...
- Jay-O
beat was nice, floh was on lock, topic is kinda played but everything else is nice... overall 7/10
I'm listenin right now...
Entrance of the beat is dope... The chorus seems pretty gutter and strong. The first dude kinda sounded like he was struggling a beat and flow was kinda shakey. Other than that, this shit is bumpin as hell. Gotta give you ya props. Lyrics were aight, but overall, this was a straight song..
Peace
^thanks.. flow was no where near shakey tho homie... you gotta check that.
I don't mean shaky as in you faulted a lot.. i just mean quite a few pauses and shit.. not that big of a deal.. it's all good homie..
you got a nice mic presense, steez is pretty tight
dont normally like the gangsta like ish, but you comin
with it.. flow could be better, but im likin the track in
general..
keep it coming
why is it when every person told u that the flow was rushed shakey or what not witch 3 other people then my self told u that u get all pissed .. u drop tracks for feed back on what u need to improve .. u get pissed cause u only wanna read people suckin u off ..
get over ur self and elavate!
nice shit.....I liked the hook........flow was on point.........rode the beat good...........lyrics was tight.........real nice rhyme strucyure.....quality was great as usual....overall real nice track
^delete that bullshit.Quote:
Originally posted by Abysmal (SoE)
why is it when every person told u that the flow was rushed shakey or what not witch 3 other people then my self told u that u get all pissed .. u drop tracks for feed back on what u need to improve .. u get pissed cause u only wanna read people suckin u off ..
get over ur self and elavate!
p.s. i aint gonna elevatin listen to wack ass rappers point out mistakes i can hear myself. i didnt get pissed... i just know you wack and the other niggas who was trying to sound smart were pretty much subpar also.. this is just a net track i dont care.. i do this shit in like 2 takes....... i dont give a fuck..... just online home shit.. i do shit offline so i dont care.. i dont need some half ass emcee pointing out little mistakes that i obviously can hear. YOU NEED ALOT MORE ELEVATIN.. Why you think niggas dont wanna collab wit you???????????????? cuz your whole crew is wack.
what .. collab wit us .. lmao
where did that come from
this site has proven to be quite horribal .. wit it DR and wack audio emcees .. well just mainly ur self and Blunt Cock slobber
or what ever his name is
we have more collabs wit more skilled emcee on one audio page then u and ur whole crew gots tracks .. and if u read ur first post u were sayin .."aint nothing worng wit my track" and now other people say somting u are like .."Its a Net Track"
U Have been sonned
thank u
^thats great now get your wackness out my thread kid.. i dont CARE what you are talking about.
track was tight.....everyone else already said the hook was dope so u know that....but i do gotta agree wit these cats, ya flow was a lil shaky at times, got a lil off beat but u came back quikk....the beat is fuckin bananas, i was feelin that shit....feelin them multi's towards tha middle of the track too....dope track, stay up...