U know the rules dawg...No crew hate and shit....and other shit yeah....blind spit.....1 hour drop afta both check in....k checkin in...................
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U know the rules dawg...No crew hate and shit....and other shit yeah....blind spit.....1 hour drop afta both check in....k checkin in...................
i'm here man, let's do his, i was waitin on this for a long time, about time the peeps get a lil southern flava and all, it's on u play boi
both are droping now........Gl..................................... .................................................. ......
check this... yo look...got nothing else to do...This should be enough 14 lines droping...
Ill spit acid at this hoe...it'll sip through his skin/
Goes into his body fluids..Starts to burn his whole muscele stims/
im a compurter virus...ill erase this bitch's whole fucking memory/
Inject a worm into his hardrive giving me all his fucking history/
damn how the hell am i going to face another lame herb?/
I beat all you bitches....and i didnt need a win to get yall served/
Shit face the facts dawg...U can never top this shit/
ur just a damn noob...U cant even type a perfected 2 line spit/
hold on a sec....ill just jump to the conclusion so he can use it/
look you cant rap dawg... just face the fucking music/
it seems like i made u quiet...So ill just read ur bio and past/
all i know is the only rhymes im hearing is Fart's From your ass/
thats it i already i just riped this kid's ass...he's fucked/
Even if he obey's the rules...he'll be Dq'ed for just showing up/
sry i'm in 2 battles already, but stay posted, we'll meet again, i'm tryin not to get banned, holla, oh b4 i forget please get on my level, please that's all i ask
no dawg.........................just post this shit...U cant make a comeback cuz i came strong dont be bullshitting me u already checked in...U can get a lose for right now
ok u want it u'll get it, what's that on ur hood nugga i shitted---i'm not a rapper, but i'll be a hacker, not on computer but on ur girl, check out my nut splatter---i'm just a lil bit badder, i make u a lil bit madder, and when i use tools, funerals are a lil bit sadder--so what's the matter, i slid my hard drive in ur girl and damn near touched her bladder, now all her friends wanna cut because of her mo-fuckin chatter---i said i'm a southern boi not a tonka toy, go to vegas get all the chips like i was employed for chips ahoy---oh boy u really done it, like my dick between ur girls eyes i know u seen me coming--now ask ur self, "what is my task, i done made him mad, i once had one, now i got 2 holes in my ass"---yeah i ripped u a new one and the sad shit about it is i've just begun---u said u smell fart well that's true cause i'm that shit, i'm a dog nigga ur the female version, put it together u lil bitch---now leave me alone and let's hope i don't get banned, if i prosper long long enough u'll soon understand the name dan da man---now run along lil sucka i guess they call u charm, see i spat bars like that and a loss is ur only harm, holla
sry about that i need another 2 line, like a fat kid told a debbie cake i'm gon make u mind---don't mind me, just work on improving ur flow, cause i throws shit and tells ya no, no, no, like mutumbo, now holla
ummm aight this was a pretty one sided battle
the prophet takes ever category in this one
everything was better and closer was a killer line
dan brought nothin and he was wack so total merking here
my vote- prophet
hit these up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105343
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105342
i took the time to vote on this so please return the favor
FLOW:TheProphet777
WURD PLAY:TheProphet777
DISSES:TIE
TheProphet777-
You won this dawg with a better overall verse, there wasnt too much to compete with anyway.
Overall-7
Dan_Da_Man-
You lost because you arent using complexety, your way to simplistic, your verse seemed to be jumbled thoughts and it just ran together. You didnt spend to much time, I can tell. Work on a flow and go steady with that.
OVERALL-5.5
~1~ battle good
peace out
VOTE=Dan_Da_Man
come on man, don't be intimidated let me get some honest votes, i don't have friends yet so that is not fair, propet ur a lil bitch for that, my shit is way tighter
^ lololol Dude just dont cry read ur verse man............................................... ................................u beat a newb on the other side...ur facing a vet...U shoould have never faced me......ur own fault...Anyways uppin first.....
shut the hell up, let the voters decide, read ur verse what the hell are u sayin, please stay in ur place
^lol......lol ur funny...dont get mad man there votes jesus deal wit it.....upppin 2..........damn 100 Characaters......
lol ..my votes goes to..lmfao...lol(wipes the tears from his eyes) it goes too...lol........prophet hands down better flow,punches,multi's does da man even know what a punch is da only decent thing you was the chips ahoy line.......lol.thanx for the laugh tho
not that great of battle.....
punches goes to proph... cuz his made some what
sense...
flow... definately proph....and structure goes to
proph as well....
Dan... work on ya punches... and structure
so
v/Proph
hit this up with an honest vote...
Right Here
upppin 3................................................. ............come on people get this battle closed............................................ .................................
kings overview
flow- prophet
structure- prophet
creativity- prophet
punches- prophet
personals- prophet
multis- ????
vote: prophet
could u plz drop an honest vote on these ones....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&pagenumber=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105342
not much needed, to figure this one out.... prophet took this, much harder punches... Dan, you need to work on hitting... and the structure was shit, add more complexity, think what ya writing... prophits complexity was alot better, same with structure. play and overall feel of the verse... more creative and enjoyable.... vote=prophet....pZ...
uppin last time.............................................. ..................................alrighty then last time.
prophet cleaned up wit this kid his punches hiot harder flow was better and his closer was dope...dd man just elevate as he murked yo ass