diverse vs. Kaos Theory

aight homie
10-12 lines
drop whenever but as soon as you check in you got 30 min.
usual rules
g'luck..peace

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Elevation's out of tha question for Diverse.. I'm even above him in tha polls
Di dropped any soccer aspirations.. cuz I already accomplished all his goals
Could win this battle.. If i responded without typing.. Herb!!.. fuck rhymes
..Diverse smart? His whole verse is based around.. RB's featured punchlines
I caught you redhanded.. Like i slit your wrist attaries.. and let them bleed
Similar to tha wild.. tha only chance of survival.. is for this wack... to feed
Its funny... Diverse can't spit Qaulity.. Even when he bites from Talib Kweli
Your no challenge.. threw him a skateboard to elevate.. he ate it trying to ollie
...I've done more than split your wig... Kid... I left your Tupae in shreds
...You know his AV describes Diverse best... He's always bobbing on heads

i'll prove kaos theory incorrect, although i'm no mathematician
a fast decision, to hand you another L with intact vast precision
c'mon just stop, your all dried up similar to blood coagulation
Ten steps above me? i'll push you down the stairs w/o hesitation
Kaos is just a theory, never been proven, that's why your losin
Call up child welfare services cuz this kids sonned and bruisin
Constructed to demolish? I'll demolish everything you constructed
Reality dissrupted like kaos, but remember you've been instructed
I'll shake your nervous system, deteriorate your Central artery
Cutting off your lifelines, now you really don't want a part of me
Ne Plus Ultra, you combine words to fit your style, rambled jargon
Just because i'm murking you doesn't mean that we can bargain

there ya go

nice spit nice spit...but even you spelled quality wrong kaos...haha....anyway let's get some votes....dope verse...

Pretty Good Battle From You Both, Diverse Had Better Personals...Matter Of Fact I Think He Is The Only One Who Had Personals Except For Kaos' Last Line And A Few Weak Ones, Diverse Also Had Better Direct Punches But Kaos Had More Wordplay But It Was All Old, Talib Kweli, Wig Line, And Opener

Opener - Diverse
Closer - Kaos
Wordplay - Kaos
Punches - Diverse
Personals - Diverse
Vocab - Tie
Enjoyment - Diverse

Vote - Diverse

Can One Of You Check My Battle Against X Ecution, All I Need Is One More For That To Be Over...Thanks

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sorry yall can't vote here, no crew votes right?


good luck to both, pz


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Kaos

Elevation's out of tha question for Diverse.. I'm even above him in tha polls
Di dropped any soccer aspirations.. cuz I already accomplished all his goals
Ok opening...
Could win this battle.. If i responded without typing.. Herb!!.. fuck rhymes
..Diverse smart? His whole verse is based around.. RB's featured punchlines
He didnt spit yet..how do u know?
I caught you redhanded.. Like i slit your wrist attaries.. and let them bleed
Similar to tha wild.. tha only chance of survival.. is for this wack... to feed
Blah
Its funny... Diverse can't spit Qaulity.. Even when he bites from Talib Kweli
Your no challenge.. threw him a skateboard to elevate.. he ate it trying to ollie
Blah x2
...I've done more than split your wig... Kid... I left your Tupae in shreds
...You know his AV describes Diverse best... He's always bobbing on heads
Good Closer

Overall You Didnt Come Very Hard At All....Seen You Come Much Harder, What Happened? Your Lines Were Also Alittle Streached Which Took Away From The Flow


Diverse

i'll prove kaos theory incorrect, although i'm no mathematician
a fast decision, to hand you another L with intact vast precision
Pretty Good opening...overload wit the multis though
c'mon just stop, your all dried up similar to blood coagulation
Ten steps above me? i'll push you down the stairs w/o hesitation
Good punch...hard hitting and complex
Kaos is just a theory, never been proven, that's why your losin
Call up child welfare services cuz this kids sonned and bruisin
Good personal and 2nd line made me laugh
Constructed to demolish? I'll demolish everything you constructed
Reality dissrupted like kaos, but remember you've been instructed
Yup Yup....you already one awhile ago
I'll shake your nervous system, deteriorate your Central artery
Cutting off your lifelines, now you really don't want a part of me
Blah...
Ne Plus Ultra, you combine words to fit your style, rambled jargon
Just because i'm murking you doesn't mean that we can bargain
Ok Closer

[B][size=4]Winner - Diverse took this...He had harder punches and better flow

I'm going against the grain here and voting for Kaos...

I think Diverse filled his rhyme with more threats and predictions than he did punches.

Good vocab though.

Kaos had the wordplay, humor, and better directed punches...

Not alot of personals (cept that really tight closer), but the punches were good nonetheless.

Not great. I'm not propping Kaos like he threw some ill shit.

Not at all..

I just think he punched and Diverse didn't.

Not as much anyway.

Don't get mad at me.

Peace

Holla back...

Need your vote!!!

thanks for the honest votes peeps...........................keep em coming............................................ ............

aight still uppin for more votes...................come on don't let this get slept on....drop a link the favor will be returned

Elevation's out of tha question for Diverse.. I'm even above him in tha polls
Di dropped any soccer aspirations.. cuz I already accomplished all his goals
played
Could win this battle.. If i responded without typing.. Herb!!.. fuck rhymes
..Diverse smart? His whole verse is based around.. RB's featured punchlines
if it was true it would work but its not so blah fucka fake personal
I caught you redhanded.. Like i slit your wrist attaries.. and let them bleed
Similar to tha wild.. tha only chance of survival.. is for this wack... to feed
not feeling it
Its funny... Diverse can't spit Qaulity.. Even when he bites from Talib Kweli
Your no challenge.. threw him a skateboard to elevate.. he ate it trying to ollie
hmmm better
...I've done more than split your wig... Kid... I left your Tupae in shreds
...You know his AV describes Diverse best... He's always bobbing on heads
best bar decent punch...good job



i'll prove kaos theory incorrect, although i'm no mathematician
a fast decision, to hand you another L with intact vast precision
not a punch
c'mon just stop, your all dried up similar to blood coagulation
Ten steps above me? i'll push you down the stairs w/o hesitation
not a punch
Kaos is just a theory, never been proven, that's why your losin
Call up child welfare services cuz this kids sonned and bruisin
decent
Constructed to demolish? I'll demolish everything you constructed
Reality dissrupted like kaos, but remember you've been instructed
not feeling it
I'll shake your nervous system, deteriorate your Central artery
Cutting off your lifelines, now you really don't want a part of me
decent personal
Ne Plus Ultra, you combine words to fit your style, rambled jargon
Just because i'm murking you doesn't mean that we can bargain
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well i broke it down this battle was all filler except for a few bars

diverse had two good bars and kaos had only one

vote diverse

who wants to vote to finish this battle out? c'mon, honest votes please

Breakdown:

punches - tie
personals - diverse
flow - tie
multies - diverse
complexity - diverse
creativity - diverse
opener - kaos
closer - kaos

OVERALL - diverse

Diverse - you forgot to poll on my battle and kaos....can you vote on it please?

Vote gone... these type are disallowed... and especially because of that lil comment at the end.
-Axe

And why wont it let me poll on this battle?

hmm...are you registered? you should be huh....well mods need to update the polls it should be 4-1 right now

Opener - Diverse (included a personal and Kaos' was played)
Closer - Kaos (included a personal and hit harder than Diverse's)
Wordplay - Kaos (included much more than Diverse's verse did)
Punches - Diverse (less played and hit harder and more consistent)
Personals - Diverse (Kaos' verse was lacking this category, this is the battle decider)
Vocab - Tie (Diverse's was better but Kaos' was more terse)
Win - Diverse (the personals did it for me)

Won't let me poll either

Diverse took this battle...his punches were harder hitting and his flowed better...kaos' verse was ok, had a couple of nice punches in there but wasn't enuff to take this...diverse gets my vote, not by much tho

vote-Diverse

and i'll edit tha polls for u

nevermind...shit won't let me...i don't like this new layout or wuteva it's called much lol

uppin this for them...

uppin for more votes to finish this battle off...c'mon don't let this get slept on, drop a link and an honest vote will be returned

this was a good battle....

Kaos - good punches, the closer was the clincher for that verse... nailed his avy no doubt. laughed at that one... but I also liked the skateboard/ollie punch, shit was funny... well-rounded verse. good drop. only piece of advice - more personals. other than that it was dope

Diverse - hot drop... good punches, good use of his status description (ten steps ahead...) like the child-welfare punch. another great verse, this battle was close. only advice - ease up on the multi's - they're nice but not necessary to force them in a battle since they don't count for shit without the proper punch to go with it... but still good verse

Diverse you're in Lethal right? so I can't vote on this battle, so I will keep the verdict to myself cuz I don't want to sway, but wanted to drop some input for both of you. good job, worth reading

pz

After I removed all invalid votes the poll is now 4-1 in Diverse's favor.

Carry on.

Both have 3 more ups.

alright well i guess we're still lookin for votes so lets get this battle finished off...

somebody drop votes to finish this battle and leave your link, an honest vote will be returned

Elevation's out of tha question for Diverse.. I'm even above him in tha polls
Di dropped any soccer aspirations.. cuz I already accomplished all his goals
(str8 stupid)
Could win this battle.. If i responded without typing.. Herb!!.. fuck rhymes
..Diverse smart? His whole verse is based around.. RB's featured punchlines
(pretty nice ---decent punch)
I caught you redhanded.. Like i slit your wrist attaries.. and let them bleed
Similar to tha wild.. tha only chance of survival.. is for this wack... to feed
(wtf is this baout)Garbage
Its funny... Diverse can't spit Qaulity.. Even when he bites from Talib Kweli
Your no challenge.. threw him a skateboard to elevate.. he ate it trying to ollie
(damn DAwg wtf happend 2 you-----you used toi be somewhat ill)
...I've done more than split your wig... Kid... I left your Tupae in shreds
...You know his AV describes Diverse best... He's always bobbing on heads
(That was alteast a decent closer)
VERY VERY VEry WEAK verse by you dawg u can do better)



i'll prove kaos theory incorrect, although i'm no mathematician
a fast decision, to hand you another L with intact vast precision
(nice vocab but nothin really thrown here just multis)
c'mon just stop, your all dried up similar to blood coagulation
Ten steps above me? i'll push you down the stairs w/o hesitation
(LOL shit made me laugh) nice
Kaos is just a theory, never been proven, that's why your losin
Call up child welfare services cuz this kids sonned and bruisin
(this coulda been alot better but its OK)
Constructed to demolish? I'll demolish everything you constructed
Reality dissrupted like kaos, but remember you've been instructed
(if this is something personal---its nice--if not it started good then FILLER)
I'll shake your nervous system, deteriorate your Central artery
Cutting off your lifelines, now you really don't want a part of me
Nice vocab and flow in this one)) nice
Ne Plus Ultra, you combine words to fit your style, rambled jargon
Just because i'm murking you doesn't mean that we can bargain
WAck ))))))))))))

vote Diverse cuz he had SOME nice shit in there

Kaos u need 2 read ya old shit and see what ya doin wrong